FF:SHAMELESS Thread #5: Imp Note, pg 151 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Maira96

I never expected that Shyam would be the dead body. I still don't understand why Roy/Alice hates and wants to kill Khushi! I am really sad to hear that this story is ending. This is such good and interesting story! I love your writings and hope I get to read more of them!

Sorry I am acting like you already ended the story but I am really sad to hear about this ending. You are an amazing writer!👏

Originally posted by: princessunara

omg i was at the edge of my seat...
i am still breathing hard as if i had run a mile...omg omg that was...wow!!
this story is unbelievable!! i am shell shocked...
seriously enthralled...yeah, it was filled with twists and turns😉

amazing and omg i am glad at least 1 psycho is dead!! one out of the way and just one to go!!

btw seems like finally there r more sane people in this!!
Dia & her hubby seem to be ok to me..normal people..do u remember when her husband was mention before?

and finally Akash & Payal's stands r also clear..

and Anjali will get the well overdue psychiatrist help..

that leaves Alice/Roy & Natasha only...

btw did Roy kill his mom that time she discovered him in the garage? roy's mom has been mentioned before, do u remember😉

omg this is one heck of a story!! amazing!! thanks, love ur awesome feedback!🤗

Originally posted by: Farwa_Ibrahim

Congrats on new thread Tina... Its really hard to digest the fact that the FF with which i was attached ALMOST from the begining or so cant even remember whther it was the very begining or some updates later all i know i loved it from the core of my heart. It almost felt like my baby too u know like ur baby my neice. U know it is one of those very few ff that i ignore every other update n 1st i jump to this for other i have in my mind 1st come 1st read lolz its called in really life FIFO in accounting but i have edited it lolz... Anyways again a long update like i said u in PM abt the love encounter it still the same like i said i was sure u wont give us anythin u know na i wont say it on thread... And BTW i failed to notice one thing just now ur ff is private now n one more thing IG-DAZZELER congrats buddy... And now for update waooo loved it. Poor Akash feeling so bad for him. So her memory is comming back slowly and i think its coz of the love Arnav showeeed on her as it never came before. Their love is so pure i would say specially Khushi's. I have said before Anjali is a lost case. Shyam was so so so sick day n night he think for only one thing disgusting thank god the sick man is dead. Feeling bad for Arnav too when he got back his love he lost his sister though not practicaly n physically but he has. So at last Payal now recognized the fact that her husband needs her and she HAD a husband. Roy is sick almost as sick as Shyam n Anjali talking on a dead phone thinking he was talking to his mother but y he wants to kill Khushi? Hai waiting for next updates EAGERLY

Originally posted by: AbdulloveIPKKND

First of all, love this update. It was awesome and I was like at the edge of my seat. There was a lot of drama today.👏😉

Second, is Roy AKA Alice is crazy because the dead phone he was talking to his mom was weird and awkward. I think I was shocked and I was like totally confused.

Third, Akash knows everything and he still loves Payal. So sweet. Love the Khushi and Arnav love making scene so cute😳 and when I thought about the gun shot I was like OMG is Khushi dead? But thank god it was evil snake😆. Thank to the God.

Fourth, that evil Psycho women Alice AKA Roy. I seriously hate him to my guts 😡 and what kind of a women does that to her. Her mother made her become a guy. That is a shame.

I JUST LOVED THE UPDATE SO AWESOME AND OMG I WILL SURELY MISS THIS FF. WHEN I READ THE PM I WAS LIKE NOOO THIS CAN'T HAPPEN. SHAMELESS CAN'T END BUT OH WELL EVERYTHING HAS TO END ONE DAY. ONCE AGAIN I LOVED THE UPDATE. IT WAS AWESOME AND PERFECT. 😉

Originally posted by: fleurs

Thanks a lot dear for the PM & congratulations on the new thread🤗
The update was amazing 👏 Thank God at last Nani found about about Anjali's state. Oh gosh Roy was so close to striking Khushi today. When I read about the gun shot I was like OMG ...no ...it shouldn't be Akash . Then I was relieved when Shyam was dead.

PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON. I'm waiting

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path

Tina! Rom-thriller is indeed your forte! I read thriller very rare but this fic made me fall in love with this genre. The right amount of revelations, suspense, romance here makes it so much fun to read. So well written <33
Glad Shyam's out now! Loved the update.

-V-

Originally posted by: Akorshi

congrats fr new thread...

awesome part...

love making session was awesome...

OMG at last shyam died by roy raina...

anjali totally mental...

roy mistakenly killed shyam..he was close to kill khushi...

waiting fr next part...

Originally posted by: babli0204

Firstly Congratulations on the new thread!!!!🥳

SL is such a suspence-filled romantic thriler as promised by you!!! the Rainas (specially Roy/Alice), Anjali and Shyam gave me shivers!!!!!!!!!Such loonies man!!!!!!

Roy/alice's "call" to his/her mother gave me chills. Has he/she killed her too?!?!😲

Arnav and Khushi's passionate love-making is breath taking!!!! And Arnav made jalebis for his Khushi. He actually learnt it for her!!!!❤️

Poor Nani!! What not she has to endure in her old age!!!!!!😔

Good thing is, Payal still cares for Akash!!👍🏼

Thank god!!! Khushi is saved by a breadth of hair!!!! But will the main culprit be caught soon??🤔

What I really do not understand is Roy/Alice's such a passionate hatred for Khushi!!! I mean why??! Is Roy/Alice in love with Arnav somehow??? Or is there any other hidden reason?!!❓

Thanks for the PM!!!!😛

Originally posted by: vasuki

Congrats on the new thread Tina...tht was an awesome update... and a pretty long one too... the suspense and trill and the magic of shameless was maintained as ever!!! loved how u portrayed the fight and the kill...

and atlast someone comes to know abt Angali's condition...grt update... and it was just awesome and as trilling as ever!!!

😊