FF:SHAMELESS Thread #5: Imp Note, pg 151 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omgomgomg!
Tinaaa x

This was just FAAAB x

Seriously! Roy is such a retard! GAY! :p

What the hell! Anjali seriously need to be taken to the phsycatrist :P ;D

The love making session was speechless :S :) <3

Yaaay! Shyams dead..like FINALLY! He did deserve is yeah?! :p ;D

OMG! Amaazing! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for the next part
awesome part
so Shyam is dead finally
and whole family knows about anjali madness great
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayli_sarun

First i m really sorry for unresing it soo late!!
But i just had to go to class!!!
Anyways
awww arhi r too cute man!!!
And khushis memoryy!!
Hell this roy is uuurrrgghhh!!!

I mmean he is new level of crazy!!
Psyco!!!
First when i was reading i thought r u gonna kill nani in this one????
And i was like NOOO!!!!


BUT YEH TU TREAT MIL GAYI HAMAIN!!
SHYAMUUU!!!!
ATLEast kai to mara kamina!!
Haha!!

I love akash i dont why but i do love him!!
And diya s husband now who is he???
Wonder whats gonna happen ??

And there is still the big question
WHY KHUSHI???
WHATS THE MOTO???

and why does he call her shameless???
I gress i will hv to wait for 5 chapters more to get my ans!!!
I love this story!!
Ccant wait for next updare!!!!

And i gave such a nice comment but that doesnt mean that i m not mad at u for keeping MG ON HOLD!!
Hell i m!!
I m off to complain to TAFFY About this TINA!!


aww thanks for the feedback. yeah, ur questions will be answered in coming chapters😉
and taffy is mad at me too😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
One question remains in my head, why does Roy hate Khushi so much. Is he also in love in Arnav and wants Khushi out of the way. He keeps says how she tormented him...is he in love with Khushi?.

Great chapter overall awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkknd_gbdfan

Finally!


NANI learns about Anjali's madness!!! And actually decides to act on it...and what the hell is wrong with Anjali? Even if it is a psychological problem, I still have no sympathy for her. yeah its mostly mental

Roy and Alice...I get why s/he is behaving *that* way, but why does s/he want to kill Khushi? And why does s/he think of her as a shameless woman? u will have to wait for coming chapters to find out😉

But I'm happy that Roy/Alice came in use at the end by killing Shyam. :D haha😆

And Dia was married? yes, remember i mentioned in gala chapter, her husband got a new "plaything"

What's happening to Payal and Akash? I can see why he is angry at Shyam, but why hasn't he done anything about Payal's "affair"? I thought that when Akash found out about it, he would immediately go for a divorce or something. But then the teary eyes kind of showed that both of them were sad...I thought Payal would be guilty while Akash would be disappointed or angry. Payal is guilt and Akash is angry, but at the dining table they could only express themselves through their tear-filled eyes

Is Roy's mom an important character? hmm, possibly😉

And what was with the broken phone when Dia's husband tried to call? the broken phone was done to show that roy/alice is unstable. he's been talking into a dead phone believing he was speaking to his mother

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvkkgasr

OMG .. Tina I am Speechless ... 😊

It was hell lot of suspense and thriller in dis update of urs... Such a fantastic update.. 👏 ⭐️ 👏
Totally enjoyed it, I am happy dat Arnav and Khushi are fine... 😊
I feel bad for Anjali , but Shyam was such a ba*****... ... 😡
Dat Roy he or she watever 😆... made me breathless when he was trying to kill Khushi 😲 , but its a relief she z fine and with Arnav...
Waiting eagerly for next update... Pls do continue soon... 😊
Thankyou for d pm dear 😊
aww glad u liked the roller coaster of a chapter..roy tiptoeing toward khushi is a jarring image isn't it?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a long update ! Thank you soo much !
I am soo glad that Shyam was dead !
Arnav's and KHushi's scene is soo cute and HOT

I am just hoping that Alice/Roy dunt harm Khushi and Arnav !
Anjali should get admitted in Metal hospital ! Can't handle that girl !

Awesome update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

Woah!
Such thrill!
You're from now on my own personal Dan Brown! (He's the only author I've read a thriller of! I prefer romance and classics, you see!) aww thanks😳

And even you finish this FF[I'm very sad, btw :'( ], you simply HAVE to come up with another thriller concept! PWEASE? i do have a thriller already planned out😉, but it'll happen after MG and another SS

Being a newbie to the thriller genre, lemme ask you one thing. Roy HAS killed his mother, right? And it was his psychopathic mind that was talkin to his "mother"?? hmm, roy's mother has been mentioned briefly in the past, maybe that would help. And it was his psychotic mind making up the conversation

And I must say, Roy! No match to any other villains I've read about! He rises to a whole new level!! agree, he's evil and psychotic all in one

You killed Shyam?! You know I love you for that! :* haha 😆
Nani's concern and Mami's indifference. All palpable. Akash and Payal. Poor couple. Victim under the evil deeds of Shyam. (R.I.H = Rot In Hell! Lol). But I don't blame Shyam alone in Payal's case! -_-

Finally! Arhi! What to say about them? I mean, WHAT TO SAY ABOUT THEM?!! Their love! Oh, hun! You made me fall in love with them. All over again. With just this update of yours. aww i love them so much too, their love is palpable

Am I over-reacting? Blame my PMSing! No way😉
Look at this! I've blabbered like anything. I hope you don't mind. 😳 Of course not, I LOVE IT!😆Thanks for the awesome feedback🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovvebarun

Oh God! That was exciting!
Anjali totally cracked up as well as roy.but why he wants to kill khushi?m i missing on something? But great chapter! Loved it!


no ur not missing anything, roy/alice's motive hasn't been revealed yet😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: emistry

holy crap! this chapter was action packed!!!


I am glad anjali's madness is out!! Now she can get the help she needs.. or she just might become the other bat shit crazy villain in this story!!

I think Dia is the only sane Raina in this story! The other two.. are I have no words!

But why does Roy hate khushi so much... Is it because he wants arnav.. or is it jealousy for khushi being perfect?!?


roy's motive hasn't been revealed yet

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