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Ayaat

@Ayaat1216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Intersting chapter 😊
I'm intrigued to see where you take this story 😊
Khushi seems to be a bit of a weak character who follows around Lavanya, it's nice to see this new side to her 😃
Oh and I loved the fact that Arnav and Khushi are already together 😳
I also quite like the 1st pov idea, it lets you know more about the character 😛
Can I please have your blog link to glass?
Ayaat
Oh and good luck with your exams, I've got exams coming up too 😭

Edited by Ayaat1216 - 12 years ago

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Tamanna Morshed Shamim

@Tamannaus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Well, my POV: Wonderful writings..👏

Sad to see Khushi character has changed to a modern sofo kind of obnoxious kid!! Without morality and lack of guilt for any wrongdoing!! Didn't like this Khushi so far..needs to go into the story and see how she comes up..hoping for the best..😳

Also hoping not to find my name in your blacklist!.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Okay. Firstly... I'm glad someone updated! I was almost pulling my hair out due to all that craziness going around in the forum today. So thank you for saving the day!

Now for the comment... It's quite interesting! Although I was a bit disappointed to know that Khushi and Arnav are already dating. I don't know why but I love to read how they fell in love and all 😳. But I'm looking over it... 'coz I know that that's not what the story is about. And I'm not 12 anymore.

Really weird to know that it's real life story. Not getting personal or anything...but do you know the people it happened with?

and I'm from New Delhi. So I naturally love it too ! Looking forward to the dilli-terminology! 😊

Got some questions : Does Khushi admire Lavanya a lot or she just mentions Lavanya because she's thinking of the past and the Lavanya's story is the main theme? 🤔

ex: "Lavanya got her drivers licence all right."

Btw can you please PM me when you update next?

I don't usually have no issues with stalking, but I don't your schedule and stuff and I don't want to miss updates.

Thanks :)

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shree

@subi27

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Loved the friendship btw la and arnav even after breakup:)plz do continue soon and pm me too

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fffan123

@fffan123

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Very amazing update. Waiting to read more.

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Wow! Totally different than what I had in mind. So Khushi here is within the popular gang of people? And is it just me or she does everything just because La has done or is doing?
What I find interesting is the friendship dynamic between the two...and Arnav is already dating Khushi. Hmm, how did this all begin?
Oh, looking forward to being introduce to their family gang...and what have they done together (referring to bad stuff)?

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Lavanya...Lavanya...Lavanya...The way Khushi keeps thinking about her it seems as if she rules Khushi and Khushi can only do things which Lavanya tell her to do...that isn't how "best friends" normally act...

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

I love it so arnav is la's ex and khushi is now not bother how they are with each other awesome so Khushi is not the jelly (jealous) type anyways loved it and thanks for the pm and plzzz update soon

Edited by please6 - 12 years ago