The Return of The Beast(Arshi SS Complete) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending shital playing dirty games and khushi innocence as a weapon against her loved how asr is taking her to court awesome ending

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice..!!!
i wish we could see something so meaningful in the actual show...
but never mind...the show was superb in its own way...
and you write really well...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow amazing ending of TROTBeast...
He indeed can fix that with khushi's help.
Loved the way he was pacifying her.
An absolutely perfect reveal of sheetal, she should know he is non other than ASR she is trying to mess with.
Appreciate how you kept the consistency of ASR, exactly how he would react to ranting khushi and also to fake sheetal.
Loved the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
its a lovely ss...
simply gr8...
widh they hav shown sumthing like this in the show...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...wow...wow... I so badly miss ipk reading ur stories... very wel written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read it again today ...last time i forgot to write comment...i think sheetal phase was bad in ipkknd ...newly married arshi ..arnav could not even see the pain of khushi...and that very bad basket ball match...thank you for writing about that period
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Posted: 12 years ago
xtremely beautiful story!i loved it! it looked really very realistic!!! it's as if watching one epi after karwa chawt!!!

so beautifully written!!! plz keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...
finally sheetal is gone...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome it would be more apt to have been called return of the mighty asr...loved it but one regret he easily understood the hurt he caused to khushi and instantly regretted it and asked for forgiveness but khushi didn't had the same trust in arnav and apologized for her mistake quite late it might have dented there relationship the worst part trusting sheetal over her arnav ...arnav here is of the forgiving nature rather khushi bcoz love is all abt trust as said by arnav... himself...really felt sad for arnav rather khushi...loved arnav here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
avoided reading this ss of yours for a very long time as I really did not like the Sheetal track:((
Finally waiting for you to update "A Late Spring" finally read it and liked it:))

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