Arhi SS Chamkili. Link to thread#2 and AN on Pg-135. 01-7-14.

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

i am really glad to see the update ...and when sheetal is going out of their life ...

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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

lovely update...

read it with so much mazaa...

i really love to read longgg updates..

actually i read it today only..all six parts.i must tell you starting was bombastic,fantabulous mindblowing..

that road scene was just epic..

and the storyline is great too..

Passion is the word ..i sawin the starting updates...right now its going quite casual..(not bad at all) but still i want to say..START WAALI BAAT NH HA..may be cause og the track it feels so..but m too much enjoying this...

so we can expect shitall to open up with her plans in the coming updates cant we??

and WE CAN ALSO EXPECT U TO UPDATE SOON 😉

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Hello! Sorry I'm late.. I'm soo glad you updated this story, this happens to be one of my favorite SS.. :) I loved how Khushi didn't want to be selfless for once and decided not to give Sheetal a ride but Uff-fo Nani had to intervene.. -_-

I really dislike Sheetal, she seems to have some ulterior motives..I love how Arnav is looking out for Khushi and giving her the support she needs.. Ooh Khushi met her old school crush, this ought to be fun.. :P I hope the next chapter comes soon, thanks for the pm..

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

when are you going to update again

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Komal.S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

oh oo ! time for asr to go through the mental trauma khushi went through !

wonderful update continue soon

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: ranogill
when are you going to update again

Hey I am sorry this might take some time but I'll be updating my other story 'Tangent Worlds' sometime tonight do check it out and lemme know what u thought of it😳 And after that its 'Chamkili's turn😊

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: -Shalu-

Hello! Sorry I'm late.. I'm soo glad you updated this story, this happens to be one of my favorite SS.. :) I loved how Khushi didn't want to be selfless for once and decided not to give Sheetal a ride but Uff-fo Nani had to intervene.. -_-

I really dislike Sheetal, she seems to have some ulterior motives..I love how Arnav is looking out for Khushi and giving her the support she needs.. Ooh Khushi met her old school crush, this ought to be fun.. :P I hope the next chapter comes soon, thanks for the pm..

Hey! glad to hear from you once again and thanks a lot for your very generous comment, it's so sweet of u to actually say that its one of ur favourites😳 I am flattered😳

Btw, the Khushi that I fell in love with was some where between good and bad, black and white, selfish and selfless, traditional and modern and so Khushi here is going to be somewhat like that😊 And about Arnav, Shital and even Khushi for that matter, I would say its too soon to judge for even I am struggling at present to try and figure out how I want them to be😆 So nothing is decided yet. But I hope u have fun reading it, coz I am loving writing it😃

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: srija.singh04

Hey! glad to hear from you once again and thanks a lot for your very generous comment, it's so sweet of u to actually say that its one of ur favourites😳 I am flattered😳

Btw, the Khushi that I fell in love with was some where between good and bad, black and white, selfish and selfless, traditional and modern and so Khushi here is going to be somewhat like that😊 And about Arnav, Shital and even Khushi for that matter, I would say its too soon to judge for even I am struggling at present to try and figure out how I want them to be😆 So nothing is decided yet. But I hope u have fun reading it, coz I am loving writing it😃

I love your description of Khushi in this SS & I very much look forward to seeing all her various shades even the grey ones. The CV's really butchered her character during this track & I love how you are rectifying that.. Really I mean it when I say favorite, I have read a few stories based on the Sheetal track which were good in their own ways but your story is the one that I love the most.. :) The way you described Khushi's agony and Arnav's guilt was really great, I could honestly feel the gut-wrenching emotions through your words & trust me I don't get moved easily.

Hehe I know i shouldn't judge Sheetal yet considering that you have not made it clear to us whether she is positive or negative.. But I dunno, something about her doesn't give me a good feeling.. But I shall heed your advice and try not to judge her..:P Nothing is decided yet? Oh is that a hint? Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.. Hope you update soon.. :D

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Well, we are going to have a working Lady now; Khushi Singh Raizada and what a treat it is going to be for us, to see the hidden talent this girl has been hiding for so long. I am sure, she is going to surprise us immensely and astonish Arnav, though he has had some intuition so far. I am thrilled that Lavanya has taken her under her wing and will be there for her Chamkili.👏

So far, the story has been shaping up very well. Love the comfort level between our two love birds and you made us really see the intense love they both share in spite of all misgivings. 😃

As far as Sheetal is concerned, she is quite envious of Khushi and wishes that she was in Khushi's place. Well, for Khushi's sake, I feel that does not happen and I don't quite like Naniji and the rest of Raizadas favoring Sheetal so much. Khushi nearly lost Arnav because of their meddling and confusion they created for their Chotey and Khushi bitiya, with regard to Aarav.

Btw, where is Aarav???.

Great writing. Brilliant Job.👍🏼