The Return of The Beast(Arshi SS Complete)

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@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Nice ss !!! short and sweet.. 😃

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Personally I think Sheetal track could offer huge possibilities to explore the relationship between Arnav-Khushi .. A lot could have been shown in terms of trust ant maturity. Well, we all know what we got including butchering of characters.

Your story has handled it much better while keeping the track similar to the show. Loved reading it. It is simple, reasonable and matured. :)

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

A very nice, cute, short and sweet ss. Loved it. Thanks.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

The most detested track of the show, one which dragged around endlessly and left all fangirls frustrated in its wake.

If only we had not been at the receiving end of an Arnav who continued to shower attention on Sheetal as against his wife. If only Khushi would not have been relegated to being a comical character. If only they could have treated the track better so as to not cause us heartburn.

The beast in Arnav was aroused in this one, but was out to good use...and i couldn't be happier about it😊

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

The angry, the pain, all of it. This was how it should have been handled to quite an extent.

It still fit according to ASR's demeanor. But it never happened in the show :/

Anyways, it was wonderful how you made Arnav solve all the problems this time, made him understanding and caring and all. :) Great job!

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

NYC and chweet ending 😉

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canvasdreamz

@canvasdreamz

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

very touching SS.Arnav's reactn was so wrng venting out all his anger on his innocent naive khushi..n khushi was no less believing sheetal ovr Arnav so quickly.the way Arnav broke her fast was very beautiful n of course Arnv has become a pro whn it comes to khushi's twisted ankle syndrome :P the way khushi found all her answers frm Arnvji was perfect Rabba ve moment :)

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kurinji

@kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Sheetal was shown her way out. Good for you arnav you tried to resolve the issue without misunderstanding, it would have been better you would have controlled your inner beasty nature.