My Fallen Angel- chapter 8 Pg (41)

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Abi

@Abi.Na

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

urgh! seriously this Arnav always gets mad...

anyways thx for the pm!

continue soon...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Fab Update !!

I loved the fact that you gave out both their POV's with regards to their proximity to each other.

The way you wrote about Khushi and her first step to recovery was absolutely brilliant !! That must be difficult part to write i am sure.

The Precap also sounds good , Doc Raizada snaps finally !!!😕

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Loved it
it was fabulous
Thanx for pm

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123vava

@123vava

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

awesomeee

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mrign

@mrign

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Loved it! Arnav's behaving like a teenager in front of her and so is she ;) loved how u portray Khushi's emotions...

Thanks for pm!

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Oho, Arnav isn't the only one with a bad past too!

Wonderful!

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Progress..yay...she moved her leg a bit...and also progress in their relationship.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Just read all the chapters and love your portrayal of characters, so differently related to each other but the essence of IPKND can still be felt... Khushi has lost the will to believe she will ever walk again and the last chapter reveals Arnav has a past too,,, hope they heal each other... Your quotes at the beginning of each chapter are food for thought...