U BELONG TO ME...A kriyaansh ff(ch 15 updated ) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
WOW!!!!!!!!!
i jst lovd..it..rey desrves dat..and poor kriya..bt watever jst lovd ur ..update..and pjj..do update of that too..MY LOVE IS STRNG.i thnk u r nly wrtng that too..if i m wrng then plj do crect me..and next update ..jaldi jaldi dna..okeh..and update toh mast tha..AND 1 MRE THNG ..WATZ UR REAL NAME..PLZ TELL..
Edited by KUSHA14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ANYONE here.. .. i thnk...thz... is the...nly...ff...WICH IS NT AT ALL SPAMMED OR LEAST SPAMMED...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Hey awesome update..8 n 9 both parts r amazing..update soon n pm me nxt time 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
jus read till 2chap..n lvng it..plz pm me whn u update nxt..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: deepshakriya

Hey awesome update..8 n 9 both parts r amazing..update soon n pm me nxt time 😊

thanks deepsha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: anjee_007

jus read till 2chap..n lvng it..plz pm me whn u update nxt..

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
chapter 10

fida this is for u...as i promised here's it..
n guys for u also...enjoy
n thanks for ur love n comments...

recap: kriyaansh in fire exit...

rey was just rooted...finally realising all what she said...he started crying loudly...he remembered all the moments spent with kria...n remembered spent with tani...he was disgusted by himself...he quickly left fire exit
n moved to his house...

he was walkin in thhe middle of the road...lost somewhere...tears were flowing...vehicles passed him some scolded...some were irritated...some vehicles would hv been hit him but missed ...he went to his house went to his rooom...again all what kria asked in fire exit...

itne din meri yaad kabi nayi aayi...(he broke the wazz which was on the table...

aap meri jagah tani ko kaise di...(he hit his hand on the mirror...which was bleedin nw)

jo pal hum saath mai bitaye teh...vo sab apko kabi yaad nahi aayi...(he started throwing all things in the room)

meri jaane ke baad ek baar bi mujhe doondne ki koshish nahi ki...

u didnt love me u were just attracted to him...(he caught his head n cried,cried...)

voice: tum itna ro kyu raha hai...

rey: tum kaun ho...

voice: mai tum hoon...waise bolo itna kyun ro raha hai...

rey: vo..vo...bol rahi hai ki m attrcted towards her...n aur usne

voice: sahi toh kaha hai...

rey: kya??

voice: haan...do u really love her??

rey: offcourse...

voice:(starte laughing holdin his stomach...like a maniac...god...i mean love...haha agin started laughin...)

voice: (holdin his stomach..) uff...ok cool

rey: tum aisa has kyun rahe ho??

voice : aur kya karoon...tu pehle bata aaj tak uskeliye kuch kiya hai??

rey(was silent)

voice: nahi na...aur to aur...uss din vo kehdiya she dont love you...aur tu maan gaya...tumhara pyaar itna weak tha??

rey:(he was silent all the time...aur kya kartha)

voice: log jaan dete hai pyaar keliye...and u...move on kardiya...seriously dude ur insane..i feel pity on her that vo tumhare jaise ladke ko itna pyaar kiya...sachha pyaar toh usne kiya tha...tum uska layak nahi ho...n
wah..wah...kaise behave kar raha tha tani ke saath...jaise she is ur life...jaise kria naam ki ladki exist hi nahi ho...hws dis possible dude...tu ek kaam kar tujhe tani hi suit hota hai...forget kria...

rey: (shouted) aisa kabi nahi ho saktha...i love kria only kria...

voice: (thinkin n actin)...i love kria only kria...agar kria aaj st.louis mai aahi nahi hoti na...toh...kria ki jagahi love tani only tani...ye kaha hoga tune rite...

voice: bada aya...tumharaa bale keliya kehraha hoon kria ko bool jha...usse tumse laak guna achha ladka milega...

rey:(cryin) nahi nahi mai aisa kuch nahi hone doonga...mai usse sachha pyaar kartha hoon...

voice: n tani...

rey: tani...mai usse baat karoonga...
(he looked around nobody was their...)

rey: mai sirf kria ko pyaar kartha tha...kartha rahoonga...

guys i knw chota tha...
nxt it will be big
give ur comments..
love u all😃

Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

.res...

unres...

awesum update...

i'm luving it...

but feeling sad for rey...

as well as happy too...

finally he is realising...

yeah...

update soon...😉

Edited by d3riya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome...
pata nahi kyu nt feeling pity for rey in fact i m feeling he deserves it...
loved the update bt chota tha...
plz update soon n thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

yayy!!

you updated...!!! thanku soo mujj!!
update...hmm...
as always fab dea!
rey soo deserves it...
kaise kar sakta hai dono se pyaar..ughh... duffer rey!!
aur kria ne thee kia..sh suffered soo muj!
but accha ho gaya..atleast now he realized..ki he lovez kria..not naani..!!
kriyansh ko jaldi milwao..hmm,, nahi kahungi...
infact i'll tell rey ko aur tadpao😉
cont soon...
loving itt
Edited by hotdiva_dmg - 12 years ago

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