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Niki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Woah... 😲 you nearly gave me a heart attack by showing Rathore shot in the head, Thank god he is safe... But still he is in Coma...!!!😭
I am also waiting for Arjun's entry,
Hope to see him in the next chapter... please continue soon 😊

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Vry vry nyc intro..

By god Rathore have GF..

Riya crush on him

Shree cursh on Riya..

Arjun & Sameer r siblings

Omg... plz update soon

thanks for liking the CS dear😉

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: rockz.diva
heyy nice storyyy rathore 😕 awww
waitng for nxt prt

dont worry about Rathore, noone is dying in my stories

I love happy endings, but the path of true love never run peacefully, actually forgot the real phrase, but i think it was quite near to this

Thanks dear😊

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: KiSha13
OMG riya full on fall for rathore 😳
so it will be great to see how she turns to Arjun from rathore 😉
shootout scene was bang on 👍🏼
waiting for Arjun..thanks for pm Tina 😊

thanks for liking it and for such lovely comments

Yep our Riya is full of Rathore for the time being😳

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Leki
intresting start... update soon... thnx 4 PM

thanks dear😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Omg...

really vry vry nyc update..

i luv 1st para so much... dear itni bhi tarrif mat karo Rathore ki mai behosh ho jaayu..❤️

Rathore GF is model..😲

Riya is in vry much love wit her Chief...😊

Hts of to Ri hw she save Rathore..b👍🏼

Riya tld nurse tht she is Rathore fin... 😊

Wht his family's reaction on tht & Arjun... 😲

Plz plz continue asap.

thx 4 PM.

😳thanks for such lovely comments dear😳

and thanks for liking what i have written till now

So you fainted when you read me flattering Rathore so much😆

but why not, he's such a cute, handsome guy😳

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: shrutisweety
awsome update yaar
continue soon
thanks for pm

thanks dear😊

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: tani23
i liked d first part
amazing start dear

Rathore has a GF...amazing

continue soon

thanks dear

Well of course our Rathore is a handsome guy😳, of course he's not be single nah😉

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
awesome awesome ...haye mere dil ke to tukade tukade ho gaye riya ke tarah

this is so heart touching ...but riya she is awesome...her fighting and shooting skilss is fabulous ... mind-blowing 😛😉

gosh...even i also feel to cry...😭

but precap is totally confusing type...i hope sab thik ho😕

hein, tumhara dil kyun tukade tudake ho gaya??

Yep our Riya is an efficient and intelligent girl

Why you wanna cry now?

Precap will be funny dont worry😉

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Tina, I was wondering about the title, for I liked the Sandra Bullock film with the same name. Now I see where you are going to take the story and where the similarity will come in! It will be a nice change from the usual stuff, and will provide an unexpected and fresh angle to the story.

Shyamala Aunty

well yep i'll take the backbone of the story from that movie, i really loved that movie..

But hopefully i wont follow the same path as the story, so that it may sound a bit apart

Thanks for everything and commenting, i love reading your comments😳