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@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

AWESOME concept !!! loved both the parts... khushi the revolutionary and arnav a mafia head... very nice idea... waiting to read more... would love to receive pms of this interesting FF... HAPPY WRITING !!! 😊

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@the_notebook

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I love this FF sooo muchhhie muchhh

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: tinsel
It's good to see that Khushi is emotionally very strong.What ASR did to the innocent boy shouldn't of happened,it was ASR's orders to give a beating to Khushi in the first place? I hope Khushi survives the ordeal and comes out Alive.
Fabulous update.👍🏼

Hey,

thanks for liking the upd.

This Khushi is a tough girl but also fragile as you'll see in next chappy that will be soon pakka😛

About the killing, I'm thinking to write down ASR's POV (not a promise, but let see if I manage to write something nice). But he didn't give orders to beat Khushi...he told na Don't touch the girl...he wanted that the name comes out😊.

She won't die, this is a pakka vaada😆

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: selcouth-names
Thank you for writing this piece of story.
Cos i was super messed up with the off screen drama and everything.

Was disappointed in the way things were handled. So had to take my mind off it.

And i found your story.

Khushi is strong, man. I couldn't believe that she got beaten up. But to kill off the guy who beat her was extreme. And we know about our Mahaan khushi. The soul who always looks out for the others before her. ASR is mighty cruel here. But it makes me more interested to see how the story unfolds. 😊

Hey buddy,

thanks to you for liking it...I'm also upset because of the off scenario that is happening here.

Our Khushi has been beaten up but ASR killed that men (when he got angry, God save you😆).

Khushi is a free spirit, who thinks about others rather than herself and you'll catch this side of her character once again😉.

will upd soon pakka ji😊

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

@GodnMe.Foreva :

thanks for liking the promo and as well as the FF XD

@mollycoddle:

thankuuu ji..I'm really happy that you liked ji...will continue soon

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: pup03
AWESOME concept !!! loved both the parts... khushi the revolutionary and arnav a mafia head... very nice idea... waiting to read more... would love to receive pms of this interesting FF... HAPPY WRITING !!! 😊

OH god, thanks for liking and reading both the chappy.

If you want to receive the PM, add in your BL, the ID DugguEdwardKMH and you'll receive the PM.😃

thanks again