OS:THIS IS MY HOUSE! OLD IPKKND STYLE! PART 2 *ON HOLD* - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: A_R_S

Nicely written, waiting for more.



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Originally posted by: livluvbollywood

continue soon please I like this concept of arnav changing and khushi being worried. its different :)



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueivy

nice one.. PM me the next part
n yeah i agree with you on the part how CVs show him like he is any common man..huh!!!!!



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Originally posted by: zee_riya

awesome os...loved it...

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Originally posted by: ruby1994

Nice one..cont soon.. 😛



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OS part 2: JOOTHON MEIN JUIIICCE!

KHUSHI had it all planned. She knew what she had to do to make up to her piya.(HUSBAND)

She had to be the perfect wife, she smiled o herself as she walk in her room with a tray which had orange juice and pancakes on it. Her happiness was on such an extent that she didn't notice the table and tripped. The pancakes fell flat as the orange juice glass smashed on the floor, spilling the juice in Arnavs shoes.

Her eyed widened as her hands flew to her mouth covering her "O".

KHUSHI: HAYYE DEVI MAIYYA.

She stared at her husbands shoes, as she bent to clean them up before her husband awakes, she heard a grunt: a sign her husband was awake, Enough to scare the he'll out of KHUSHI who dashed out of their room for her life.

30 minutes later

Arnav: HP! HP!

HP stares at the R family, who just look at him sympathetically, while KHUSHI bhabi smiles at him in a weird way, her face looking as if Shes bout to cry.

Arnav: WHO THE HE'LL PUT ORANGE JUICE IN MY SHOES!

KHUSHI stares at him wide eyed.

KHUSHI: Hiccup 1...Hiccup 2...hiccup 3..

Arnav stares at her and misunderstands, he scolds himself for being his old self, someone KHUSHI hated. He couldn't lose her.

He just smiled and said it's ok an left.

Sheetal stares at the scene, shocked to see Arnav backing out. She walked towards his room after everyone left, she watched from the door as he caressed a picture, a smile playing on his lips, the same lips which were now touching the picture and she realized it was Khushi's.

After 30 minutes

Arnav: KHUSHI!

KHUSHIs eyes widened as she dropped the jalebi syrup onto the kitchen slab, she could hear her husband coming, and she quickly hid under the kitchen slab, her head ducked as she tried to avoid a very angry ASR who she thought figured out it was her instead of HP.

Arnav entered the kitchen, he had seen not seen his wife anywhere since this morning's incident. He was scared, like hell, had she left him again seeing his anger. Would she be in the Mandir today. He had been running around the house searching for her , yelling her name out in desperation.

He felt something weird Sticking to his shoes, something icky, he realized he still hadnt changed his orange juice filled shoes, but his worry for his other half was enough for him to not care, at the moment he could even avoid his lowering sugar level.

He was about to leave when he saw a rainbow colored veil. He raised his eyebrows, and he remembered something.

- FLASHBACK-

He walked into the kitchen hearing noises. Khushi start making weird noises in the kitchen and he gets disturbed and he puts the phone on hold and sees Khushi making voices then he calls out for ANjali and asks whats happening why is there so much voices. ANajli comes and says that there are no voices and he turns around and sees that Khushi has vanished and Anjali also goes out of kitchen, Khushi is hiding behind the cupboard and giggling. then by mistake she drop the instrument through which she was making voices. ASR moves in that direction, and bends down to sees KHUSHI covering herself.(DETAILS COPIED FROM WU ON NOV 16)

Flashback ends

Arnav smiles to himself, and wonders why she was doing this, he walks towards the cabinet, and bends down like he had a year ago, and sees his litle minx covering herself. He stares at her amused.

Arnav: Khushi.

Khushi: I'm sorry, I'm sorry, Im sorry.

His heartbreaks as he stares at his KHUSHI holding her ears, her eyes shut tight, repeating sorry.

Arnav: hey..sshh, khushi, hey what's wrong.

Khushi stares at him dumbfounded. He stares back at her, confused and concerned.

She stares at his shoes then at him, and starts repeating sorry over and over again.

He tries to hold her but she backs away pointing at his shoes.

Khushi: Aapke joothon mein JUUIIICE..

Arnav stared at her.

Arnav: WHAT..

But she doesnt look at him, she wipes her nose with a tissue and continues

Khushi: *hiccup* HP, ne nahi hamne Daala tha, who bhi galti seee.

Arnav stared at her, his mouth open.

Arnav: What the..

Arnav stared amused, as another memory hit him. He should've known. But his smile disappeared at the crying KHUSHI. He had to cheer her up.

Arnav: orange juice so you couldn't find Mango juice this time. Just like you couldn't find orange juice last time.

He made sure to exaggerate the this. He smiled satisfied as he watched a smiling KHUSHI, and they both stared at eachother before laughing.

Precap:
Jewlery and Diwali shopping.😃
Plus new entry, someone related to Raizada's, closely to Arnav and Anjali.
A entry needed, positive for KHUSHI, positive for Arnav but still hate for arnav and Anjali.
A female.
I believe the CVs should get a character like her for KHUSHI to make ASR realize his hurtful behavior on KHUSHI, and make him realize that his Di is not more important than others.

Hey, Do comment and like. So THE NEW ENTRY IM MAKING NEEDS TO BE MADE IN THE SHOW AS ASR NEEDS A REALITY CHECK ON WHAT HE DID TO KHUSHI FOR SIX MONTHS! I WAS SO MAD AT THE CVS FOR SHOWING IT JUST FOR 2-4 MINUTES, I KNOW HIS LOVE IS EPIC AND ETERNAL BUT THEY SHOULD HAVE SHOWED HIM TO NOT ALLOW KHUSHI TO FORGIVE HIM EASILY THE ASR I KNOW WOULD HAVE TURNED EVERYTHING UPSIDE DOWN TO REPENT FOR WHAT STUPIDITY HE DID, FROM MAKING KHUSHI SLEEP ON THE POOLSODE TO BREAKINH THE JEWLERY GIVEN BY NANI TO THOSE HURTFUL WORDS. SO YEAH..ND NOW THE CVS EVEN RUINED THE FAMOUS BRO SIS RELATIONSHIP! I HONESTLY LOVED IT, THE TERI ANKHON MEIN SONG AND HOW IN EVERY EPISODE THEY DIDNT FAIL TO SHOW THE LOVE BETWEEN THE WHOLE FAMILY, FROM ANJ ARNAV TO ANJI AKASH TO NANI MAMI TO AKASH ARNAV TO ARNV AND MAMI! THE WHOLE FAMILY LOVE THAT MADE ME LOVE IPKKND MORE IS NOW SHOWING LOVE FR AARAV AND BULL CRAP BETWEEN SHITAL AND ARNAV! WHERE IS THE LOVE FOR KHUSHI THE RAIZADAS ALWAYS GAVE, LIKE EVEN A DAY WITHOUT A TUTOR KHUSHI MADE THEM ALL SING OOH LA LA WHERE'S THAT LOVE, WHERE'S THE LOVE IN WHICH ANJI REALIZED KHUSHIS NOT HAPPY FOR HER ENGAGEMENT, WHY CAN'T ANJI NOW SEE KHUSHI UPSET OVER SHITAL! Anyways sorry for the second outburst. Lol..Sorry won't be able to send pms due to hurricane problems. Hopin you guys enjoyed it. Just tryna bring old memories back for the current track. Please keep commenting if you commented on the first part. If it's less it'll only make me not update, as it'll make me feel that I ruined the story. So please guys.

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Edited by KSG_luv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh dm what now
she was afraid he would shout at her and so was hiding
well he has decided to change that habit of his
if its possible
man not juice again man

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