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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shonagudia


OMG i am more excited for the next part after reading this one.. 😉
Khusi in Red saree and Arnav in black suit. I can't wait for the magic to be re-created.
I loved the easy routine they have fallen in to. Khusi ran coz she's late but doesn't know Arnav would have wait for her unless she came . More than Khusi , Arnav is affected i can say. Every , time thinking of her and looking for his lemon, In fact thinking to install a small lift for them so the distance will be less. Arnav had lost it .. really.. 😆 And poor Akash thinking he will lunch a new venture 😆
How the hell Payal think Arnav will be bald , middle aged Man 😡 Please make her MU resolve asap.
Continue soon,,

I am grinning every time I am thinking of how to resolve Payal's MU about Khushi's "bald-headed" boss! 😆
Thanks for stalking my thread!!! 🤗 It really flatters me! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja

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omggg...wat a beautiful update...just perfect...😉
arnavji and his khushi are so cute...
☺️ m so happy wid the precap...cant wait..plzz update soon dis time...
i wud be havin sleepless nights...😉

my stalkin skill rocks...m second yaay..

You girls really flatter me big time .. ☺️ .. I hope your nights were full of awesome dreams! 😉
Thank you sooo much Pooja for keeping me inspired. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

NAHI!

I am third :(

Amazing amazing update babes

I love their passion and attraction

Ha ha even Akash felt something was definitely wrong with Arnav... So he'll tell Anjali.. Lets see what she does :)

Me super duper excited about the precap

lol .. I just wrote the BG music as the precap. 😉
I am very excited to bring Akash, Payal & Anjali in the story .. but I dont know if these two will let them do much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wen r u updatin dear...stalkin everyday
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bs_deeps


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ok...that :( was bcoz I read the update late...You have posted it when I was super bzy...
and it continued..as I read the update from phone in hurry and I was all confused and the essence didnt hit me at all..I finally read the update couple of days back and this time I didnt fail...lovely update once again dear...

I am not able to give a lengthy reply this time...but I cant wait as I dont want these three days to be wasted..so here I am..chleepy..chleepy reply...

Some lines that cracked me up..
" I cannot disappoint Arnav ji" --> You will never disappoint him, Khushi..or should I say he
will never be disappointed with whatever you do
" You are not going to get it." --> How will she? Only crazy ppl can understand you..so except your Arnav Ji, no one else can / will understand you..

He must be some bald-headed middle aged arrogant jerk...LOL..😃

Loved this entire para..I can see Arnav's eyes moving around...

A smile appeared at the corner of Arnav's mouth without his knowledge as his eyes fell on her. He could smell "his" lemon even from so much distance .. her green chudidaar only intensified the air. Her braided hair over her left bosom .. the colorful, sequined jhola covering the leftmost corner of her hip .. He could see her matching bangles and nagra as he drove the car closer to her. Was she panting? He could see her heaving chest and her right hand over the middle of her bosom. Arnav swallowed down the fluttering feelings inside him before she got into the car.

keeping her away from the male population and anything that can lead to anything even close to dangerous...hahaha...hahaha...close to dangerous..what was that?


My fav line...I am sure yours too...

Scars take time. Pain goes away but scars can be stubborn.

I am still waiting for him to vent out his biggest frustration..this line and jadu hain nasha hai tells me something bigger is awaiting...


Ok! I am a baddie .. I kind of blackmailed you into writing the comment when you were so chleepy. 😔 But this much I can do .. cant I? 😳
Yeah .. the fav line .. you know it is mine as well as yours. 😊 We have talked about it, havent we? 😉
His biggest frustration .. hmm .. dont know when & how the man is going to do something about it. 😛 Readers hate to see an irrational Arnav .. but that is the part that needs to be shown first to the fullest before the story goes on to the next stage. So ... lets see. 😊
When I describe a scene or their feelings .. I try to write as I visualilze. If you could his eyes there .. I feel lucky! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja

Wen r u updatin dear...stalkin everyday

In an hour or two. 😊 I have it ready. Will just reply a few comments first. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dynamix215

Preacap is superb but i hope it doesnt end up with his jerkiness like in th show :-P

I am not that bad! 😉 I am a better matchmaker! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riti4u

☺️ I am ready... Dont know about those two...😆..Aww very beautiful update👏 dear...loved how he thought that all he could give her was that scar...and I loved khushi sayin...not all scars have bad memories... lady in red and man in black..what all we need else...just magical jaadu hain nasha moment...I am waiting...😳

Riti! 🤗
You sure you are ready??? 😆
I am no baddie and wont disappoint you .. when the man & the woman are in their best .. 😉
Thanks a lot for the concise comment .. you touched just the right parts. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: munam_13

Stalking helps 😆 I have been waiting for an update since long!!! and now!! I have to wait for the next part... courtesy the precap 😆

*hugs* to you for the elevator scene,the mighty ASR finally says Sorry!!!

Loved the update.

love
priyo

I had been wanting a lift scene between the two since the 4th promo .. and it never came. 😭
Thanks for the lovely comment dear. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Farha...awesome update! ...nice build up to another 'jadoo hai nasha hai'...this one better have no phone or otherwise interruption😈

sweety you have thanked me enough for the banners. no more please...now I'm getting embarrassed! Like I wrote somewhere your writing inspired the edits...100%. bas

exams over...so update soon!

Hehe. No phone? No interruption? Cant promise. 😆
But you will not be disappointed too .. I hope.
🤗

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