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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

cute and sweet...

loved it...

vaise what did kriya do ki rey forgot b'ay???

but anyways ussne ese chillaya hi nhi??? aunty wala chillana hi huya...

kya yaar...

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Ufff.. Tani Reyaansh's galfrn.. I understan.. Kai br sacrifices krne pdte h 🤣

Haha.. Reyaansh forgot tani's bday coz of his bubbly kriya 😳
Poor Reyaansh.. He cld hr up buh she wasnt rchbl n whn he went to her home.. He blurted out bt ooopsss.. It was kavya instead of kriya 😆 😆 Buh dat was real cute.. He kpt his eyes close so as he cn let out his anger on hr.. Othrwse hr puppy face wudnt lt him do so.. Betta luck nxt time Reyaansh 😛

Haha.. Kriya ne Reyaansh ja chopsy kr diya.. Wo b bura vala.. 🤣

Grounded fr a week.. Kriya ko punishment mil e gyi
Hmmm.. Mission viyanska??? Wht it cud b ??

Ermmm.. Wht abt dat post abv d update???
Somethn hs hpnd wid kriya???
Looks lik physical assault buh who did it???

Waitin fr d nxt prt.. Update soon :)

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Kya baat hai . . . . 1st chappy se pehle hi itna thrilling promo 😉
omg . . . . Apni so called gf ka b'day bhul gya rey . . . . . Maine isse zyada adorable baat nhi padhi 🤣
pehle madam chilla rahi thi but angry young man-rey ko dekh ke seedhi ho gyi 🤢
no one cares for ur b'day,,, see- rey ne wish bhi nhi kiya,,, go get a life 😈
hehehe . . . . Kriya ki vajah se hua . . . . Yo 😎
ROFL . . . . He started his blabbering without luking at the person opening the door 😆
& its kriya's mom . . . . . He's in deep sh*t 🤪
hahaha . . . Superman . . . . He's a kid or wat . . . . Aur koi ideal nhi mila rey ko? 🤣
oops . . . Grounded . . Enjoy 😛
'VIYANKA' . . . . I guess they are on mission to make jodi of Priyanka & Vi****... 😃
hows my guess rish? 😉

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annu

@_sweetannu_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

amezing update 😛
Rey part was just wow...😳
Waiting for next part 👏

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

wat was that before the 1st chapter...
i really wanna know.,,,
n noe the chapter..
it was awsm...
rey uss taani ka b'day bhul gya..
ab kriya hogi to yaad b kese rakhega...
rey came as a super man...😆
i can imagine him in a superman costume
nd everyone gaping at him in the party...😆😆
ohh god that wold be really embarsng 4 rey...
update the next part soon...
thnx 4 the pm...

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

awesome update...loved it very very much

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

lovely!!!!

mysterious start😉

ufff this tani!!!

so rey forgot her birthday😛

lol..rey shouted at riya's mother😛

kriya gave rey a card of costume party..with rey as superman😃

woww..plan viyanka!!

waiting for the secret..

update soon

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Pehle toh itna confusing art dikhaya aur phir keh rahi ho 'Forget about this and read'🤔...
The banner was amazing , it shows the meaning of ur SS , ek taraf 'Friends' and ek taraf 'Enemies' , great work 😃...
Starting was nice Rey Tan ka B'day bhool gaya and se had pie all over her face , acha hai 😆...
Oopsie Rey ki toh double band baj gai...
Party mein Superman and phir Kria ki mom pe chillaing 🤣...
'Viyanka's plan' suspense ...
Waise Shenz Di ka idea aur tera dimaag mil ke acha kaam kar lete ho 😉..
Superb work...
Loved it ❤️...
Will be waiting for the next part 😊.