FF:SHAMELESS Thread #5: Imp Note, pg 151 - Page 15

Originally posted by: ak_maggi

Ohh God Tina...by d time this story ends i think i am going to get heart attacks one after d other...Man wat a gripping writing! its s thriller in real sense!! wow... someone must ve recorded my expressions... i was lost wid all Oh no! not Khushi... save Arnav.. ohh God Alice Roy watever pscyco thru out... exceptional story telling! loved it...congrats on new thread😊

Originally posted by: anuprika

the whole family is sooo mentally disturbed!!!

syam dead finally...

and one of them died!!!when you wrote that line

i was wodering if you have decided to stop this update there .

i would have died of anticipation😊

Originally posted by: darkrose3

I would've killed you if you have stopped with that first part 😆
I'm so glad that Shyam is dead & Anjali's craziness is finally revealed 😃
So Roy is mad too,huh? I mean apart from the identity problem he suffers. .!
Khushi is safe again & retrieving her memories.Hope she'll remember Roy soon enough. .amazing update,the adrenaline flow was great . .

Originally posted by: aquagal

OMG! The gun wrestling was totally thrilling.. No idea what could have happened!!

The moment when everybody left Khushi with Roy, I was hyperventilating.. thinking about the consequences and then he was so near to her..But thankfully nothing happened to her.. I hope police tells them that it was the same gun that was used to shot Arnav too..

Update soon

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

wow u are such an amazing writer... i was recommended this ff... and believe me... u write so well...that i have regretted not even for a tiniest moment that i went for it... infact, now i m wondering y didn't i come across it EARLIER...u r just

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and hell of a M.I.N.D.-B.L.O.W.I.N.G. WRITTER! i m really amazed with the idea of this story in the first place...i don't know if u r aware or not but u have this uncanny ability to grip d minds of all ur readers and make them sway just with ur mere but equally strong and gripping words!

i m D.A.Z.E.D.

i love ur story...it's remarkably awesome! i love the sense of the characters who U have layed out in front of us... and believe IT, not a single word is a lie...when i say... u have brought out each of the character so perfectly...whether its their unhealthy state of mind, or out of control frenzied mind, full of FEAR, dripping with care, blind with jealousy or deep in love or remorse types... each has been brought out so well!

when i began reading this story... i had no idea...eventually there will be so many characters who will never be what they look like ..but believe me every word and character of this ff was completely dripped with its own purity and strong sense!

great work! bring more on! impatiently waiting!

P.S. please add me to ur PM list too. i have requested u as buddy for the same!

Originally posted by: BigIPKKNDFan

Wow - mind-boggling update

Tina you are an AMAZING writer 👏

I will miss MG though

Originally posted by: cherry227

omigod!!! this is getting so interesting...

loving every bit of it tina :))) want to read more on akash n payal... poor nani!

roy is disgusting and scary... why is he behind khushi??? when will you clarify that???