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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry dear for late comment..
Damn busy yes..
As usual u give ur best... and result in a such a wonderful update to all ur readres.
Love Shaina's jelousy on Riya.. Koi bhi gf ys thodi na bardarshat kar sakti hai , ki uska bf jane ya anjane kisi aur ke bare baat kare ya soche ,@ tht time she is like volcano for at tht girl.
Riya is always sweet & nyc girl..😊
And last D Impatient Arjun
He always obeserve Riya ,
Love hw he think , whole wrld burden on her shoulders.
Hw he grabbed her for dance.
And For Dance :
i like these songs , so i suggest ths songs.
1 Khuda Jane frm Bachna ae hassino
2. hum-tum frm hum-tum
3. Ek din teri rahone mai frm Nasseb
4 . Dil leke dard a dil le gaye. frm wanted
5. Khuch Khaas hai frm fashion
6. Tu de de mera saath frm Raaz
ab bas bahut saare songs de diye maine... (Actually list bahut lambi hai😉 , badi mushkil se apne aap control kiya hai.. )
Plz update soon..
Love precap..
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
That was a amazing ...
Awww I can't wait for Ariya's dance ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big thank you for liking my updates
and i'll personally reply to each comment another time, thanks for such a lovely comments.
but i had drafted a small part since a few days, i'll be posting it as a small teaser hope you like it.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 11A

Just as Arjun took Riya for dancing, a romantic tune started to play.

"Riya put your hands on my waist, will you! And will you please look at me?" Arjun reminded Riya.

But Riya was still checking Shaina out, and absently put her hands on Arjun's waist and started to move with the music. However she was not concentrating at all on Arjun.

"Yeh Pagal ladki, kitna romantic song hein, but she isn't even paying attention to him nor the song," Arjun said a bit wounded in his ego. He knew that he was not the most handsome man in the world, but he wasn't that bad, that Riya was ignoring him that much. He pulled her closer to him to get a reaction, but Riya, was still keeping all her attention on Shaina.

Baahon Mein Chale Aao
Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda
Yeh aaj ka nahin milan
Yeh sang hai umar bhar ka
Baahon mein chale aao
Ho, humse sanam kya parda
Oh humse sanam kya parda

Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh
Baahon Mein Chale Aao...

Chale Hi Jaana Hai, Nazar Churake Yu
Phir Thaami Thi Saajan Tumne Meri Kalayi Kyu


He again dragged her even more closer to him, and finally he managed to get Riya's attention.

"Yeh kya kar rahe ho, chodo muhje?" Riya said a bit embarrassed at the way Arjun was holding her. Riya finally looked at him in his eyes, in which she got then completely lost, and completely forgot what she was gonna say.


Kisi Ko Apna Banake Chod De, Aisa Koi Nahin Karta
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh
Baahon Mein Chale Aao...

Kabhi Kabhi Kuchh To, Kaho Piya Humse
E, Kam-Se-Kam Aaj To Khulake Milo Zara Humse

Hai Raat Apani, Jo Tum Ho Apne, Kisi Ka Phir Hame Dar Kya
Sh, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh
Baahon Mein Chale Aao...


They danced like this till the song was over, and both were still lost in each others' eyes. Riya had completely forgotten about Shaina, and she was only enjoying being in Arjun's arms. Finally when the song was over, Riya and Arjun stopped dancing, none appeared in a hurry to leave each other from their arms.

Neither knew that they were being observed by Dadi. Dadi went towards the DJ, and asked them to play again another sweet romantic tune.

I know it was a very small update, but haven't got much time for more. So please forgive me and enjoy this small teaser. I promise next update will be longer'

Next song:

Ek din from Naquaab from Dadi's choice


i'll pm later when i complete chapter 11😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...super romantic

nice way of arjun to grab riya's attention during dance
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow arjun moved her more
untill riya gave attenction to him
so romantic 😳
they r lost in each so sweet😳
dadi again started music😳
continue soon
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
heheheh!! riya ignored him!! poor arjun thought he wasnt good enough!! 😆 update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww ariya dance was soo romatic
huh really yaar riya to bhav h ni deri thi but but 😛
romatic cutee bg music waz juz woOoW love ittt even though itz small loved ittt superb

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Posted: 12 years ago
read both parts in a go...
nice one...romantic...so Arjun wishes for attention from Riya!!!
loved that!!!
post soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
bass itana hi tha...
But jithna vi tha sweet tha...
Update soon...

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