FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Confusion hi confusion hain ...

Y was d bank robbery fiasco happened

Avinash 's entry was nice...BUT he cud have chosen other way of introduction😆

i mean , if he wud directly introduced himself as a COP...den also ETF wud have agreed...wat was d need of Robbery thing

Enough of my JOKES

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liked Arjun's theories as always ...

Swati sameer excellent

Luking forward to next part

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Loved it. Finally Swati is ready to give 2nd chance to Sameer.

And thx for clearing things abt Avinash.

Bt who is he?

Ab Arjun ko kab eshssas hoga apni feelings ka? jaldi ho jaye.😊

Plz update soon.

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Shilpa di awesome
new entry seems intresting
swati has forgiven sameer.
Now waiting for more sameer swati parts
thanks for pm

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...

I'm glad that Rathod is safe and Swati is giving him another chance ... Hope all goes well between them ...

As usual Arjun's thinking outside of the box is just amazing ... ;)

Thanks for clearing that Avinash doesn't have any feelings for Priya coz I really thought he did

Thank you so much.

Things for Rathore and Swati will be sorted out soon.

Arjun never ignores his instincts, it's almost as though he has that sixth sense when it comes to recognizing things that don't make sense and make sense out of them, that is what I love about him the most.

Avinash is very positive so no worries there.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...
Nice one shilpa di...
was waiting eagerly for this!!!

Thank u...

continue soon!!

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update, next one wil bee soon.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Glad to see that Rathore and the others got out safely. What's Avinash up to? I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

Yep, there is a very purpose behind this bank robbery that does not make sense actually. One was for Sameer and Swati's realization of their feelings.

And the other was to introduce Avinash, who has a specific reason to go out of the way to make contact with Priya.

Will reveal the reasons in next update.

Thank you so much.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: hal96
Its amazing lyk always
Loved Arjun all da way through n ofcourse his thinkin
😊

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

superb update..!!!👏

lvd it..!!!

rathore is safe n swati givng him another chance grt..!!

sik's case coming up...!!! nyc..!!

cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!

continue soon...!!

plz pm me wenevr u update..!!!

thx..!!!😊

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl
hey Shilpa.. Great Job yet again.. Awwiee.. Thank you sooo much, dear.. You truly deserve every bit of appreciation showered upon you.. :-) Now this was quite refreshing and I really appreciate the fact that it was Rathore and not Arjun being held hostage.. That would've been a bit cliched, I hope you get what I mean.. And yes, there can be nothing as impactful and scary than the mere thought of losing a loved one.. Tiffs and hurt simply flies out of the window.. And you've managed to portray that subtly yet so poignantly.. Swati's character is slowly growing on me.. Moving on to Arjun, I'm glad he did what he did.. he didn't have to comfort Swati, but he did.. Is the old Arjun slowly resurfacing or was he already there; hidden behind a facade?! That remains to be seen.. :-) And Priya, she seems to be a super-cop as well.. The new entry has really got me on the edge of my seat.. I hope he's a positive character or it'll all blow up in their faces.. Anyway, all in all, a gripping and interestibg Chapter.. Awaiting more.. :-) P.S. my landlady's stupid son turned the wireless router off and it wouldn't reset itself since then.. Aarghh!! posting frm my cellphone.. pls ignore any formatting errors.. ;-)

Thank you so, so much Avantika.🤗

Yeah, I wanted to bring Rathore and Swati's MU to clear up first and move forward together because they will both be needed by Priya again and also Arjun is going to need his best friend back, it will be much easier with Swati and Sameer working together for themselves and also for their friends.

In the next update I have put in more of Arjun's POV and why he is mellowing. The burden of guilt has weighed him down so much that he has been unable to see past that and turned into an angry man but what he is learning slowly is making him think and realize that there are things that need to be fixed before he could do what he needs to do.

Avinash is another person in Priya's life who has his share of guilt and is very positive, I have more of him in the next update.😉

Thank you so much Avantika, your words mean a lot to me.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: kunchu
great work dear!!
want to more and more..

why is Priya in such a state.. so Sik case coming up again...

maybe its time for Arjun to know the past... waiting...

Thank you so much,

Yes soon Sik will make his entry and Arjun will eventually learn what happened in the past.