MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 51

amazing. gunjan is a gem. mayank plz protect nupur

feeling bad for both

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

pianful update

i know it is sorry

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

Di...

Certainly I don't have any words for this update..

what should I say..

great...

Brilliant..

all these are small small.words for you..!!!

thanks alot dear... ur words are really honoring thnku

All I can say..I actually..loved this..

This update has touched my heart...

I loved each and every word..

Mayank getting burned from inside..seeing Nupur

Nupur...she is just breaking down...into pieces in each passing time..and finally burst out her all anger...and everything infront of Mayank..

Even I wish he would have instead of going away..must have moved forward and hugged her..tightly...saying...her that he will be with her..

saying soothing words to her..consolling her...

But he left..her..

I know..it's the actual reality of life..but still I wish he would have just hugged her..just hugg..not even speaking anything..just hugging her...

thnks for liking it
she is but sumwhere just mayank is not reponsible for all tht she is too... she has also made thing bigger than they were.. they both have eqaully made this mess...

donot worry they will sort it out tgther too

I am desperately waiting for the next part..

I want to see his reaction...

But why Mayank you left her..

Loved the way Gunjan..made Mayank realise his mistakes...she was absolutely right...absolutely...

thnks for liking her... will cont soon

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

wow...thats all i gotta say...please update the next part...

Thanks alot Partner
will cont soon hopefully this time

Originally posted by: gopi06

nice updt fiza
loved majan scene ..you are correct fiza I am liking this gunjan more & more with each updt
don't be sorry fiza..I can read mayur separation & sad ending stories but this peace is beyond that ..its not about MU & separation..its about nupur's struggle in her life ,her emotions & her feelings ..I am first time reading a story like this so after reading previous updt I just felt emotional{ credit goes to you..you are such a talented writer}..I am sorry if I offended you ..plz cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnak alot dear for liking it

aray pls imnot at all offended its just tht k i donot like it to make u all sad
i want whn anyone cums here should feel good not sad.. n sumhwere in this ff its getting to mcuch
n u not reading means alot ... i have never seen u like this so i was really feeling bad

and thanku so much for honoring me with ur words thnk alot

Originally posted by: drmaha

oh wow...

i love gunjan's pov ..

mayank concrned wasnt enough for nupur to gorget all those wht he did to her but gunjan pov i loved it...


she made him thought tht he is wrong..


lovely dear...

pls update soon caant wait to see both of thm together...


🤗

sumwhere its not fair with mayank too... i knownupur is miserable but he is too
u will soon see them together dear

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

Beautifully

thansk alot

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

amazing. gunjan is a gem. mayank plz protect nupur

thanks dear
yes she is n he will

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

poor MN... dey r soo messd rite nw!💔

ya they are
they have actually created this mess

Originally posted by: kirti123

feeling bad for both

gunjan is nice here

continue soon

😊

hmm i know
thnk dear
will cont this time hopefully soon

Nice update. Mayank shud hug her!

Sigh !!!