FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~ - Page 74

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Posted: 12 years ago
Di...
sry fr being late
awesum update
loved it
case solved bt defo its similar to d case of arjun rosh n priya...
finally culprits understand...
priya lines r heart touching wen she try to put sense in leena!!
why priya dnt want to go to hospital ?@???????
omg priya hurt
loved d bonding or concern fr priya btw all gud update di
bt want to knw more abt past pls..
do cont soon di
love u
tc
hugs..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update di...!!!
finally case solved...!!! and it was related to arjun roshni and priya...!!!
maybe roshni was like leena? and arjun he is getting the vibes but is not ready to face it...!!!
arjun said it right there is more to priya that he doen't knows...!!
love the way she was trying to comfort nisha and asking her not to feel guilty...!!! guess she was relating herself to nisha...!!!
ooo priya hurt...!!!😭 and is too stubborn to go to hospital...!! but why doesn't she want to go?😲
glad that arjun is insisting on taking her to hospital and yayy finally priya agreed...!!!
sam is such a caring friend and he knew what priya was implying and maybe he also knows her reason for not going to the hospital? glad that he called swati to help her...!!!
continue soon...!!!
next update ka wait nai ho rha 😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now you have really got me intrigued with what had happened in Priya's past. Lovely update as usual. Cannot fault it and it was a pleasure to read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm
i think its high time for arjun to know the complete truth

here priya needs a strong support

great update eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
as always fab updt...u r simply awsum writer dear...u always managed to give ur reader d best..thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
😉

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

-Unres-

This is soo much fun! 😉 😃

😆 Yeah it is.

Oh btw.. Forgotiya..

Congratulations on treading past the 100-pg mark.. We're soon going to see u at thread-2..🥳
Thank you so much, and I give you lot of credit for this too, and you know why too.

Wish u loads of good luck!!
May BL reach a minimum of 5 threads!! Coz it soo totally deserves it! And so do you, BB 1! 😉😳

Awe...fingers crossed, I would love to continue this one even after everything is resolved like our BB2's FF.😉 And I am expecting same for LIR, I know that one is going to break all kinds of records.😃

Wokay.. Moving on to the update..

Since, I am bhery bhery intelligent, I'd kinda guessed what was coming! (*ducks* Sorry! 😛)

😆


So, Nisha had been in contact with Priyanka; probably since she'd figured out what was cooking.. *hint* : Synonymous to Sameer-Swati in the past?! Maybe! 😕
Caught even though I was going to clarify this in the next one you got it already. I mean the part about Priyanka and Nisha.😉Tongue

Yes I know the evidence are all pointing at her and that is what is bothering me about this case from the beginning..
Pah! Arjun Ji.. Take a hint, my dear!!

Emmm...darling our hot cop is very intelligent and believe me he got it, but his heart is refusing to accept what his mind is telling him, and he doesn't even know how close this is related to Priya yet.

Joh dikhta hai woh hota nahi hai, right ACP Arjun?
Haaye.. Taunting, are we?!! 😉

Couldn't resist.😃

Okay, and that bit of reasoning provided by the hotwa to Shree..
if only, you could hear yourself dude! 😕

You know hotwa is multitasker right? So yes his mind is running on two track one obvious and one that is only in his head but no worries his POV is coming soon

Why do you want to know Priya?
This is what has stumped me, Shilpa!! I don't know what to make of it? Is this the part where the family got involved? Probably.. I'd wait for your next updates to know more..

My next twist.😉

Priya's take on Leena's involvement.. Bingo! 👍🏼
And Sameer realised it.. bingo 2! 😉

Yep, yep *nodding head*

"This is all circumstantial still, we have no solid proof and we could be wrong about this whole thing and it could be that Nisha got greedy and decided to sell the latest designs at a higher rate." Arjun reasoned but he knew the first scenario was more likely since Nisha already had enough money to live comfortably for rest of her life.

I feel like holding his head and shaking him up!!
Nisha wouldn't do that.. And our girl hadn't done it either!! Dude.. THINK!!

Emm..his playing his own devils advocate here.😆

Oh! So we're turning into a Chotu pankha, are we?!! 😉 Great job there! 👏

Poor Chotu is never recognized for those rare intelligeng moments, so I had to do something for that big man. He is so sweet.

Priya stopped at the door to look behind her before entering and her eyes widened when she saw Arjun close behind her.
(Mohabbatgirl Antennae activated!!) 😉😆

Oh yeah, she is always surprised that he is willing to follow her considering not too long ago he was very accusing and claimed to hate her.

Why the hell did you kidnap her? All you had to do was get the designs from where I had them hidden, and the blame would have fallen on her automatically. I had made sure that all the evidence pointed to her. She wouldn't have been able to prove her innocence at all." Leena said hysterically to the man standing in front of her.

I'd bet on my newly bought Rasasi perfume that similar/ exact words had been spoken in the past. What say?! 😉😛

Again Yep, Yep.with a slight difference of course.

"Just once I wanted to teach you a lesson but you managed to ruin it for me again. I had everything within reach, money, power and a man who loves me but as soon as you came onto the scene I felt like I was loosing everything. All I wanted was for you to go far away form our lives." Leena's shoulders slumped in defeat.
Oopsie daisy again! Shades of Grey!! I can't hate her now..

I know but remember we don't want our hotwa to take Sanyaas, he is way too hot for that and we don't want him to risk his life too much either, he need someone to live for and only way this can happen is if he can get over everything.

Now now..
The shooting fiasco deserves a loud applause for varied reasons..
No. 1 being, Arjun's dormant feelings are slowly coming to the forefront..
2. Much needed comic relief/ light-hearted moments.. Esp. Akdu Rawte!!
Wait.. Arjun didn't retaliate to that!! 😲 😉

😆 He did say he was distracted and his concentration was shot to hell. He did acknowledge it and stored to back of his mind, it will come in handy later.😉

3. Sameer.. Haaye.. I'm starting to fall for him, Shilpa.. All your fault!!
The chief of ETF grows on you for sure.😉

I don't want to be disloyal to Arjun Ji!! 😭
We can drool over both, it wouldn't be cheating but of course Arjunji will always have the lions share of our hearts.Tongue

4. Tashan talks between the duo! Both refusing to relent.. Full marks to you for that!! 👏 😉
I love it when any female stands ground against him.. 😉😆
Yep me too. Imagine what will happen in future.

And now, my most favorite dialogue of the update!! Please pat yourself on the back once! I insist!!
I'm not posting it here.. SInce it's a bit long.. But you know, which one, right?
Priya's thoughtful words to Leena..
Ahh...Yes, I do and thanks I almost struggled with it and deleted two other version I wrote before I was satisfied and now I am glad I did.

Those lines conveyed it all.. And helped me to better understand her character.. She's such a selfless soul.. And I think it is this selflessness (for her sister) coupled with her undying feelings for Arjun that give her the strength to do what is doing!! 👍🏼
No matter what she never forgot that Roshni is her cousing and Arjun loved her and I think this also helped her understand Roshni's feelings and that is why she is so forgiving when it comes to Roshni.

Priya turned to see Arjun watching her intently as if he something big just smacked him in the face. He looked pale and for a minute his face was filled with pain..
Okay.. So the antennae have been activated once again! Hope the signal keeps relaying from his brain cells to the antennae! 😉😊

Yes, again he pushed it to back of his mind but soon it will all come out and stare at him in his face.

Save your samjhae ya samjhun for the criminals Arjun, I know what I am doing..
Bwahahaa.. I soo wanted to see Arjun's face after she said that!! baby! It's time you get a reality check! 😉😆
And he did!

Emm..Yeah but let's see how he gets back at her for all this later.😉

You are going to the hospital, either walk on your own or you are going to get carried out of here..
Achha ji.. bass haq hai ek mera? Huh? (MG alert!) 😉 Nah! the guy was really concerned! 😊

His heart did stop for a second when the bullet hit her arm, that was the best acknowledgement of his feelings and where he wants to go with them. The concern was more visible because of his realization of his feelings.



Arjun wanted to make her... about Priya.
&
He was beginning to realise... Priya to the door..
Okay.. forget his! I'm banging my head on the wall, now! 🤔
It's needed, trust me, this is a slow journey because he doesn't want to face the truth yet, his first priority for now is get her to the hospital before she changes her mind.

Priya's words to Nisha.. Spot on! And very well written.. So, this is what keeps her going! I'm soo proud of her! 👏😳

Yep it does, isn't she awesome?


Arjun heard... the truth..
😲 This is one of those times, when I want him to stop digging deeper..
Emm..yes me too, and that is why you see the one step forward ten steps back method here, but you know now that, that was the final push. He is itching to get to those diaries now.😉


Okay so Arjun Ji Driver Ki driving her to the hospital.. Are we going to get a car scene with *Chupke chupke* moments? Just asking!! 😉
😆 Now I have to add something.

Phew! I'm pretty sure you're bored with the recap of the Update! Anyway, this was needed for me to understand it better and also to let you know, what I felt about it! 😃
Nope not bored at all, I am basking in your praises and grinning like crazy.😆

I'm extremely sorry, if I got carried away and ended up spilling the beans..
Never, you do wonder for my ego and my confidence in this, blieve me on this.

Anyhow! Bring on the hospital scenes, Shilpa Ji!! Me all set with Popcorn and Diet Coke!
Okay, let's see what I do with that one.

This just keeps getting better and better..
Thanks so much and yeah it does doesn't it?

And yes, I still maintain my stand.. I'm losing it.. All thanks to you and BL!
I needed some company in this and who better than another hotwa fan like you.😆

Brilliant.. Freakin Awesome work!! 👏
And here's a special wala hug for doing what you're doing.. Coz I realise, how stressful this must be, at times.. 🤗
It is but I am loving it, it keeps me on alert on how to make it even better.

Okay.. i'm going to shut my trap now! 😉

Thanks for the PM and please update sooner!! 😃


Yep, going to work on the next one right away, you won't have to wait long.



Thank you so much my sister from another mother my BB1.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks...awesome...great

Thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

That was amazing! I can't wait to read more!

Thanks so much, will try to update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

un resss


Awesome post...
Things are getting stable...Arjun is almost sure that there is more to it than what he knows about Priya
I hope he finds it out fully...

Poor Priya...she seems to be having a tough time hiding things...
and why is she against going to hospital...i was a bit confused there..

anyways, loved Arjun's stubbornness there...good that he is taking her forcefully!

cont soon!

Thank you so much VIdya.
Yes they are almost close to being stable, and he will find out soon, if not next then the update after that I plan to make him face the truth.
Yes and it's getting tougher, will explain her reluctance to go to the hospital in the next update.
Yes he is stubborn and he is about to learn the reason for her reluctance also.

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