ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136

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rush007

@rush007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Hi parm, the story is superbly written quite different. I hope u update the story soon.

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Thanks a lot buddy...Means a lot for me and will upd as soon as possible ji XD

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

PROMO

- Kill me, then-I whispered - kill me as you killed that guy -

- You do not know what you say-he snapped, looking at me with hatred.

- Yes, I know-I said - what was the name of that guy? Because he had a name, right? And a family, a home, friends, maybe he was also in love ... thou you torn away him from all this.

He looked away, but in his eyes I saw a blind rage, a rage that I had never seen his face.

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Attention Khushi 😆

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

loved it loved it loved it

thanks for the PM

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7537M

@7537M

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

loved it
oasm
update soon😃

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

@bea, 7537M,faree:

Thanks a lot for liking it...will upd asap :)

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

It's good to see that Khushi is emotionally very strong.What ASR did to the innocent boy shouldn't of happened,it was ASR's orders to give a beating to Khushi in the first place? I hope Khushi survives the ordeal and comes out Alive.

Fabulous update.👍🏼

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Thank you for writing this piece of story.

Cos i was super messed up with the off screen drama and everything.

Was disappointed in the way things were handled. So had to take my mind off it.

And i found your story.

Khushi is strong, man. I couldn't believe that she got beaten up. But to kill off the guy who beat her was extreme. And we know about our Mahaan khushi. The soul who always looks out for the others before her. ASR is mighty cruel here. But it makes me more interested to see how the story unfolds. 😊