Arhi SS Chamkili. Link to thread#2 and AN on Pg-135. 01-7-14. - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: McNinja


Hey! Glad you updated. I have to agree with you, the track is getting somewhat interesting now. But i'm still disappointed with how they have been executing it. I'm missing the layered story telling that they were known for. That being said, the ME was a nice treat, although there were a few things that were lacking...it still had hints of vintage IPK and because of that I am glad. The previous two episodes have been a lot better too..hoping this upward trend continues. I hope we see tiger Khushi rather than the martyr once again but let's see what CVs have planned for us.

Did anyone else want to slap this Pooja? And havent we all met a Pooja in real life too? While i hated her, if I'm being honest then this is how the first few interactions between Khusih and Arnavs circle would go right? We havent seen any on the show but Khushi would be degraded, mocked. I'm glad she stayed true to herself though when dealing with the biatch. I did enjoy the "PDA" Arnav was showing, I wish he would show more. 😆

And of course, vintage Arnav. Flips out at Khushi, hurts her..only to be tortured himself. I quite miss these scenes. I hated him when he does do this but watching his realizations, regret afterwards is always worth it. Looking forward to how he fixes it this time.


Wow! So, a college friend, his wife who most definitely had a crush on me back in college, two of my exes and my wife and amidst all this Arnav Singh Raizada, What the f**k!'
I literally laughed out loud at this part, because I was thinking the same thing...what has Arnav bitwa gotten himself into.

Can't wait for the next update!

Well actually I think the layers are probably finding their way back, I mean the way, we are getting to see Khushi's pity for Aarav and yet her spirit to fight whoever shall try to come between her and Arnav. And then again finally the story is unfolding from at least three different POVs, Khushi's, Arnav's and Sheetal's, with everyone right in their own place, and yet things r not right (though not realy sure of Sheetal)
But anyways, thanks a lot for reading the story and commenting in such a detailed way, makes me so happy😳 And ofcourse we all know a Pooja😆 infact using this name was a very deliberate thing, the idea was to present not a very particular woman here, but some woman from Arnav's world and how they would react when one of the best of their world decides to marry outside, and then what better name than Pooja, Poojas are actually a different kind of majority😆 and of course this is how I picture Khushi's entry into his social circle, initially she'll be out of place, remember when Arnav was at GH.

And ofcourse that was typical Arnav, the only way he knows to let out his hurt is through his anger, and somewhere deep down he has begun to take Khushi for granted, knowing she is not going anywhere. But then, hurting Khushi has always meant hurting himself, and he realizes his mistakes as well, and nowadays even tries to correct it in whatever way he can. But anger is an important part of his personality and though its frequency may vary but it is an almost permanent part of who he is, like being ott at times is Khusi's thing. So they'll fight, torment each other but yet be together. Always. Or atleast thats how I see them.

And finally about, "Wow! So, a college friend, his wife who most definitely had a crush on me back in college, two of my exes and my wife and amidst all this Arnav Singh Raizada, What the f**k!' I myself was laughing while imagining Arnav is such a ridiculous condition. BTW, one thing that I really like about this story is that it gives me the chance to finish Arnav's 'What the!'😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
OMG I feel so bad for kushi. Poor soul.

Plz do continue.and pm m
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
plz plz plz plz plz update next part sooon arnav done the damage and know time of repentance from his side but i don't want khushi to forgive him sooon plz waiting eagarly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
wow this was a superb update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
And there is he goes putting his foot in his mouth again..

I really want him to give it back to this Pooja caricature, what a vile woman!

As for Khushi, my heart goes out to her..

Do update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Poor khushi...I feel bad for her...
She has to go through all that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
hey gr8 update
what an entry by lavanaya
superb
update soon dear and thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sargamfriends

👏 absolutly loved it...it was nt tht Arnav is ashamed of her it was more tht he was incapable of protecting her yet again...tht was very well written hehe Arnav is in trouble again...😆...👏 loved the entry of Lavanya and her statement...in all please continue i am loving this SS...its like evolution of Khushi

Arnav respects khushi the most and he is not someone who says things just for the heck of it, he says things he really believes in and he has acknowledged that Khushi is far far better than him. But then there r moments now and then when we say thing we don't really mean and then regret and funnily mostly the victim of these flip-outs are those who r the closest to us, and that is what happened with Arnav. And yes he is angry at himself for not being able to do the right thing, but then Arnav is a changed man now and can control his anger to some extent with the help of Khushi of course and Khushi is definitely not someone who likes creating scenes. So yes Khushi stoped him earlier and he did stop, but he regrets it later, though I think the way he left the gathering, left nothing unsaid as such.

And Lavanya has been one of my most favourite characters. And I really wanted to give her a dhamakedar entry, while thinking I had thought it differently but then they say only 50% of what you originally think makes its way on the paper and so the scene got completely changed, but I too like this one better😳

And lastly thanks a lot for ur lovely comment... such things keep me going 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: laddoo598

And there is he goes putting his foot in his mouth again..

I really want him to give it back to this Pooja caricature, what a vile woman!

As for Khushi, my heart goes out to her..

Do update soon :)

Arnav bitwa never learns from his mistakes😆
I sometimes feel he is almost like a child with Khushi😊 an adorable one at that😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Loved your SS - Chamkili - Awesome. Looking forward to part 4.
PM me.

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