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Aaahh! I love it! It is perfect! It's just simply perfect!
If I'm being honest I didn't even watch todays episode; I just couldn't! The CVs seem to have taken character assassination to another level and it's really annoying me. The story just seems so disjointed. What was even the point in him finding out about her whole DNA investigation when he isn't doing anything about it? It's just arghghgh! So disjointed! And Arnav is currently driving me up the freaking wall! I've decided not to watch the show till the old IPK is back. I have always endured every track, let it just pan out but this time round I can't, I just physically find it difficult to digest!
Aaah tbh the CVs just need to write out mature conversations between Arshi rather than introduce such ridiculous, painstakingly difficult to watch tracks. Wait and see how the track unfolds? I'm sorry I've been doing that for too long, my patience has run out. The story no longer even makes sense, wasn't Arnav supposed to be like an arrogant jerk, since when did he play basketball and enjoy life till Khushi came into the picture.
Anyway enough of my IPK ranting 😆
Onto your as always AMAZING writing! I love your writing! Love it love it love it! Going to keep on saying it because you have such an amazing talent of putting all the right words together and just making everything flow! 👏 So once again another piece of awesome work from you!
I loved it from the beginning till the end and I think I'll probably read over it again. I want this OS in an episode. CVs if you are trolling through IF, please have a look at this. And see this... this right here! Yeh take it and put it into an episode! Please!
Everything was just so aptly described, Sheetal's expressions, Arnav's confusion at first and his beautiful realisation; all those thoughts that go through his mind as he remembers what he has been doing (or not doing) and what that must be putting Khushi through.
And then Khushi's own thoughts of course; the fact that there really isn't this whole element of truth between them, which is so true! There really isn't is there? And it's beautiful how she realises this, how she thinks over all the many times that he has accused her wrongly and all of the times when she has just trusted him blindly. So yes the time has come for the tables to turn.
I love this OS! Well done for writing it! I needed this after the annoying mood that today's episode put me into (and this was just from reading the written update).
Keep on writing as amazingly as you do!
❤️ Pinks x
Arjun
