Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Arjun-Roshni marriage ceremony is very cute 😉
Shree is so scared of Arjun that he returns the shoes without taking money..!!!kya yaar shree 😆

OMG Shree proposed Sharmistha through E-mail...!!!yeh sunke main hasun 🤣 ya shock mode pe chali jayun 😲 samajh nehi aa raha hai 😆 only Shree can do this in this whole world I guess 😉

Purva now truly hats off to you dear 👍🏼 how you are managing to write this from Shree's POV thats too keeping suspence in between I am totaly loving this 😃
thanks for this beautiful update & thanks for the pm 😊

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Dear TPurva,

Very, very nice going.

Apart from the TV visuals that one can conjure up for the Arjun-Roshni wedding, - and Shree's ruining the joote churana - what delighted me was the bumbling way in which Shree handles his courtship of Sharmistha, and how he searches, confusedly, for the meaning of the unaccustomed feelings he is experiencing.

"Whenever rathore sir, gives a case, I always pray, in some corner my heart, that my duty should b with her. My heart parties if she is there with me for a case" is so sweetly and so truly expressed, and :"I held her hand, n then said d Not-so magical words:"Haila Arjun sir". Sharmishtha was shocked . She luked backward n I ran from d place, before arjun sir would have seen me. I was hiding from him behind a pillar" is side-splitting..

Now of course you will have to move on to a case, and I am looking forward to that. Keep it up! I am sure you won't forget that you cannot write anything that Shree could not have seen or heard or been told.

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 4:

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: shrutisweety
kya baat hai tani
roshni and arjun marriage was wounderful
it was awsome update
continue soon

Thanks for liking d part shruti dear

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Arjun-Roshni shaadi from Shree's point of view was cute...

funny cute romance for Shree...his proposal was unique...emailing a love proposal...only he can do it...WOW...sweet!
nice one...update soon!

thanks for liking d chapter ,...

Glad u like d different way of proposal

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Great...

Thanks for liking d part Radhika dear

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: aroojarain
nice update...:) continue soon...:)

Thanks for liking d part dear

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: prava55663
loved shree and sharmistha...shree proposed with the help of gadget...that was cool...

nice update...waiting for ria's entry..

Thanks for liking d part Prava

Stay tuned to know how she died

Ria's entry in next part ..pakka 😊

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Love Arjun's and roshni's marriage ... It was so cute ... Poor shree he is so hell scared of Arjun ... :)
Lol I guess shree is the only person who would propose a girl by an email ...
Plz update soon :)

Thanks for liking d marriage scenes,,,,i tried making it a bit comic ..as Shree was narrator

i m glad u liked it

Shree proposal was a bit hatke...i feared how u people will react to it ...but i m glad

u people liked it

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Leki
Shree's diary s intresting to ready cute... Arjun's nd roshni's marriage ws really nice... nd Shree proposed her through mail omg dis guy...

Thanks for liking d part dear

i m glad u liked Shree's proposal

Stay tuned to know how she died