FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: Aliya_begh
wow di amazing...U R right priya is just like aisha...phir toh pora ff padna padega ab😃

Thank you so much Aliya, I thought you might like Priya. Hope you liked the story so far.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: prava55663
Awesome Shilpa Di..

Sameer at swati's place...waiting for the next update...

plzz continue soon di..

Thank you so much, yep Rathore takes the front seat for now and more of Priya and Swati also.

Will be updating today for sure.

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Sanchayita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

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Thanks so much for the like and the comment.

I am sorry I thought this update my clarify few things but looks like I made you more curious than ever. Okay before I post the next update I will try to clarify as much as I can so in the next update you will start to put few things together.

Yep Arjun had just started to realize his feeling but he was led to believe that there was more between Sameer and Priya and he did not want to get in the way of friends happiness, this much I can tell you.

I have the next update written, but still have to edit it so I won't be able to post until later tonight US time, but I will be updating today for sure.

<div>Thank you again for this wonderful feedback.

Thats okay Dii... I'll be waiting! And stalking too may be 😛

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl
Yet another superb update Shilpa..

Things have definitely started to fall in place.. And I absolutely love the way you're stressing on those hints.. It's all out there in the open..

Though I'm pretty sure you've added a lot of twists and turns to the final plot..

Arjun being concerned for Priya was a baby step..

And that flashback bit was very precise.. I guess the reason behind Arjun's hatred or anger towards Priya may not be Roshni after all.. I mean yes, he does blame her for what happened to his wife.. But there's something more to what meets the eye.. I hope you get what I meant.. 😕😉

Thanks.. Can't wait to read Sameer-Swati's thoughts on the whole matter..

Thanks for the PM.. And needless to say, Great job, dear! 👍🏼 Upate sooner..

Thank you so much Avantika.

Most definitely there are some heavy hints but there are more twists too as you mentioned.

As for Arjun this is how I want him to be for now to cushion the big impact which will change everything. He has not yet realiaed that his hatred has more to do with his feelings for her than his wife's death, but he is coming around and questioning things, but he also doesn't want to face the truth, hence his confusion.

Next couple of parts will mostly be devoted to Swati and Sameer but there are hints to what is coming up next for Sameer, Arjun and Priya.😉

Thank you again, I always look forward to your take on the updates.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Awesome update ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update. Will be updating today for sure.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
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thats a surprise package dear

Amazing update and now things seem to fall in place or is it just my feeling...

Arjun loved Priya but he thought she loves Sameer...

Roshni hated Priya and i guess Arjun's love for Priya or the other way around was the secret reason for that...may be Roshni felt that Priya is a threat to her and Arjun's relationship...

loved it...update soon!

Thank you so much Vidya.

Yep Arjun had just started to realize his feelings but things happened that changed the dynamics of relationship. Roshni's hatred for Priya goes back before Arjun, something from when they were younger and later on yes she was insecure about Arjun and Priya's relationship.

Will be updating later today for sure.

P.S. I am catching up with ZMD, I can't believe how much I have missed, but I am loving the updates and I love reading one part after the other.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: tani23
Superb update shilpa di

loved reading d part

i m liking d way u portrayed d past scene..from arjun's POV

want to know wat exactly happened

Ashish(I like dis name...yeh mujhe AK ki yaad dilata hain) isliye cannot say bad abt him😉

isliye emo 😡 for him

Sameer n swati had a trouble relationship ..yeh to pata hain ...now may b in next part we wud have more clarity on d rellation which dey share

Will wait for Next parts

Thank you so much Tani, glad you liked the update.

Hmm...can't reveal too much yet, but some things will be cleared soon.

Sameer's reasons are very stupid but at the time they seemed good enough to him, more revealed in the next update.

@Ashish, sorry, that name just popped into my head and I used it.

Next update later today. Thanks so much.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: abhi_arshilover
Awesome update. Liked it. Arjun-roshni's marriage was arranged marriage...interesting! It means he always loved priya. And more interesting is that no one knew how sikandar looks. Want to know what happened in those 2 days. And what was roshni's decision! Please cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm

Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Arjun was interested in Priya but he gave up too easily. Sikandar is recognized name in the crime world only so no one really knows who he is or what he looks like, accept for Priya and few others.

Will be posting the update soon, thanks again.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: hal96
Awesome ff
Lved it
Im reallii confused nw 😕
But things r clearing up
Want 2 knw more
Loved Arjun how he was worrying for priya wen she was bruised 😛
Update soon
N pray for me plleeez got xams from tuesday

Thank you so much, glad you like the FF.

I hope you did well on your exams, I definitely put in a prayer for you.

Hopefully some confusion will be cleared soon, will be updating later today.