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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Hey ...

That was amazing ...

Awww roshni died ... :(

But Riya came back as an angel ... :)

Awww Arjun met Roshni the same way he did wih Riya ... But poor Riya Arjun is scolding her a lot... :(

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

My dear Purva,

It is going well, and I see that you are keeping it close to the screen version, if not exactly the same. You are also managing to stick to the rules for a first person narrative quite well, which is usually rather difficult; you have not slipped up even once!

Best of luck for the rest of the story!

Shyamala Aunty

~~~Chapter 5~~~

6 August 2010,

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

@Radhika, @kunchu, @pihu_angad: thank u so much for d precious comments ...

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

@Gurmeet4Drshti, @Prava: thanks for d beautiful comments

Yes in my story Ria wud b clossely like Roshni ..n dat wud b d reason y arjun wud maintain a distance ..but Whether he will accept her in his life is STILL A QUESTIOn

wait for diary to unfold

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: sashashyam
My dear Purva,

It is going well, and I see that you are keeping it close to the screen version, if not exactly the same. You are also managing to stick to the rules for a first person narrative quite well, which is usually rather difficult; you have not slipped up even once!

Best of luck for the rest of the story!

Shyamala Aunty

Thank u so much Aunty ...

My v/s s similar to orginal show but dere wud b sum cases in future , which r differnt

besides dis : i m glad u liked first person narration

Actually i always wanted to try my hand n frst person narration , (as i thot i was not gud in it)

U made my day ...sayng u liked d concept😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Amazing part dear...

felt that i was watching those scenes again..

Roshni's part was tragic...and who is this V??? mysterious character, huh?? update soon...

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Amazing part dear...
felt that i was watching those scenes again..
Roshni's part was tragic...and who is this V??? mysterious character, huh?? update soon...

He s my version of Sikander ...but later disclose d reason behind using V...

Thanks for liking t

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: tani23

He s my version of Sikander ...but later disclose d reason behind using V...

Thanks for liking t

ohhh ok ok...humaari beech ke secret...ok shhh 😉

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

ohhh ok ok...humaari beech ke secret...ok shhh 😉

Yup ...dun tell d secret to ny1 😆..

Sshhh...

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

wow yaar..ye shree wala POV to boht mast lag rha hai 😊

so megha is rathore's secrer love 😉

sharmishtha in US
roshni death has seriously affected arjun's relationship wid rathore and megha!!

yayyy entry of riya 👏

arjun had a same encountr wid roshni to in office room!!!
both thought him as thief 😛
dil chor 😃

contunue soon 👍🏼

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago