FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Awesome ff...i read all the 3 updates in one shot today...i loved dadi...

and this new single Arjun...

cont soon...

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Dear Tina,

You have not disappointed me, my dear, and to tell the truth, your Chapter 2 was so very good that I was a bit afraid the next one might be a let down. But it wasn't and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Now all you have to do is to keep it up, and I am sure you will take care that the Arjun-Riya spats are peppy and fun, and not over done on either side.

But what I am really looking forward to is Rathore coming back into your story. I think he is getting a raw deal on the telly, and I hope you will make it up to him here at least!

Shyamala Aunty

PS: Two very minor mistakes. 'Fiancee' has been deprived of both its 'e's throughout, and Tina, I was impressed that Dadi could actually lift Arjun!!😉"

Once Dadi had put Arjun down, Dadi asked Riya to get her things ready since for tonight she'll be staying with her in her room, "Of course only if you don't mind it."

See how carefully I read your FF!

a big hug to everyone who have liked and commented on my updates, and sorry if i havent replied individually...

here i am with my next update, hope i manage to maintain your interest in this one also😳

Till now a brief recap:

Sameer is in coma

Riya lied about being engaged to Sameer

Sameer's family have taken Riya to be Sameer's fianc, and brought her to their home.

Finally Arjun, Sameer's small brother, and Riya have met.

Chapter 3

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Tina you nailed it as always..
Arjun is such a khadoos..poor Riya badly insulted by Arjun 😭
OMG end..Riya thaught Arjun is following her 😆
Precap sounds cool..update soon