OS : Feeling Khushi : Part 3 updated on Page 28

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Alia

@.A.l.i.a.

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Awesome ! ,,

I'm love of this Arnav .. I really want Arnav to show his love for Khushi in front of every one , especially Sheetal ! ..

waiting for the next part

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Wow that was truly amazing...loving your take on the current track...

Cant wait to read the next part

†hanks for the PM

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

brilliant os loved it waiting for the next part thanks for the pm

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SpiI

@SpiI

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Love this! Completely agree with your two cents! :D

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prabhata

@prabhata

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Nice take on current track... Keep writing.

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

really lovely...

thanks for the pm..

cont soon...

Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

hi dear just read this story
its nice
its true it seems little wierd that arnav does not notice distressed khushi
even after seeing that khushi has conducted a DNA test on him and arav
he did nothing about it
continue soon and pm me too when you update next

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

brilliant.. loved arnav and how he wanted kushi to do the massage

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

absolutely adored arnav in this fic.. please write more?
i promise you your writing does not "suck".

do you want examples of bad writing?
i'm sure i can point you towards ten or twenty..
but you aren't one of them!!

beautiful story. so cute of arnav..
why dint he pull her off to the bedroom?

i loved the description of how khushi's smile changed.. via arnav's POV.