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Posted: 12 years ago
okay chalo aaj ka update...diwali hai isiliye big one ye wo mat kehna...kk???

go with the update!!!!!!

suggestion: plz play dil se in bg...open page one




she stirred in sleep!!!!! something was disturbing her... it was a sunday... really a lazy one... she tried doing something...but when in noon when she saw rey in sound sleep she thought of sleeping for sometym too...nonu was on picnic with his mom and dad!!!!! whenever she saw them three they imagined herself Rey and a child ..their child...who would represent their love for each other...

but again a sigh... for a child first needed thing is love from both sides...which in their case was not...really it would be a nice joke to laugh if said love is immense b/w these two...

she too drifted to sleep...but now something continuously disturbing hr sleep she sat up and looked at tym...its 4...then she heard sounds...she followed and went in kitchen there she the most worst thing...

Rey nearly broke 3 eggs and it was almost burnt...he was struggling how to cut a onion...she stood in shock ...but his cry brought her back...

"ouch!!!!!"he said in pain...he had cut his finger ...

"rey!!"she said as she rushed switched of the stove beside which he was standing and took his hands in hers sucking his blood ...she was too fast in action she made rey sit on nearby chair and went in for a ban-aid and finally after bandaging his finger she almost barked

"aap kitchen mei kya kar rahe the??? samajhte kya ho apne aapko??? chaku pakadte wo bhi nahi pata aur chalegaye kitchen mei??? acha hua choti si kati agar bohut jyaad kat jaati toh???😡 "she shouted on him as he saw him wide eyed...he never saw her talking loud even and now she is shouting on him ...but he shot back more annoyed as she shouted on him...none shouted on him till now...

"toh kya karoon??? mujhe bhook lagi hai...aur waise bhi aajkal tum mujhe dhyaan kaha de rahi ho??? * he said looking away with a pout and her head shot up unbelievingly...* isiliye khud omlet banane ki koshish kar raha tha..."he said annoyed

she sighed again..."aap jayiye mai aapkeliye kuch banati hun..."

rey looked at her and FINALLY after ages he felt she looked into his eyes...but neighter he smiled nor she...he made an irritated and annoyed face with that cute pout still showing its glimpse and went and flopped on the couch...

kriya went in and saw the pan ...he smiled how he tried to make the egg into round shape and then cutting onion/...she nodded her head and prepared pasta and gave it to him...he casually as usual took the pasta and ate ...in b/w he couched and reached for the glass but she quickly handed ...rey stopped coughing and looked at her...she was giving him lyk BEFORE...he felt something lyk a big hill was removed on from his heart...

he took and drank and continued his work as she went away...

itne din baad yaad aaya hun kya????? huh...

he made a cute put and ate...

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"excuse me...bill these all"rey said as he placed one bag and kriya kept another one...

the man nodded and started his work...kriya saw nearly 5-6 perfumes...she frowned...

"rey...wo...itne saare perfumes ???"she asked him

"yeah!!! all are my fav flovours ...any problem??? "he asked raising an eyebrow...

"par rey itne saare kyun??? abhi abhi aapki salary aayi aapne naya fridge khareeda ye kehke ki aapko wo model pasand aayi aur gym ka saamaan bhi naye laaye the aur ab ye sab...itne paise..."she was abt to tell when he snapped...

"tumhari problem kya hai??? tumhe bhi kuch chahiye?? agar chahiye toh lelona"he said

"rey wo nahi...abhi poora mahina baaki hai...saare paise abhi..."again she was cut

"paise mere paas haina... ab tumhe agar kuch chahiye toh lelo warna chup raho..."he said highly irritated...

"par"she was stopped by him by a glare...she frowned and started worrying...

as they went out to their car she said...

"rey mai kuch samaan bag mei rakhna bhool gayi abhi aayi..." she ran in back as rey nodded irritatedly...he went to parking lot and brought thier car...

she ran in and placed all the cosmetics she took for herself and all the not so important things on the couter ...the man looked at her confused...

"sorry my cousin said to bring these now she said she bought by herself can u plzz take these back..."she said looking at him hopefully he nodded as they were out just a few secs back...

she thanked took the money and placed in her purse and rushed out

"leliya???"rey asked as she entered in

"hmmm"she replied...

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"oh god save me!!!!!!! paagal hojaunga mai "rey said loud for the 10th tym...

"k.,...kya hua???"she asked finally...

"last 1 hr se list bana raha hun...but sab gadbad..."rey said annoyed

"list?? "she asked confused..

"yup...dad ne bola...mahine ki kharche ki list banake rakhni chahiye..."rey said scrating his forehead and looking in the list...

she walked stood beside him and saw the list...

"rey wo humne shopping ki haina wo sab"she said as he forgot that

"oh haan..."he said and added how much he spent on that day...

"oh no!!!!!!!"he said

"kya hua??"she asked...

he instead of replying opened his volute and checked it which was empty

"F**k...im such a ..."he banged his hand to the bed...

"kya hua???"she asked again...

"arey kya hua kya ???? paise nahi hai... abhi month ki aur do weeks bache hai...khana kaha se laun??? and everything ...gosh...ghar kaise chalega for these two weeks... itne paise kaise khatam hogaye???"he said blabbering when she spoke looking down

"aapke perfumes ...fridge..."she said...

"what do u mean..."rey asked confused


"wo...wo actually...humare paas already ek naya fridge hai aur ab aap ek aur laaye...jo abhi zaroorat nahi hai...and aapke perfumes...aapne itna liya par aapki sabse fav hi use karenge na hamesha...toh baaki waste hi hue na???" she said looking down expecting him to shout anytym...

"yeah ur ri8...pehle kyun nahi bataya??"he asked

she looked and he said..."okay tune bola aur maine suna nahi...par ab kya karun??? kisise debt mei??? nah...never ...wo ek aur tension ban jayegi...par lena toh"rey was speaking when she spoke

"paise debt pe mat lijiye rey...ek baar liya toh sab clear karne mei saal lag jaata hai..its too complicated"she said

"par ab karun toh kya karun???"rey said highly tensed and worried

"kuch nahi...aap itna tension mat lijiye...maine kal hi di ke saath jaake sab saaman leliye is mahine keliye..."she said taking is hands in hers... both realised soon and she flinched back looking away


" leliya??? par maine toh tumhe paise nahi diya???"he asked shocked...

"wo... wo actually maine jo emergency keliye paise rakhe the usse ...usse next month tak theek chalega...rey looked at her ...

"sab theek hojayega aap tension mat lijiye"she said worried for him

he smiled for the first tym at her and "thanks "he said and went away still tensed ...he needed to do something...yeah what else it could be ...DANCE...he went and danced when she saw him sitting at the door...as always he was too much into dance to find her...but still she saw him tensed...she smiled she knew what would make him relax...she silently walked and changed the music...rey was too much in thoughts to think the song changed into DIL SE...but as the music played his muscles cooled and he started dancing whole heartedy...but she was really breathing hard seeing him shirtless and the sweat beads are not helping more...

after a moment where rey was near her andshe was abt to caress her cheek with his she stepped back and ran away ... * rey dancing eyes closed *

okay a small note...rey dances every day in the morning and kriya in the late noon ...and REY DOESN'T KNOW THAT KRIYA IS A DANCER...as his parents told they have selected this specific girl from dehradun who stopped her studies at 10th that too in hindi medium school he didnt hear aything and left...so he doesnt know

days passed...rey became consious abt every penny he is spending as this month he have to manage...he stopped eating outside ...and controlled himself...once when kriyaansh were outside she noticed him thinking and refusing to eat his fav pizza...

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"maa maa maa aapko meri ek help karni hogi please please please..."kriya squeeled soon after priya ...rey s mom lifted the call...

"arey baat toh karne do...: priya laughed at her daughter-in -laws actions

"maa pizza kaise banate hai???"she asked...

"wat??"priya asked

"haan maa wo rey ko pasand haina"she said

"par banane ki kya zaroorat hai beta mangwalo"she said

"wo...actually ma...iss mahine paise todhe kam padgaye...so wo bahar ka khana nahi kha rahe hai.."kriya revealed

"kya??? rey bahar ka khana nahi kha raha??? paise kam padgaye???? tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya... mai inse baat karke kal hi paise dalwati hun account mei..."priya said

"nahi nahi maa...itna bhi nahi...waise aap papa ko mat boliye ga...wo rey ko dhaantenge... plzz maa...itni bhi problem nahi hai"she said

"hmmm...chalo ab bata hi deti hun...banake de dena use..."she said

kriya smiled...motherly love for her child...hmm ...she controlled herself

"kya hua beta??"priya asked sensing the silence

"miss u maa"kriya said as a lone tear rolled down

"arey ro rahi ho?? rote nahi hai...mai kaha door hun ha??? dekhna ek do mahinon me tere papa ko tang karke aajaungi waha tum donon se milne "she said trying as much as she can to control herself and console kriya

"jaldi maa dekhne ki man kar raha hai... "kriya said


they spoke to each other as kriya noted down everything

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as he entered everything smelled nice...he took in closing his eyes and went to freshen up...as he came out of room he saw kriya keeping the pizza on the table...

"pizza?????? wow!!!!!!!"rey said as he rushed to the table

"tumne banaya???"he asked..

"haan wo aapko pasand haina ...*he looked at her* mom ne bola...aap bahar nahi kha rahe ho toh socha ghar mei hi karloon"she said rey spoke

"par iski kya zaroorat hai...i mean paise toh tight haina iss mahine ka??"he said

"jitne ki aap khareed the ho banane mei utna nahi lagta "she said ..

she wanted him to eat heartily not hesitantly...

"really???"rey asked glad and she nodded ...he ate enjoying himself as she adored him

"here tumbhi khalo...pizza is the best u know and this oneis ...umm...u have magic in ur hands "rey said stuffing his mouth with last piece of his pizza and left to their room to do his work...

she smiled as finally he complimented and he felt happy ...she ate the remaining two pieces he specially left and asked her to eat...she had that unknown happiness eating those... HIS FAVOURITE...she smiled and ate...



chalo i think its okay for today

love u all

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deetha😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
awsomme maa super rockingg yarr but jaldi se rey aur kriya ko sath mein alooo i cnt wait for the meejic plzz maa... waiitnng tik tok ,, well this update rocked thnkgod is stupi rey ko pata chala that kriya had learnt englishh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update. . .
At last rey ko kriya and paiso ki importance samajh toh aayi . . . .
Nice update. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww . . . . Kriya dhyan nhi rakhti . . . . Khud banana pad raha hai omelete 😛
that pout
poor rey . . . . Seedhe seedhe kuch bhi nhi sakta ab 😆
uff . . . . . Itna kharcha
& she sold back all her items to save money 👏
ho gyi na jeb khali 🤣
she's so sweet . . . . Pizza banana bhi sikh liya . . . . Aur compliment bhi mil gaya 🤗
he should appreciate her for every effort 😃
& vo usse dance karte hue kab dekhega? . . . . . 'dil se re'-female version 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanks 4 d pm ..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Updatte Deetha..
This was fabulous update..
I loved this..
The innonence of Rey was clearly stated in this updatet..
The Way Kria cared for him ,the told him to take care while shopping..
The fun and amusement shared..
The sweetness in between...
And the way he later understood his mistake abt overspending,controlling his desires and later Kria making it up for Rey and home and he leaving her few amount of itr so that even she can cherish it...
Its amazing...<3 <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

hehehe Rey ko Kriya se daant padi kitchen mein aane ke liye

bechaara Rey


bt atlast use kuch importance to pata chali paison ki and even wo thoda responsible to huya..

awwwiiiee he wanted to eat pizza but bahar se nahi khaya
bechare ka kitna man hoga

but kriya ki wajah se he became happy...
😳

ab hope se jldi hi ise Kriya ke dance ke baare mein pata chal jaayega

hope so jald hi Kriya aur Rey kriyaansh ban jaayenge..

eagerly waiting for next chappy..
awesome part.. 😳
Edited by heavenly_angel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yar it was super duper👏 ...awww i tooo luv pizza ...hmmm vant more updates ...u no na i am ur big fan par ths story i just loved 2 the core i need more updaes plz jaldhi karna...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...finally he understood his mistakes...thanks 4the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper part as always...
hope our kria's magic jaldi chal jaaye rey par!!!

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