Short OS : We Missed The Moment...Part 5 CONCLUDED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Its truly heartwrenching. yu portrayed the pain and the gap between a couple who married for luv but forgot tht only love is not enough for a relationship to survive. I felt bad for Khushi n Arnav.Very very well written... 👏 👏

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Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow!! Amazing!

Is there another part??😆

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abavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Beautifully written Desi... the oncoming gap between the couple was well portrayed!

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arnvkushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Its heart wrenching to see Kushi in so much pain..

My eyes were filled up reading the 2nd part... u touched me dear..

Thank u for d PM.😊

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Really great update! Hope there is a part 3! Callous Arnav really needs to be taught a lesson!

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sardeeeeeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

YAY!!!!!
YOU'RE BACK!!!!
I was actually wondering why the mods messages YOU, because your stories, although they're mature, actually have this meaning behind it (hope you understand what I'm saying :P), and other peoples stories that are mature are like " oh, I'm horny, let's fu*k each other" type, and they aren't banned!!!
I happy you've decided to come back.
This was a lovely one shot!!
Didn't like Arnav much here, loved NK :)
You write sad things beautifully!!!
Alright, I'm off to listen Little Things and Every Thing Has changed on repeat :P
Thanks for the pm :)