FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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abhi_arshilover

@abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Awesome update. Loved it. What happened to priya in under cover? Roshni is priya's cousin?! Want to know more of the past. Please reveal it soon. Please cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm.

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pavi1

@pavi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

awesome update,,

loved it...

thanks for the pm...

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

great part shilpa..the relationship of the four lives are getting truly complicated..

priya had a sad past & the cut mark on her face is realy making me restless.

roshni was her cousin??? 😲 Nice to see Arjun still caring for her..

update soon.

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Awesome update ...

Loved it ...

Its getting soo interesting ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Great update. I can't wait to read more!

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Liza S.

@Liza.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Awesome update ! LOVED it
Looking forward to reading the next part soon :)

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Lvly update
plzzz cant wait
conti soonnn

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Hey Shilpa.. Thanks for the PM.. I've read both the parts together..

Must say, you're doing a great job! These little peeks into their past were much-needed.. And you were right, I can't wait for the entire story to unfold asap..

I absolutely adore the relationship between the four of them.. It's not mere friendship, the roots go much deeper.. And you've managed to portray it beautifully..

Can't wait for things to get better between Sameer and Shweta.. Well, Arjun-Priya, whoosh.. There's so much tension there.. It's like a livewire that can snap any moment..

So.. Roshni was Priya's cousin..Interesting..

I will send you a PM sometime.. I have a few doubts about the story.. Don't want to discuss them here..(For obvious reasons..) 😉😛

As always, brilliant piece of work..
Oh btw, just saying.. Can we have a part with Rathore playing the narrative? It'll be interesting to hear his part of the story.. 😊 Please PM me when u update next.. 😊