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asrcraze

@asrcraze

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Posted: 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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La thank you firstly for handling this track way more sensibly than the CVs. Khushi is rightly worried about having Sheetal in both her home and Arnav's office and her reactions are so realistic to the current situation. 😊

I liked it that Arnav left his office just to inquire with his wife why was she so desperate to reach him.

Thank you for the sweet, intimate moments between them. The way our CC views ASR he shouldn't be able to keep his hands off her 😉

Oh what a dilemma for Khushi! If she questions him and his answer is a yes she will have to hear an unpalatable truth and if his answer is a no Arnav will have to digest the lack of trusts his wife has for him.

But she finally realised that their love is above all. Above all the questions and the doubts.

And the end was sigh! The expression of love, of belonging to each other and the trademark Khushi being lifted in his arms. ⭐️

You better write a lot of stories and soon 😊

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow La you finally wrote and posted sonething after a very long time and I am so happy that you did. I dont understand why the heck were you nervous to post such an amazing OS. I loved how you have brought out Khushi's inner feelings so perfectly. I am sure this is what is exactly going on in her mind now. I also appreciate the way Arnav understands Khushi and makes sure that she is not hurt in any way. Khushi's realisation that Sheetal is the past while she is the present was very well written. Their last confrontation in the office shows their faith in each other where she asks for his forgiveness, he understands her view point and forgives her. Thank you so much La for giving Khushi's POV so perfectly. Now I am waiting for an update of Mistake by you. I am trying a new font from my phone so I dont know how it will turn out.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

LA!!!

The OS was fab

I simply loved it

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE

your writing style is very good

if not for yourself then for us

loved khushi here... her insecurities was really visible here...

she wanted to trust him but she also couldn't ignore the similarities

If I was in khushi's shoes I'd have become mad

Thanks a lot for the dedication

*Hugs*

I love you dammit!!!

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Jessica

@jessicad

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Posted: 12 years ago

I wanna unres this cos I just want to!

Aww La!

Why were you apprehensive on posting this? It's sooo good! SO GOOD!

The entire time I had a smile playing on my face because you brought out her insecurities and thoughts so well. The fact that she knew Arnav was hers and loved only her all along, and when she realized it, she made it a point to apologize even though she didn't directly question his past. Just aww!

It was like a journey of self discovery and how she comes to realize that it doesn't matter who he was with in the past, all that matters is now. The present. :)

Love Arnav and Khushi's equation with each other and how he left the meeting for her and got home 😳

Mujhe aisa koi dedo bhagwaan. pleej 😳

You know I loved it... you want me to say it? 😆

Lovedit!

and Iloveyou! <3

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

MEIN hoon Res KI bacchi

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Brilliant just brilliant .. loved how arnav stops her from apologizing as he realised how
Tough all this has been on her, can you blame her for feeling insecure..
This is what a husband should be.. who gets angry but then thinks logically.. and same with khushi, I'm glad she thought about it and came to her own outcome and trust and believe in her husband..<3
Thanks for the dedication *hugs*
Keep writing.. because your awesome and write the emotions brilliantly!! <3

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb dear
thanks for the PM
simply loved it

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome OS...Thanks for the PM

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank God!
Finally atleast in an OS she just blurted it out!

Loved it!<3

The emotions that Khushi was going through was nicely brought out!
And yes i did like Arnav reaction, he was angry, hurt but also saw it drom her point of view.
And liked how he comforted her!