Start of something beautiful#Dil Se#pt7&8pg100&113 - Page 59

Awesome update
Finally rey understand the value of money n kria too
Waiting for next part

awesome update...

main bol rhi hun...

it was really beautiful
the best part of this story is that
it is very simple yet very much impressive
keep it up
there is s suggestion i think u should start writing a novel
honestly it would be one of the best seller
think about it
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GOOD WORK YAAR
KEEP IT UP
AND REMEMBER TO PM ME

Deetha.. U dun evn hav a slightest idea abt how much u'v made me happy by ur update.. I jus loved it..
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As u know.. Since d begin.. I was on on speakin bad abt Reyaansh fr his behaviour attitude ego n wht nt.. As I really dun lik speakin bd abt Reyaansh.. Finally I'v some gud things to say fr him.. FINALLY!

M lovin hw u takin dis story forward.. Perfect timin fr evrythn.. N m too enjoyn as many othrs readin dis ss.. This one surely is a master piece of urs along wid baatcutter n second love.. I love readin dem all!!

So Reyaansh is missin d old kriya who use to b by his side evrytime he needed somethn.. He evn frownd when he noticed she's ignorin him..It evn pained his heart when he realised kriya's makin distance wid him.. Yay yay.. Unknowninly.. Reyaansh has strtd fallin fr hr bt d bst thing is.. He hasnt realised it yt! So it wud b fun to c how wud he realise his feelins fr hr :)

So alas.. Reyaansh knows tht kriya now knows english tht too really well.. N I jus loved d reaction which he gav.. I was all rofl ing... As I cud picturise it all!!

Haha.. Loved it.. N d way kriya snapoed bk at him.. Was jumpin at my place.. Hahahaha..
Written beautifully..
Plz han.. Iss ss ko jldi end na krna.. Plz..

Awww dat was cho chweet...

Hmmm rey ko akal ane laga hai...sab shock hogaya

Ek aur shock baki hai jab kria dance karegi...

Loved it

Kal tak wait karna hai...mumma...mujhse nahi hoga

Luved the update di.. Aap jaldi doosra update bhi Dedo ...!!!

Haha.. M here once agn..!!
I agn loved d part.. Gosh.. I really feel bd fr kriya.. When wud she get her part of love bt atleast nw she aint gtn dat ignorance n rudeness frm her husband.. Glad!!

Haha.. Reyaansh is tryn to mk an omlete fr himself tht too in a perfect round.. Haha 😆 😆
I loved how kriya barkd on him makin him go in shock n evn lovd how he snapped bk wid his oh so cute pout 😳

O my my.. Sm1 is missin someone's attention n is goin mad widout it.. Naice!!
Reyaansh felt happy when kriya served him a glass of water!
Dat big effect if such small thing han..

Awww.. Kriya is a sweetheart.. Reyansh got d perfumes fr himself irrespective of d fact bt kriya agn compromised wid her needs(bt here,she's happy doin it).. N alas.. Reyaansh realises tht he has fone a blunder.. Bt yet agn kriya savd him..!!

M lovin dis innocent Reyaansh.. When he said.. Tmne phle kyn nhi btaya.. She glared him n he continued.. K btaya bt maine nhi suna ab kya... N when kriya told him abt d cost thing of pizza.. He said.. Really??????? Mai toh vai dead Reyaansh ka cuteness dkh k.. Hayeee 😳

One lil kriyaansh moment 😊

Finally.. Reyaansh hs strtd respectin kriya.. Rather understandin kriya!!

Dis USA ka venture is amazin..

O so.. He doesnt knows abt kriya's dancin talent.. Wonder.. Wht impact wid it leave on him when he wud com to know abt it.. It surely wud bring dem close... :D

Waitin fr d nxt part.. Update real soon :)
Brilliantly written ...