FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Another fab update and definitely worth the wait.. 👍🏼

I am loving the love-hate relationship, more hate now, between Arjun n Priya and my curiosity about their history is increasing manifold.. I am loving the pace and the fresh outlook given to each of the characters..

I am already looking forward to the next installment with Sameer n Swati .. More please.. 😊

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Really Ossam dear..

Just waiting 4 Monday...😊

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Yet another wonderful updates of Urs ...enjoying their journey

Happy Diwali!!!!

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Wonderful update ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Hey Shilpa loved the part...the story is multi-dimensional like a normal person's story...waiting to see how it unfolds...😉

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mushiroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

edited my post on page 21...😳

Edited by mushiroxx - 13 years ago

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

sorry double post...lol

Edited by mushiroxx - 13 years ago

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: funkylicious

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I'm sorry Shilpa I did read it but can't comment properly right now...

Short cut: It was an awesome chapter...👏

Can't wait to read more... I'll definitely edit sometime next week after my exam on MONDAY...

As you said maybe you would update on MONDAY so I'll wait Hopefully I'll re-edit before you post next chapter...

But honestly this was fab dear loved it..😆 Specially Rathore consoling Priya alone and Arjun over-hearing little of it😉

Hope he brain storms himself, so that he would look into Priya's decision on the very tragic day!!

Thanks so much Shru, and don't worry about the comment, I totally understand about school and exams.

Well with Diwali and all, I didn't get a chnce to update at all this week, but finally finished penning it down last night, just have to edit it now.

Thanks for liking the update, and I really want Sameer to be the best friend to Priya, Arjun is about to hear more that he was not aware of before which will really start his brain storming sessions.

Thanks again Shru.