My Fallen Angel- chapter 8 Pg (41) - Page 14

It's a refreshing change to see a positive and cheerful Arnav. Well narrated story.

very nice update. well at least they seem to be making some progress.
they might not know it yet but they are made for each other, thats why she fits in his arms so well.

OMG OMG!!!! Did u mention me ?😳☺️...I should have been da first to comment here..I have been checking fr updates almost everyday since I came across dis SS but da last 2 days had been quite hectic n I couldnt log in here 😔...Thank u again for keeping ur promise though n thanks a zillion for mentioning me 🤗

wonderfull ff , emotions are beautifully written

Awesome update. Loved the way Arnav is trying so hard to make her better. They r attracted to each other too.

wow..wonderful part

Great update...arnavs a real good soul

yes agree that nicholas sparks is great!! read his books m a big fan of his writing!!

Originally posted by: flowers4u

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Originally posted by: crackerszone

OMG OMG!!!! Did u mention me ?😳☺️...I should have been da first to comment here..I have been checking fr updates almost everyday since I came across dis SS but da last 2 days had been quite hectic n I couldnt log in here 😔...Thank u again for keeping ur promise though n thanks a zillion for mentioning me 🤗

Did u know I have a thing for hot doctors? 😳...and now I got to know u have a thing for long comments 😆...No worries..since u r giving me a dose of a Hot doctor..I would in turn analyse ur writing in every way I can 😆...after dat u decide if U really want a long comment from me 😛😳

Well I loved dis chapter as well...It was perfectly synchronised to where it left off...I really love Arnav's character over here...He is so different from what we readers usually read in every oder works...I mean dis Arnav is quite easy going...provides less resistance towards inner desires n feelings and obviously admits to it...I love da fact dat dey have already realised dey r sumwhat attracted 2wards each oder n finds each oder extremely good looking...I guess dats da first step and dey have taken it...although khushi has many gourds shielding her and I guess u plan to make her a hard to crack case...but yet she too lets her gourds down in dis chapter whenever Arnav truly tries to make her comfortable...dat part shows dat no matter how much act u try to put up,ur loved ones will always see through it and will help u get urself bak to a point where u no longer need to put up a facade...I know khushi will be difficult but atleast she is willing to let Arnav try...Arnav's character is maintaining a perfect tone till now...he is being carefull wid his feelings since yet his first priority is to get khushi walking...Its good dat he intends to find a place in her agonised heart...shows he has already gone deep wid khushi...I like da fact dat u maintained a borderline between Arnav's mind n brain coz at dis point its very important for him not to let his heart completely overshadow his thoughts...He is stiffly maintaining his profesionalism and voying to make khushi okay again...release her from her physical inabilities and her insecurities...honestly dis is what keeps me glued to dis story...it presents a situation where one needs to gain da oders trust n heal her both physically n mentally...I guess if Arnav does dat succesfully den dere will be no question dat he is da perfect lover 1 could find

I love da lil conversations between da duo...I love da monologues of both da characters...dey almost always think abt each oder 😆...only khushi keeps slipping away into her dreadful past but I guess Arnav is quite good at dealing wid her mood swings..its cute...Its really nice to see khushi already finds Arnav different from oder docs...I mean dis time he is not gonna fail her like oders..I hope so 😉..but its completely up to u what u wanna do...It seems like khushi is already trusting Arnav wid her vulnerable side..I hope he doesnt screw up..I dont want khushi to go through any more pain...da poor thing is already enuf angry wid her life,...I can see its not gonna be easy to make khushi try n stand...but I dont really mind it until u make Arnav sweep her off her feet and say dat its a pefectly sculptured body fo😳r him ☺️...I really love da last part...Now I am just waiting to see how Arnav n khushi's relation progreses both as "doc-patient" and as lovers...and I cant wait fr da next update to see what is Arnav planing to do wid her n how will khushi cope in da arms of her prince charming

U have a very good writing skill...Keep up da good work...U sketch characters neatly and put dem into suitable settings dat makes da story appealing to da readers 👏...dis update had good humour as well as right amount of emotions...I loved it to bits

Was dat long enuf??..I hope so 😳...Update soon please and a lil longer next time..I know my demands never ends but what can I say...I just love dis story 😊