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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: surprising

what type of elaboration do u want???😊



the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
sorry...us ke liye 23-24th tak wait karna padega😊...but if u want some more hints, i can😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nhi re wait kar lungi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: aru_86

nhi re wait kar lungi..

aap ne sochi hogi wo complicated writer aur hints degi, to aur bhi bahoot saaare confusion hazir ho jayega!!!!!!!!!😕😕😕
to waiting is better😉 hay na??????😆
Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Amazing updt surprising👍🏼!
By the way, whats ur name?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: surprising

PART-1 1st Chapter

WHO AM I: A THUNDERSTORM OR A DAFFODIL??
An unperishable entity full of stregth likely to be unbeaten...
-Who is He??
He is NONE OTHER THAN ME.
Mind is perfumed with affection & generosity...
Physical power leads to extremity...
He who dares to fight with me must be completely destroyed.
...I reach my expected victory over any condition-
because I'm able to devastate everything...
Whenever one appears against me...
I gain the powerful essence of Bhima & Arjuna:
no matter either it is a common field or a original battle field.
BLESS ME WITH FULL HEART...
HOPE FOR THE BEST.
I'LL BE THE ULTIMATE WINNER...
-the above words seem totally unknown? or a bit familiar?? - that was...yes that WAS about me.
...I was a king, not only a king but also the 1st emperor of Undivided India,the eternal dream of my Acharya. Recognise me??
I'm...actually was...no...still I AM CHANDRAGUPTA MOURYA.
Yes. Still I am...but in a very few days I will be the the clay. I know it's not fair to think about myself while I'm doing yoga-the last yoga of my life.
My all well-wishers, family members even my diamond-heart acharya too, did not want to lose me!! Ah...it's the sweetest feeling...my acharya who never expressed his feeling to anybody,had a drop of tear when I left him!!! My heart...my heart was not made of stone...I was emotional enough. One drop of tear attracted me again. I then wanted to retern to my Guru...I wanted to feel father's true love which I couldn't achieve in my entire lifespan.
...but Acharya was unique- he was, he is & as well as he will be. With a pleasant yearning in his eyes he murmured- 'pain: the winner'.


amazing honey.you really captured the emotions of cgm.😊

ah why didn't you make him think about mihika?😉

well you know me and many members were chandrika fans.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: surprising

PART-2 First-Middle Chapter

Dreams:Lead To What- DIRECTED BONDING or BROKEN AFFECTION??
...But acharya was unique- he is, he was & he will be.Despite living with him more than 30 years, I couldn't properly recognise him! When I was ready to change my decision of death due to starvation just for that tear-drop appeared in my acharya's eye...he himself stopped me! with a pleasant yearning in his eyes, he murmured,'Pain: the winner'...then firmly stated-'if you finalise your decision, leave all the fascination. Go ahead. Please go ahead. Don't look at the past.'
Just past!! You're my past, present & future- I'm made of you acharya- you're my entire world. I find my GOD in you...
But these words couldn't reach my lips; they're roaming about my heart.Ohh...my emotional heart, don't cry such loudly. Though none can hear the sound...it'll make me brust into tears.Control yourself my wounded heart- very soon you'll find the real peace.
Real peace?? Huh...what is called real peace??...the tormenting language of Nandini's eyes...
''It's neither the feeling to achieve you fully...
...nor the unhappy sense to lose you...
I know you're not with me,
but...I can't help blowing with this undescribable sentiment...
You begin my day,
You end it half-willingly, half-reluctantly!
With your touch- every second of my life comes alive...
Because you're...unique.
When I get lost in your eyes,
I feel the heaven in your arms-
...I anchor the shore of my dreamland...
...I turn to a NIL ENTITY...
I've nothing to stop my heart...''
-That magnetic eyes- the untold words of the eyes," it's neither the feeling to achieve you..." fascinated me once upon a time. But what was the result??...everything was ACTING...A VERY GOOD ACTING...After Durdhara's demise when I was broken, daughter of Dhanand...her comfortable care...& the mind-blowing eyesight...used to sooth me even for a moment. Fate, that night...I was ready to tie the knot of husband-wife's relation with Nandini,...her actual purpose was revealed.
...She was determined to take a powerful revenge for her father's death...she was the chief spy of Amatya Rakhas!!...the wedding night...turned too heart-wretching...
That very moment I removed her transparent veil ...,a sharp knife hurt me with all its strength within a fraction of second...Just then a man appeared before me...my almost unconscious brain was astonised!!...the man...the man...
...Let those painful episodes get closed.Isn't there any person who never hurt me??- Acharya?
No, I'm so so unfortunate. Acharya was so much protective about me...but his rigid care & hidden affection caused a great loss...sighing...
"You're my first friend
I'm the shore of your heart, you even are unaware of it!
You're my path-finder
You're the best shelter...
God portrays you because...
In his absence on earth
You fulfil his duties with so much care & affection."
-The quotes were really the reflection of my thought about Acharya. But...one day his few words made me speechless-"I'm responsible for the COMPANIONLESS MOON."
...Who was the companionless moon??
He narrated whole story...I felt as if someone snatched the ground under my feet...



hmm compassionless moon?
something fishy?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
update chapter 3 soon and do pm me.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
@lucykaede: page 4 me hay A LITTLE GLIMPSE ON NEXT CHAPTER
...Kuch guess karo na😉
...COMPANIONLESS MOON- hmm...thora sa suspense to hay😳
@chand1234: I'm Rumpu.
Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hmm...finally i read ur ff...its really unique n awsm...i cud imagine Ashish ji n ur story...ur style of writing is also different...good going... :) waiting for next...

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