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Posted: 12 years ago

Di not done... its page 37... n no update!😔

me crying... 😭plz plz plz karro na update.. iti mehnat se hum sabne page 35 tak pahuchaya hai.. ab aap ek update de do! plz..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
In swayam 's style " I have stopped asking for update doesnt mean that I have forgotten this FF" 😆...Please Update 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note For Readers:
Hey Friends 🤗,I am writing the next part.Will update tonight or maximum by tomorrow night.Really sorry for the delay.I was really busy this week.I hope you all can understand.Thanx a lot to all my spamming queens for reaching the demand.😳Love,Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Hey Friends ...thanx a lot for liking my work... i love reading your lovely comments..please continue commenting as they are my sole inspiration for writing ...will be waiting for ur comments and feedback(positive and negative all are welcomed)


Thank u all for liking this FF...😊


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys...This is the 13th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ... thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊







Recap:

Pari-Tanya coversation...both were feeling a beautiful bond between them...Aloknath and Swayam Conversationa about how sharon reached shimla...Swayam goes and talks to sharon...she tells him..she remembers his eyes...



Chapter– 13


I have seen these eyes in my dreams…every night….since last three years…I know they are related to me….she said….tears started forming in her big beautiful greenish eyes….

He looked at her…his heart was beating in fast pace…as if it was jumping in joy….he felt as if his heart will jump out of his chest any moment….

Finally his heart was going to meet the heart…for which it beats….after three long years……

Two hearts were beating in unison….their conversation was incomplete….their hearts ..their eyes….were conveying their feelings….there were so many things to say...so many things to listen to...time stood still witnessing this moment...

He broke the silence… three years of silence …it was high time to speak and convey the in-depth feelings of his heart…

I lost my life…my love….three years back….when I lost you….I was breathing….but there was no life in that living….my heart was beating….with the hope to beat with your heart again….My eyes were only searching for one face ….in these three years…..finally….I am standing in front of you….its like a dream…..if it's a dream I don't want to come out of it….his eyes were flooded with tears….tears of joy…tears of achievement…tears of guilt….

I am your culprit Sharon….I couldn't find you….It took me three long years to find my Sharon…Trust me Sharon….I tried…I tried….trust me…tears rolled down his cheeks….

She looked at him ….she was waiting for this moment for three years…when a person will come and tell her…that she belongs to HIM…..and somewhere in her heart…..she knew…it's the same person….who kept coming in her dreams ….for past three years….though she could never see his face…but she can't forget those deep eyes….full of pain and love….finally she could see her reflection in those angelic eyes….she trusted those eyes…..she trusted the love in those deep eyes….

I trust you…I really do…..she said….the words came out not from her mouth…but from her heart….her heart was finally voicing its feelings loud…..

She continued…

Here people call me pari…as Baba considered me as his angel..i love this name……but I want to know my real name…my real existence…I think you can help me with that…..she looked at him with anticipation….

He smiled through his tears…..

You are My Sharon….Mrs Sharon Swayam Shekhawat…….

She looked in his deep dark brown eyes…which were holding her reflection with immense love and care….the name he just said….it was consisting of her whole life….her existence….her identity….

She was drowning in his deep eyes….they were like an ocean of LOVE…LOVE…which seemed to be an unknown territory for her…as past three year were full of only emptiness…silence…tears started forming in her green orbs…

He was staring at her face….with an intention keep her image in his eyes…. forever….he noticed her tears…his heart ached…her tears were intolerable for him…..

He raised his hands to wipe her tears….he wanted to caress her ….to make her feel…LOVED….

But his hands stopped in mid-air….he was still a stranger for her…he was not having any rights to wipe her tears…to caress her cheeks…to touch her ….

She saw her hands retreating back….she saw the hesitation in his eyes….somewhere she knew the reason behind it….

That moment …she just wanted to feel alive…to feel loved…to feel belonged….TO HIM…..

She held his hand ….his eyes were teary….

I…I am really sorry ….I don't want to make you feel uncomfortable….I know…I am a stranger for you right now….You don't remember anything about US….

She looked at him...those eyes...towards which she was having a strange attraction ...a beautiful bond ...were full of tears...tears of pain..pain because of her...

She just wanted to kiss those eyes...to kiss away all his pains...all his tears...even she didn't know how he was able to control her each and every move in their first meeting itself...well it was not their first meeting...her heart knew HIM...since ages...

She finally voiced her feelings...

You are not a stranger….I don't know why but I am not feeling uncomfortable with you….My heart is telling me that I belong to you…..she told to herself…she was talking to her inner-self…but her voice was loud enough for him….to hear…

He looked up…rubbing his eyes….. which were still teary….he couldn't believe his ears…her words ..her voice ….were ringing in his ears….the voice he was waiting to hear for past three years…..

He looked at her with confused expression….looking adorable…

She repeated her words…..

My heart is telling me that I belong to You….

He was controlling his feelings since a long time….trying to not make her feel uncomfortable….he didn't even go close to her…as he didn't want to risk her comfort…after all he was a stranger to her….at least for the time being….

But these her words…..when he heard her words….a strange energy took over the control of his body…may be it was his LOVE….HIS LOVE FOR HER…..his heart took over his mind...next moment…he pulled her into an embrace …

Both were in a subconscious state….he got his life…his Sharon back…..he was just trying to believe the fact …trying to grasp the reality…she was in his arms after three years…after a lifetime…

The moment she said that she repeated those words..…the very next moment she felt a pair of strong arms….which engulfed her into a tight embrace…..it warm….the warmth signified…he will protect her from the whole world….she could hear his heart beats…which were witness of his undying love for her…the LOVE….she saw in those EYES….in his arms….she felt …as if she belonged there….its the safest place on earth …meant just for her….

His touch made her dizzy …….that smell…that intimacy…those heart beats….that warmth….they were playing with her existence…her heartbeats…her mind….she could hear HIS heart beats…which were beating in sync with HERS…..


" Bahut acha lagta he jab tum mera naam leti ho"


"tum bahut special ho ..humara pehla kiss bhi bahut special hoga"


"I want your exclusive time"

"I have started understanding you"


"I have recorded your voice so.. I won't miss u"


"I am here to clear our misunderstandings"

"tutne nehi nehi dunga tumhare dil ko"

"your wish is my command"

"I know you better than u know urself"



"I will make you fall in love with me "


"Why are you pushing me away?"


"I want to give a chance to our feelings for each other"


"kya tum aur me hum nehi ho sakte"

"You are mine."

She could hear faint voices….they were slow….very slow…but they were loud enough to make her heart beat faster and faster….at a moment she felt her heart will burst out of the new found happiness….


She was still in his embrace….they were not keeping a track of time…



Her eyes were closed….she saw a guy…dancing on a stage….he was moving like wind….he was owning the stage with his moves….she couldn't see his face…


A girl in subconscious state…..placed her head on the chest of a guys…he caressed her hair…she could feel the love between them…but she couldn't see the faces…


A guys cupped the face of a girl…and confessed his feelings…that he loves her….she could feel that both of them were having tears in their eyes…that was tears of happiness….she was unable to get a glimpse of those faces…

A girl….said to a guy….that she doesn't deserve his love…as she is complicated…complex….he was trying to convince her that they were meant to be together…he held her hand…she stopped for a moment…but soon..her hand slipped out of his….



She opened her eyes with a jerk…...those faint voices….. those blurred moments…..they seemed like a ray of hope after a long dark tunnel….his re-entry in her life was like a new dawn to an never ending cold and dark winter night…..


He felt her moving….he broke the hug….and cupped her face …


I want to re-live my life……with you…I want to remember all the moments we lived together…..I want to remember all teh things related to my existence…my Love…my life….our Tanya…You….

I want to feel the feeling of being in LOVE...being in LOVE with you...


His happiness was having no boundaries…finally he was getting back his Sharon...his love….his life…..


He replied….

Hey princess...You will remember all the beautiful moments we shared together….you will recall about your existence….your love..your life…about our Tanya…about me…about US….very soon…..


You will feel the beautiful feeling of LOVE again…

I will make you fall in love with me…Again…I promise…..

I will hold your hand and we will walk back to the past..hand in hand…..

U & ME will be "US"…again….



Precap:

Beta meri Bachchi ka khayal rakhna...

Daro mat...wahan bhi sab tumhe utna hi pyar karte he...jitna ki yahan...after all meri sharon he hi itni pyari...

So how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment... i will wait for your comments and feedback



Plzz let me know where I can improve...😊


Next update will be on pg- 55 😊


Finally a chapter full of SWARON..hope you all will like it...😊


plz add me to your buddy list ...for pm.....


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update.full update on swaron,loved it.but bhir bhi missed tanya.she is so cute yaar.nd swaron ke flashback ke memories was awesume .swayam hug sharon i can feel his happiness.waiting for next part. pls update next part soon.😊
Edited by truptiswaron - 12 years ago
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*Unres*

Sorry di😭Itna late reply

Anways. I just loved this update to the core

It was sooo sweet and romantic!!😊

And the best part was when she could faintly remember all those cute lines he said!!😳

Update soon! Thanks for the pm!

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res nish

unres


Diii🤗
Awesome update as usual...
Even though I wanted swaron sCene..i missed tanya in this update.
I want tanya and swaron both..
Greedy me😳
Not my fault...amazing the writer of this ff is...
Loved the update...
Everything was so well penned down that I could picturise the whole thing going on in front of my eyes..😃..
Swayam's hesitation from coming close to.sharon so as to not make her feel uncomfortable...
Sharon remembering swayam's eyes ..
Feeling secure and complete in.his arms...
The update was just so soothing..
Enjoyed reading it...
Eagerly waiting.for the next chapter...
As to how swayam will make sharon fall in love with him..

Their beautifully past memories ..their gonna be made memories..
...
Wanna read all this..

p.s: From next time I want my first one to res after the update privilege back
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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WOW...just wow...

how could u write so beautiful...

it was one of the best updates i had ever read...trust me..awesome...just perfect...god m feeling short of words rite now... the way you started with her believe in swyum ...nad his happiness beyond any limits is so obvious...ibwas like ...finally...finally swayum gonna meet her ...her sharon..not pari...luved it di... the way he took her in his arms and she felt the unknown attachment ...aww...poor sharon couldn't remember ...luved the fact of including famous dialogues of swaron...which can make crazy any swaron fan...u r so damn brilliant...hehehe... luved the part where Sharon feels some faint voices and the unknown couple... and the way she asked him about her identity...her memories...her tanya...and swayum's promise to her ...to let her know who actually she is...cant figure out any line coz every line has its own impact... all in all it was perfect...just perfect... cant wait to read further...update soon di...

love you...
ur Rockstar...



Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Unres!!

A whole Chapter full of Swaron hayee


I am smiling more than this!

What to say about the update...ever line every word was perfect! As i always say you write poetic!

The way swayam resisted from touching her..the way she said she trusted him... AND THE HUG!!



and the way she was getting her memory back those lines actually reminded me of our swaron which is missing from D3! SOB SOB

And the I WILL MAKE YOU FALL IN LOVE WITH ME!!! HAyeee...i was toh full on imagining our Majnu :))) You know what i mean write!

Deeps i need to take writing lessons from you! HUGS



Love you partner
Nehal


Edited by Nehal92 - 12 years ago

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