Arhi SS: Chup Chupke, LastPart-Pg30, Note -- pg37

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spunk22

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was great...😊 luved it a lott...

actually went to some dreamland n even visualised evrythng...👍🏼

too gud..😛

try it u can extend it...think abt it...👏

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spunk22

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was d most welcum read indeed...so fed up wid d sheetal track...

she is on air n in d forum too, a part of most of d stories both short n long, wid all d stories running more or less parallel to the current track, it actually gets irritating to read it here even...

n u breaked d sequence 4 me atleast...😊🥳

refreahing it was...see m still happy aftr reading it...

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Khushi_Sarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey loved both d parts would lovd to read more do continue soon

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Hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome. The foursome argument was hilarious. Poor Garima and Anjali 😆

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Originally posted by: spunk22
it was d most welcum read indeed...so fed up wid d sheetal track...
she is on air n in d forum too, a part of most of d stories both short n long, wid all d stories running more or less parallel to the current track, it actually gets irritating to read it here even...
n u breaked d sequence 4 me atleast...😊🥳

refreahing it was...see m still happy aftr reading it...

Hey Thanks so much for liking it😃

Your comments in first OS and now... it makes me feel so good and encourage me to write.

Thanks once again spunk22. 😊

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks to everyone who liked and commented. 😃

You guys encourage me to continue writing... I don't think I would have been able to write this much without all of your support... Thanks much 😃

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shanon

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Truly yaar, give some of your brain to cv's, how to utilise supporting characters in parallel.

Amazing story line.at last you are giving importance to payash.
Do continue. And pm me.