FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~ - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hats off to you Shilpa. An excellent update. My heart lurched when I read about Priya but you handled it well and told as such. Very brave. So Swati and Sameer have had their chat and now he is in danger. Edge of seat stuff. Well done.
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Posted: 12 years ago

super update dear...

u wrote the whole so well...⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Shilpa it was a much needed update for me coz I was confused..but now things are started to clear for me..& about the matter of whole relevation,I know its not possible in a single update..so will be waiting the story to open up.

coming to update..priya was assaulted so brutaly,i think you are right about the fact of vulnerability of female officer in this job.
but I agree with swati's POV that arjun will not gonna hate it if the truth revealed to him coz i know priya is no way responsible for the situation Arjun is living right now.

swati's opinion overpowered on sameer's confession & relevation coz the way sameer escape without even feel swati worthy of discuss his fear was nothing but the most unloyal step.

but still i would love to see swati giving an another chance to him.

and finaly no need to say i loved this update so much coz you know how much i like it..thanks for pm shilpa.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

Okay I usually thank everyone just before the update and I always like to go in order I am so anal in this way but I have to say Thank you so much for this beautiful review. I am seriously speechless.
My friend, whom I always ask to review each of my updates, keeps telling me that I worry too much and to relax and go with the flow but I always say to her that she is biased. I have to PM you my reason for my insecurity in this later.
Anyway to your review, today I truly feel that I am going in the right direction with this FF after reading all the fabulous review of everyone here but most especially this one.
I have tears in my eyes because I manged to convey Priya the way I had envisioned her.
Yes Priya has suffered lot more than Roshni and I will explain her reason for blaming herself in the later updates, but where Arjun is concerend she has always been insecure about herself, since the first time she met him. She truly believes she is not good enough for him.
I did not want to go into details with what happened to her but her state of mind and her pain conveys it all. But as you said Arjun will shower her with his love and more for sure.
Thank you again,



Hey.. You deserve every bit of applause you get, for this one.. 😃 I'll be more than happy to help you out in any way, if needed..
And though, you didn't go into details of what happened to her; the way u've drafted it, was subtle yet poignant.. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
i knew it...i had a very strong feeling that... that is what would have happened with priya

and ur reasonings are also right...

cant wait for the ajun and priya scenes, conversations and confrontations

no arjun today...

please update soon... hope we get some arjun and priya scenes in the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved sameer nd sawtis converstion
priyas character is amazing love her
nw sameer is in danger...hope ge will be ok
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum updt...luvd it...
Bt sameer z in danger...hpe he vl be fyn soon...thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
it is awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
The update was great ...
Loved it ...
Cont. soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update and PM!

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