*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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.Spring.

@.Spring.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Aww what a sweet description it iz..
Cute khushi sweet natured dhruvv
and a roughy serious arnav howz their future fghts for khushi
jealousy,realzation,etc etc
its seems too interesting
eager to know
update soon

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow wat a start.. i am already in love wid this!😊

d way he felt things lively just as an instinct...

n Dhruv! obviously thought it to be someone else...😛

d way Arnav n Khushi inter act is so cute.. if they were frnds they would be like this...

waiting for next update... hope u make it soon😊

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wow superb SS yaar...continue and pm me soon...

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

nice start dear
looks really interesting

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

loving dis story already...thankss fr d pm

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Awsome Update...Loved it...waiting for the Next Update...

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Oh I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

please continue soon

lets see the green eyed monster show itself

Arnav you poor baby you are in for it

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Wow feeling like I too want eat jalebi. So sweet do continue.

Interesting start with tom and Jerry drama.

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Ah! It felt so good to read this. Reminded me of the wonderful days in IPKKND! 😉 Sounds very promising.

Keep it up!

BTW, I liked your dedication but I bet it's the first time it has been rejected! 😆 (no offence intended...hum toh bhole-bhaale bacche hain) 😃

PS - Sheera and Halwa are the same, right?

Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago