OS:THIS IS MY HOUSE! OLD IPKKND STYLE! PART 2 *ON HOLD*

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OS; THIS IS MY HOUSE

THIS IS MY HOUSE!! Arnav yelled not knowing about the damage he had done once again like he had done last year. But this time it's wasn't his sister but the love of his life Khushi.

Aa..apka ghar. Khushi stared at him. Her eyes wide open filled with hurt he had implanted once again in them.

The whole Raizada Family, along with sheetal Watched as Arnav took his anger out on Khushi.

They had been having an argument about the DNA reports, the same reports that just decided the future of them. The DNA reports had been negative, and Khushi had been trying to apologize when Arnav had told her to leave.

When she had asked why he had replied, a reply she didn't know she would get.

Arnav: THIS IS MY HOUSE!!
Khushi: ...s..sor..
Arnav: I said leave dammit!!

--After two hours--

Arnav cane back from his mothers garden, he had calmed down. Calmed enough to pursue Khushi for her reasons of doing this.

He walked towards his room, only to find it...empty.

He searched the whole house, but he found no Khushi.

He felt something in his heart, it felt empty.

He went room to room yelling her name, but their was no "HUM YAHAN HAI ARNAVJI..." his most favorite reply, was no where to be heard.

By now the whole family had gathered around the living room, staring at a crazed arnav searching for his wife.

Arnav: KHUSHI THIS IS NO TIME FOR JOKE! KHUSHI WHERE ARE YOU!! KHUSHI I SWEAR TO GO..I..I SW..swear to god if you..you don't come out now ..I..I will make you pay..KHUSHI!!!

The Raizada's along with sheetal watched as he looked everywhere behind the couches, under the tables, behind the pillars, but Khushi was nowhere.

Anjali: CHOTTE..khushiji kahan Hain

Arnav looked at his Di, his eyes red from unshed tears, he was looking like a crazed man, someone who had just lost everything.

Anjali gasped at her brothers state, she never saw him like this.

Arnav: DI DI KHUSHI..DI TELL KHUSHI TO STOP THIS NONSENSE AND COME OUT NA! DI PLEASE!! DI I PROMISE TO NEVER YELL AT HER! pleaseee..nani nani plz tell her.

Deviyani watched her grandson fall on his knees begging for KHUSHI, she watched NK and Akash reach out towards him holding him.

She remembered the last time this happened, when Anjali had left. The day when he had said the similar statement.

"THIS IS MY HOUSE"

She gasped.

Nani: Arnav Bitwa, she left, you made her leave! SHE LEFT!! JUST LIKE ANJALI DID A YEAR AGO, JUST LIKE YOU TOLD HER TO!! YOU SAID IT YOURSELF!! THIS IS YOUR HOUSE!

Arnav stared at his nani horrified. No no she promise me she won't leave me! No no this can't be happening. KHUSHI..no. NOOO!

He got up and grabbed his keys and ran out of the house ignoring Sheetal who tried to touch him.

He drove, like a madman. His bodyguards behind him, driving to catch up to their boss. It was the same day, he remembered last year how she guided him to his Di. No one was here to guide him to her. No one. Wait yes there was : HIS HEART.

He remembered his words..

Arnav: THIS IS MY HOUSE!
...
Arnav: I SAID LEAVE DAMMIT!

He screeched to A stop at the horrific memory. He made his way to the temple, and ran up the stairs. Begging Devi maiyaa. Promising her to never yell at KHUSHI again. He stopped on the first step as the sight in front of him froze him.

His..his KHUSHI sitting on the floor of the temple, her knees bent, her head resting on them, as silent tears rolled down those beautiful cheeks. The same cheeks he adores, and the same beautiful eyes he admires.

He walked towards her, he watched her get up as she saw him. He watched her stand still, as if ready. Ready to get bashed. This was the second time ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA'S HEART BLED.

He heard the footsteps of his bodyguards but he ignored them. He heard whispers as he bent down on the floor but he ignored them.

Man 1: YEH THO ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA HAI NA
MAN 2; Mandir mein.
Women 1: WHY IS HE ON HIS KNEES?
Women 2: HE LOOKS SHATTERED.
Women 3: WHO IS THAT GIRL?
Women 4: Isn't she his wife. Khushi.

They all gasped as the great business tycoon of dehli get on his knees, his hands on his ears, his head bowed down to the floor in front of his weeping wife.

Arnav knew he deserved no forgiveness. But he was selfish, selfish for the girl he loves. Selfish to have her no matter how many times he breaks her.

Khushi watched as he bent down, and bowed his head in front of her.

She wished she could hate this man forever.

He wished he could love this women in a normal way.

But they couldn't, as opposites always attract. He was created for her like she was for him.

Khushi: I hate you!
Arnav: I..I know!
Khushi: NO NO YOU DON'T
Arnav: I don't.
Khushi: ARGUE WITH ME!
Arnav: Okay.
Khushi: STOP IT! YOU ARE SUPPOSE TO SAY YOU LOVE ME WHEN I SAY I HATE YOU SO I CAN ARGUE WITH YOU UNTIL WE BOTH SAY I LOVE YOU! DAMMIT!!
Arnav: okay.

Khushi by now had lost it. She would have expected him to come and yell at her first before saying sorry constantly. But here he was, with his hand on his ears, looking downwards. This showed the weak Arnav. Someone who she wanted to hide from the world The repenting Arnav!

She hated it, she looked away as she tried to walk away from him. But he held her wrist.

Arnav: Come home..please

--After a Week--

Arnav had now stopped fighting her. The old Arnav her laad governor now always spoke to her politely his eyes always low in front of her. His naughtiness all gone. Except one thing, fear.

Fear that shed go away again, to never return this time. Shell have to get him back and she new exactly where to start.

Precap:
ORANGE JUICE MAMI!!

Part two will be posted soon..DO COMMENT AND LIKE PLEASE.. 😃 AND YES I DID THE WHOLE BODYGUARD AND PEOPLE ACKNOWLEDGING HIM IN THE TEMOLE CZ M TIRED OF THE WAY CVS ARE SHOWING ARNAV. LIKE HE'S A BUSINESS TYCOON DAMMIT! He doesn't have a driver, no bodyguards..and the most recent!! GOING TO A PUBLIC THEATER!! LIKE WHAT THE HE'LL LOL..I just go really pissed, this guy is supposed to be a millionaire, and he is shown to be a normal guy, and no one recognizes him! LIKE ISN'T HE THE SAME GUY THE NEWS REPORTERS SLIKE ABOUT SO MUCH! ND NOW NO ONE RECOGNIZED HIM WHEN HE WENT TO THE THEATER! lol it just annoyed me so I'm putting a better portrayal of ASR like the one before in IPKKND.. Hopin no one minded my outburst lol..

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shahbara thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice!šŸ‘ Do continue soon...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: marjaan

Very nice!šŸ‘Do continue soon...!



Thank youuu!!! Will continue really soon tmrw probably.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it yaar...plz continue soon...n ur way of thought about ASR is absolutely right..
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I know they totally butchered his character!!! 😔 I mean wasn't he introduced as one of the richest men in India? I mean what happened now? Yea I hated the theater thing too so lame n people actually were shown being rude to him in the theater! GRRR 😔 anyway so glad u wrote this 😃 update soon!
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awesum:-D plz cont. soon n pm me!!!!
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Amazing n do continue n plzzz pm me...i have sent a buddy request😊
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WOW!
Very realistic and could very well happen in the show..
Would love to read more..
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omg...I am loving this...its a good way to revive old IPKKND magic...lovely ...continue soon.
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awww I Loved it
It was Super Cute

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