SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

so INTENSE

the fight and the making up

I loved how Arnav's brain was not working with her around

we don't often get to see this part of Arnav in other stories

what will happen now?

who was on the phone?

what will happen when Lavania gets back?

lovely story

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

I was expecting a kiss btween the duo ,but never thought it will be this adventurous...aur vo phone!!!!!!! Y Arnav not put it on silent mode??? sab kuch kharab kar diya...and wat will be the aftereffect of this kiss???? pls let us know soon...I donot wish to wait looong...coz ur story is so lovely...😉

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drmj5612

@drmj5612

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

OMG..

that reminded me of d Diwali day n d Engagement day... 😳

everything was these, intensity, desire, rage, guilt, anger, passion, confusion, anticipation n ofcourse Love.. ❤️

Loved it.. will read again 4 sure..

poor Arnav had no clue, what was happening there except Khushi..

n d Green eyed monster always had worked wonders n ArShi's Love story n here again.. 😉

Devi Maiyya has turned naughty, by God...

n that phone of Arnav, y it always has to ring on wrong times...

back than during Diwali almost Kiss, i sooo wanted to throw it in his pool, n now again i wish to destroy it... HUH.. 😡

hope Devi Maiyya does something...

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kuchnaakahoo

@kuchnaakahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

this was my favourite update so far,, i m still reeling under the turbulence radiated by this passionate encounter,,

i hav always preferred a jealous arnav,,, pinning , pulling khushi out of his incoherent rage,, coz whn he realises tht he has wronged her,, it intensifies his passion and leaves me baffled,,, throughtout the update i had wild goosebumps out of anticipation,, tht will d kiss happen or not,,,

but alas he couldnt deepen the kiss😆,, this phone call has always been the biggest historical hindrance in any kind of intimacy,,,

and then u left us at a cliff hanger😭.. i dunno y but my gut feeling says tht he will jerk her away,,, he will regert tht y did he allow himself to get bowled over by a whirlpool of emotions,, he will agn try to mask his desire,, and will end up hurting khushi agn,,,

looking forward to read wht hav u in ur mind,,, update soon,,

P.S.. i jst loved tht naughty side of Devi Maiyya,,,😆

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

*faints*

*unconscious*

*still unconscious*

*opens eyes,types-

arnav can be a jerk sometimes,he is also an over the top one! Hmpf..
But all is well.sorry bola usnay..vo bhi kaise.. *blushes*
that was lovely! Beautiful Farha dee! ❤️ Hayeee!
Because it was so sigh-worthy,heart racing update.,m letting you go for that damned phone ring..who is it although? Grrr..aman?akash? Hmpf! 😡

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#896

Super update

Switch off your phones plz ...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#897

When the hell will Arnav's phone stop ringing at the WORST timings ever?

God. Sab kuch kitna sahi jaa raha tha...aur phone! WE NEED DIVINE INTERVENTION EVERYTIME Arnav comes close to Khushi as mortals will never let them be in peace..

Devi Maiyya shouldn't have turned to her impending tasks and let Khushi and Arnav kiss all the way to glory...

but I LOVED the update :)

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Nice chapter
Arnav's phone always rings at the wrong time

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#899

AAAHHH!
They kissed, like FINALLY! :)

Damn, his phone! -.-

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#900

damn the phone always a hadi in a kabab lol anyways loved it and why did khushi just let it be after he insulted her although it was a sweet sorry ;) anyways loved it and plzzz update soon