SS: To Be Or Not To Be (NOTE PAGE18- PLAGIARIZED)

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Tamanna Morshed Shamim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Seems old rivalry!! LA came back!! O.k. Let's see what happen next!! The prologue is very true for lot's of school. The reddiculous dividation does exist. I am also eye witness to groupings..when I was attending Univ. of Kent Ohio...so to me the SS is interesting and waiting to listen to your story...GO ON..👏.

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

interesting start! looking forward to reading it~~~

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

~NOTE~

This story is now being recounted by Khushi (Inside the councillor room), as everybody argues outside the councillor room. So basically Khushi is just remembering what happened. I could have started it off with the councillor or a friend asking Khushi to tell hers story, but that somehow didn't appeal to me. I thought explaining stuff through a note was better.

To understand the dynamics of Khushi and Lavanya's relationship, it is very important to go back to the past. I will litter a few clues here and there, so keep your eyes peeled.

Another thing... this story is based on real, hard facts... but it did not happen in Delhi. I changed the location to Delhi, because I was not familiar with the place where all this happened... and I love Delhi :')

Please DO NOT ask me to reveal where all this actually happened or anything like that. I am not at liberty to reveal all that information.

Also, as most know, I usually do not write in first person... nor do I go overboard with slang. This, however, is not me telling the story. It is Khushi remembering the story. It's a first time... so... constructive criticism please.

-V

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

shifted to a blog.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Res.read it but commenting in a minute but before that-

You are in tenth?Me too :P best of luck!:)

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Ooh!Cultural head part SO happens.Or at least I have heard it does.That is how school actually is :P

Interesting how Lavanya runs in Khushi's mind almost all the time.Its like she is not her best friend but her interests,her choices,her attitude is controlled by what Lavanya does.And lavanya is the most popular girl in school?That explains it.I see that everyday around me,in my class,in the rest of the school and from gossip!

Hmm I like the Karan Johar mention,very aptly put😆

I love the fact that Arnav is not the Oh baby I lub you kind of guy.Ugh,That seriously looks SO desperate and reminds me of pink fluffy cotton balls[dont ask me why,it just does]

Lol at the lawana line- hilarious!

Dance fest?seems interesting :)

Sorry for a disconnected comment,have to run off too :P

But I like the going :D Waiting for next update!

Edited by Risha_ipkknd - 12 years ago

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Sorry for late Unres I am here!

I had some issues but Bleh.

YOU DEDICATED THIS TO ME I LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOADS

Ooh Arnav and Khushi are together but after Arnav and Lavanya broke up!

Hmmm why do I sense Lavanya still feel something for Arnav?

Don't know thinking too much :P

Love you

Edited by Aveiro - 12 years ago

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Interesting start..do continue

I think my comment on the prologue ended up just after yore first chapter..
khushi s thoughts contain evErything on what la thought, on what la would do, on what la has/had..is la the standard to which khushi measures herself???

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Res!

Damn!

I missed being on the page of the chapter. 😕

Now for the chapter:

Awesome start.

I love it!

And btw, Im just vaguely remembering tenth, I hated it!

Take care... This too shall pass! You will love being done with tenth! 😃

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Res!!

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Oh I loved this one!!

You know...what intrigued me was that Khushi thought of lavanya's reaction after her every action!!! You know...its like a reflex..i like something..what does Lavanya think of the same??

I was cultural secretary when I was in 10th...and its so damn true!! I had to slog my ass off aaalll the time!! When I became the head in 12th though...I still had to slog...pfft...my juniors are so lazy!!😆 But your descriptions are always so apt!! Right to the point.

Loved the KJ description in between!!😆

I don't like guys who go all baby and sweetheart too! I don't know why though..I hate it!

Can't wait to see how this unfolds!!

Thanks for the pm V!!

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago