arhi ss new 'Without you' chap 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys. this is my first shot at writing. i hope you enjoy. ty



Prologue

I try to open my eyes but my body refuses to obey me. I try to check if my wife is okay but I cant.

I can hear the ambulance coming.

I can hear people around me.

I can feel being lifted by someone but by whom I don't know.

I hear a man say "Doesn't look good...blood..nothing we can do..unlikely..survive.."

I can forget that she no longer loves me. I can forget that she want a divorce but I can't loose her

I shut my mind. I can bear to think of my life without her.

My Khushi was my life. I could not survive without her.

And then I loose consciousness




chapter 1: below

chapter 2: below

chapter 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69257672

chapter 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69285671

will continue if i get a good response.

criticism in any form is more than welcome

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting...continue soon n pm me when u update next...
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Chapter 1

"She is coming out of it" said a voice I didn't recognise.

I open my eyes to unfamiliar surroundings. A handsome doctor and a motherly nurse are looking down at me with concern.

"Hello Mrs Raizada. My name is Dr. Rahul Malhotra. How are you feeling?"

"Like I have been hit by a truck" I mutter.

"Well your car certainly was!" said Rahul trying to lighten up the mood.

Then it all comes crashing back to me.

The trip, the fight, the accident..

"Is my baby ok?" i ask restlessly.

The kind doctor immediately says "Don't worry Mrs Raizada. The baby is fine."

"devi may aka shookar hai" (thank god"

"Unfortunately, you're spotting. The good news is that there is no amniotic fluid in the blood. However, the amniotic sac has disengaged from the wall of your womb in one place. We'll do everything we can to save the baby, but the next seventy-two hours are going to be critical. You must remain in this bed and stay calm."

I take time to take all this is in.

Then I realise my husband is nowhere to be seen.

I know he doesn't love me but doesn't he care about this baby? I thought he would be here waiting near my bedside unless'.

"Where is my husband?" I ask.

I think to myself "pls let him be alright"

The doctor then says, "Your husband is the room down the hall. His vitals are looking good but he hasn't come around yet'.."

"He is in coma?"

"Yes he is."

I shut my eyes. I can't live without him.

"Will he come out of it?"

"its not possible to say. But the indications are good."

I breathe a sigh of relief.

"can I see him?"

"Not just yet. As I said before, moving you would be detrimental to your pregnancy. You must remain here."

"How can I stay here while Arnav is in a coma in another room?"

She struggled to sit up.

He pressed gently against her shoulders, putting a halt to her feeble efforts.

"Your husband will continue to live without you by his side, but, if you attempt to go to him, your baby might not. When he wakes up, we will bring him to you."

She feebly attempts once more "please doctor"

He shakes his head and says" you must remain calm. Your baby need to rest."

I try to stay calm but my mind is anything but calm.

How can I relax when the very being on my existence is fighting for his life?

I may have asked for a divorce but it does not mean i don't love him.

He is my love. Without him I'm nothing.

Edited by izzy0502 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both of them love each other..then y did she ask for divorce? and she thinks he doesnt care for her...nice one..got me hooked...update soon...
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CHAPTER 2

The sun is shining. Khushi wake up to a bright sunny day and sees a familiar face seating on the chair beside me who is staring into the unknown.

"Nani'." I cried out.

"Khushi bitiya. How are you feeling now? You don't know how worried I was when I got the news."

"I am fine now Nani. How is Arnav?" I ask.

Nani gets a little tensed. She was just about to answer when Payal enters the room.

"Khushi dear, how are you feeling? Are you alright?"

"Yes Payal I'm fine'"

"Good. Thank god. Even Arnavji is up know" she says. The relief was clearly visible in her voice.

"I want to see him Payal. Can u take me to him?"

Just then Aakash enters.

"I take you there bhabhi."

Both Payal and aakash support Khushi as they make their way toward Arnav's room.

Khushi enters the room to see Arnav laying on the bed. She is about to go near him but stop when she sees whose hand he is holding.

"What is she doing here?" she asks sternly.

Lavanya leaves Arnav's hand and is about to speak when Arnav speaks up "who the hell are you to question her?"

Khushi is tensed hearing this. She knows that even though Arnav doesn't love her he won't ever speak to her like that in front of their family.

Arnav look at his brother supporting a unknown woman in his arms.

"What is this Aakash? I don't think any other woman than Payal is allowed to cling to as she is.."

Khushi was about to speak when Arnav replies "please can you leave this room. It's for family only"

Khushi was very hurt but decided that she better leave. Just when she was about to leave she heard Arnav ask Nani "who is she Nani?"

"He doesn't remember me? Khushi mutters before fainting.


sorry its so short

Edited by izzy0502 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OHH NOOO, Arnav Does Not Remember His Khushi :(
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(I forgot to mention that only Khushi and Arnav know that she is pregnant. Khushi requested the doctor not to tell any of her family members about it as she didn't want to worry them)




CHAPTER 3

"How are you feeling Mrs Raizada?' asks Dr Malhotra as he sees Khushi open her eyes.

Khushi ignores his question and asks "how can he not remember me doctor?"

"Mrs Raizada I need you to remain calm. For the sake of your baby you must remain calm."

Khushi takes a deep breath and tries to calm herself down.

The doctor continues, "I'm afraid your husband is suffering from partial memory loss. Confusion and a temporary loss of memory are not uncommon side effects with a head injury like he sustained in the accident."

"So how long will it take for him to remember me doctor?"

"We don't know Mrs Raizada."

"Can I please meet him?" Khushi asked in a pleading voice

"I'm sorry Mrs Raizada, but when Mr Raizada was told that you were his wife he refused to believe it. I suggest you give him some space. He might be too overwhelmed if everything is spun at him in one go. For now please take of yourself Mrs Raizada"

"Doctor I…." Khushi didn't know what to say.

"Mrs Raizada your vitals are looking good and your pregnancy is stable so I think you can be discharged by tomorrow. But you have to promise me that you will take care of yourself. You have to eat, sleep, and drink on time. You mustn't get stressed. Believe in god. Everything will be alright soon."

"Thank you, doctor."

"I leave you then Mrs Raizada. Your family is very eager to meet you. Please take care. I see you later."

Soon after the doctor left the whole Raizada clan entered her room.

Nani spoke "Khushi bitiya, how are you feeling now?"

Payal spoke" Khushi you don't know how scared we were when you fainted right in front of us."

Khushi tried to smile and assure them of her wellbeing but the only thing on her mind was arnav.

"How is Arnav?" she croaked out.

Nani couldn't control herself.

Anjali gripped her husband's hand tightly and started to shed her tears silently.

Aakash told her "bhabhi he is good now. He is improving as we speak."

Khushi was glad that Arnav was getting well.

"Does he take his medicines properly? Does he eat properly?" she asked in a concerned voice.

"Yes. Yes Khushi. We are taking good care of him. I don't want you to worry. I just want you to get well soon." Said Anjali

Nani who was sitting beside Khushi said "bitiya I am so sorry. I don't know why this happened to you. Hopefully god will make everything proper soon"

Khushi couldn't answer. She could simply nod.

She tried to keep up with the conversation around her but her mind was on someone else. Someone who was lying on his bed in the room across the hall, trying to remember.

He was getting restless.

He felt like the world is playing a game on him.

He wanted to remember something, anything about her but he couldn't.

He could see that she was not his type.

He could not picture himself with a girl like her.

She looked far too innocent.

He wondered how their marriage was.

How did they meet?

Did they love each other?

Were they happy together?

Just then Lavanya entered his room.

She tried to engage him in a conversation but all he could think about was her.

He abruptly asked her "how was my marriage to Khushi? Were we happy?"

He could see that Lavanya looked nervous. She said "look ASR you are supposed to regain you memory on your own but I will tell you that she trapped you into a marriage you didn't want"

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wat trapped in d marriage...!!!
Arghhh
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good story..but updates are very small...again u update frequently so that also can be neglected...about the updates..getting better and better ...
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CHAPTER 4


It had been a week since Khushi was discharged.

She wanted to meet Arnav so badly. But she knew that Arnav wouldn't welcome her presence.

She regularly kept tabs on him through his family members. She made sure someone made him have his tablets, his food etc on time.

Arnav was going to be discharged today. She was eager to meet him but somewhere in her mind she was scared.

She got up bright and early. She completed her daily routine.

She was wearing a red saree and significance was not lost on her.

Aakash was to accompany her to the hospital to collect Arnav.

Went she reached Arnav's room she saw that he was dressed in a pair of jeans and a white shirt. He looked like a greek god.

Khushi still felt awed by him even though they had known each other for all most three months.

He was sitting on the bed busily typing on his blackberry.

He sensed her presence and looked up.

They both continued to stare it each other forgetting about everything else in the world

That's when Arnav remembered Lavanya's word.

His mood completely changed.

"Are you going to stare me the whole time or shall we get going?" he asked clearly showing his irritation.

"Yes. Yes we are going."

Saying that she went to pack his bag.

Just then the nurse entered with a wheelchair.

"Sir please sit on the wheelchair." Said the nurse

"Me sit on a wheelchair? Have you lost it? I'm perfectly fine to walk on my own." He roared

"Please sir. It's our hospital policy that the patient must be escorted out of the hospital in a wheel chair."

"Fine escort in me in the wheel chair. But I won't sit on it."

The nurse who was tending to Arnav for the whole of last week knew that there was no point arguing.

Just then Khushi came near the door with his bag in her hand gesturing towards the door.

He nodded and followed her.

When they were waiting for the lift to come Dr Malhotra arrived there.

"Mrs Raizada. How are you feeling today? Must say you are looking good now. I can see that you are taking proper rest now."

"Yes doctor. I'm feeling good now. I promised you that I will take care of myself nah?" Khushi replied with her signature smile on her face.

Seeing her smile Arnav was mesmerised. But then he remembered who his 'wife' was smiling at.

He gave a sharp annoyed look.

She continued to talk to dr Malhotra ignoring the looks Arnav was giving her.

When the lift arrived Arnav spoke "shall we go now and do you need to talk more?"

She looked embarrassed as she said a quick goodbye to Dr Malhotra.

Aakash was waiting for them at the main entrance.

Arnav sat in the front while Khushi sat at the back.

The moment they entered the car, Arnav bombarded aakash with questions regarding work.

He completely ignored Khushi.

Aakash tried to change the subject but Arnav was adamant.

When they reached home, Anjali came forward with the pooja ki thaali.

"Di you know I believe in it nah? Please stop it."

"I know you don't believe in god chote but the people who care about you believe in god nah. Please let us thank god for keeping you and Khushi safe."

Arnav let Anjali do the aarti. His reluctance was visible but ignored.

The moment he entered the house he declared, "I'm going to my room."

He made his way to his room.

When he saw the state of his room he was utterly shocked.

There were starts hanging from the ceiling.

The bed sheet was pink in colour with some floral design on it.

His dresser which was usually spotless was cover with all the paraphernalia a woman required.

The walls were covered with photographs.

He saw a picture of himself and Khushi. They both were staring into each other's eyes. Unaware of the camera clicking the beautiful moment. They both looked happy.

Just then Khushi entered the room.

"Why don't you freshen'." She started.

Arnav interrupted her.

"I don't share my room with anyone. I won't share my room with you." He roared

Edited by izzy0502 - 12 years ago

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