ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS Thrd 6 note from me pg 141!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Hey!

This was amaaaziiinnng, magical and just beautiful

Well written as always. Full of various emotions. Perfect wedding setting. Love being shown to one another openly between Arnav and Khushi ... Ahhh ... perfect! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😃😉

Thankyou for coming up with a longer update than usual. I think it came at the perfect time, considering that it was Mr and Mrs Raizadas wedding 😆 and after reading about Barun ... yet some have said that he is on a break others saying he has left. Well I honestly hope its the former.

Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 12 years ago

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

awww..this was the best diwali gift ever...after all the negativity we are seeing in forum these days this was surely a treat...

thankyou so much for such a lovely and looonnggg update...

everything was so beautifully written that i could actually visualize it...

but i couldn't see the "wedding venue" pic...can u pm me the same??????i really want to see it..

continue soon and happy diwali dear...

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Ohh...this was short! But super cute!!

Loved the budding romance between payash...and looks like the anjali-aman romance has already blossomed!

Loved your writing style, as always!!

Edited - oops!! Sorry...looks like i dint see the looonnnggg update and made this post after reading the first part alone...

Reading the other parts now!!

Edited by What_the - 12 years ago

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

whoaaa naina! that was freakin' amazing!

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

This was a welcome distraction from all the off screen drama!!! Thank you for updating!! This was perfect! And I'm crying here because I have been emotional these past few days and this is just the icing on the cake!!! They have finally married!! They are husband and wife! *SOBS* I'm so happy!! :) :)

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lmathew77

@lmathew77

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

You won't see me complaining about the long updates. In fact I wouldn't mid if it was even longer 😛. A very beautiful update. Yaay, Arnav and Khushi are finally married!!! Anjali and Aman? Payal's and Akash? Tension and attraction is in the air!! But what about NK? Can't wait to read more.

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Hohoho!! Wish you a very happy diwali, naina!

Thank u for this wonderful gift on the eve of diwali...made the day more special...

The story is so beautiful...loved the way you described the wedding...perfect...like every girl's dream-come-true wedding! Absolutely marvellous...

And cliff hanger as usual :p

Suhaag raat...wowie...

Lookin fwd!

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

thank u so much for this wonderful long update..beautifully written..
who said rushed weddings wont b fun..weddings hav their own magic..and thanks to ur beautiful writing the magic was intact..
wat is going on between aman and anjali..???
and wat shud i say about payal and akash..
loved both khushi and arnavz attire..the perfect prince and princess in the perfect fairy tale..
sashiz words during the bidaai...touching..thats wat every father feels..no matter how big their daughter grows,she will always b his little girl..
and finally the wedding night..wats with the beeping of the fone..i hop its just a reminder to switch it off..i will leave that u...
once again a wonderful update..thank u..

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Omg! That was all so beautifully written. The emotions had me throughout. The little little gestures you mentioned were really touching and added more to the beauty of this update. I loved how this update was indeed a treat for us, in terms of both length and content 😉

Wohooo! They're married . Finally. Its such an amazing feeling. The ArHi in this FF are an intoxication! Love them so much. <33

You really nailed it hun much much more than ever 😊 Cant wait to read more already.

love
-V-

P.S: I would love to write a LONGGG comment for this extra-long and amazing update, but am sorry, festive season na!
P.P.S: Happy Diwali to you and your family. Hope you've a memorable one. 😃

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Ashlista!

@ashlista

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

I want to comment, but it's late night and I m doomed if I stay a min longer

So definetly one 2morrow, the moment I come 4rm skool

RES!!

*edited*
Firstly I would like to salute ur vocabulary and way of phrasing/...😉 Being a lit student, I m really inspired by ur work...

Now...

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN... The pix u posted, made visualize the scene so wonderfully and Kashmiri traditions were so perfectly described, it was as if I was there...

Loved every bit of the looong Chapter (btw thanku for the looong chapter)
Seriously can't wait 4 the next update... so please update soon!!
A really humble request...

Yaar, u r a writer, love ur way of writing... Khushi's tension, Arnav's anger, Akaash's new avatar, Payal's humor, Anjali-aman romance, wedding and everything was SOMETHING MORE THAN FANTABULOUSLY EPIC!!!

U rocked it!! 👏

Edited by ashlista - 12 years ago