FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

The part was amazing ...

What Arjun did for that baby , I truly respect him Dil sey ...

Loved the way he with authority took Riya's hand for dance ...

Ariya's love story is slowly-slowly blossoming ..

Waiting for next ...

Cont. soon ...

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diva

@rockz.diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

pheww read 2 updates bk to bk hmm..
m really feeling sad for shaina 😭 i wish rathod ko sab yaad ajayee
ariya lvd d way they solved d case..
ariya moments r juz asusual superbbb🤗
😒 i understand y shains shouted at riya but awww meri riya shez soo sweet
ariya dance omg m waitnggg eagerly it waz superb update lved it huggiee

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Very nice, Tina. Arjun and Riya and Shaina are all right, but what I really liked was the case. So well sketched - the social problem of poor little rich kids neglected by their parents, who have time for everything except their children.Best of all was the way it was sorted out so neatly in the end; an exercise in creative compassion from Arjun.

Shyamala Aunty
a big thanks to all those who have liked and appreciated my updates...

i'm back with a very long update for this one, hope you all love reading it the way i enjoyed writing this😆

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Hey Tina,
Just read both the parts and they were AMAZING 👏
I loved dadi when she said 'Why don't you get married?' 😃
Felt really sad for Shaina, I wish Rathore soon gets back his memory and shower her with love again😊
And Ariya Wow, they are so sweet. Loved Arjun's 'Why don't you marry me then?'
And it was so sweet of him to look after her throughout the evening and asking her for dance
I liked the case and Arjun's way of dealing with it too
I loved every bit of it 😊 And I am very excited to read the next part now...

Well for their dance, I would love to see the song 'Ek din teri raahon mein' from the movie Naqaab. Just a suggestion. 😳

Thanks for the PM and please update soon
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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Lol, Dadi!! 🤣 She just pops up at random moments like a bhatakti hui aatma but says the funniest things!

All I ever hear is 'Why don't you get married?'; love Arjun teasing Riya about it all the time!

Aw, Shaina...I can understand why she's jealous of Riya but... 😒 Still, absence makes the heart fonder so her avoiding Rathore will help bring him closer.

Loved the case, by the way. A really interesting one - I felt bad for Meera but she was lucky Arjun was there, I guess. She reminded me of the case in Arjun with the groom dying where the sister killed them for revenge. I couldn't quite blame her and I couldn't blame Meera either.