Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is part 2 which is quite long than the previous one. It has a bit suspense. Do read it and keep commenting your encouraging comments. Please give your ideas about the future track. This time i have added some songs and a picture. They are added by hyperlink so click on them and listen them.

PART 2

A black Toyota Prado 4*4 car stopped in the parking of the City mall. From the driving seat Viraat stepped out, Viren who was sitting beside him also stepped out of the car and opened the door of back seat where Jeevika was sitting with Maanvi. She thanked Viren and stepped out of the car. Maanvi exited the car from the opposite door. Viren held Jeevika's shoulder and started to walk towards the entrance of the mall which was opposite to where they had parked their car and a road was in between it. Viraat also started to walk when he realized that Maanvi was not in front. He saw behind and found Maanvi looking at the ground. He went two steps back.

'Maanvi ab kya huwa hai ek toh tumhari wajah se hum yahan aai hain aur tum yahan moon phulay khari ho'

'Main moon phulay nahi khari hu'

'Dekho bhai aur bhabhi mall mein enter bhi ho gai hai magar hum yahan kharay makhiyaan maar rahay hai yeh dekho ek maar di' Viraat clapped his hands in front of Maanvi's face

'Viraat chup karo tum aur tum kyon rokay ho mein toh aagay hi ja rahi thi'

'Agay ja rahi thi, right'

Both started to walk towards the road. After taking three steps Maanvi again stopped. Viraat also stopped seeing her and was confused for why she was acting like this. He then saw her clutching her dupatta firmly which made him realized the reason. Without saying anything or looking towards her she held her hand and started to cross the road. First she was shocked to see his reaction but then happy that she has crossed the road safely without di but with Viraat. She was staring him while he was walking taking maanvi's hand. They both entered the mall holding each other's hand and then Viraat saw her to see that whether she was scared now but she was not. He saw comfort on Maanvi's face which made him comfortable. They shared a sweet eye lock. A soft tune of hua kya hua was played in the background. Meanwhile Jeevika and Viren were walking towards the mall with viren's hand on her shoulder. Both were smiling to each other. At that moment the beautiful music of tu hi tu hai was played in the background. After a second Jeevika realized that Maanvi and Viraat were missing. She was about to start panic when she turned and saw both coming towards them. She took a breath of relief. Viren also turned and went near to both of them.

'Kya huwa tum dono kahan reh gai thay' Viren asked them.

'Kuch nahi bhai traffic bahut tha na toh roadcross karne mein problem ho rahi thi'

'Lekin Viraat jab hum aai toh traffic toh tha hi nahi' Viren was suspecting that something happened.

'Choray na viren ji ab hum jo kaam karne aai hai who karein – shopping' Jeevika said

'Haan chalo waisay Jeevika mein ne suna hai keh first floor pe bahut achay stores hain wahan chaltay hain' Viren gave a suggestion

'Haan jeeju chalte hain' Maanvi said

Four of them walked towards the escalators with Viraat and Viren in front and Jeevika and Maanvi in back.

'Di kitna bara mall hai na hamare rishikesh mein toh sirf choti choti dukane hi hoti hai' Maanvi said and she looked at the roof.

'Haan maanu kitna bara hai pata nahi kitne floors ho…'

'Dus floors' Maanvi said cutting Jeevika's sentence.

'Wah maanu itni jaldi gin bhi liay'

'Bhai aapko pata hai na mujhe shopping pasand nahi hai toh phir aapne yahan aanay ka program kyun bana lia' Viraat complained.

'Viraat yaar mujhe pata hai magar tu bhi toh soch na agar mein mana kar deta toh Maanvi ko kitna bura lagta'

'Acha toh aapko us Maanvi ki fikar hai magar apne bhai ki nahi haan'

'Nahi Viraat aisi koi baat nahi hai' Viren said in tension

'Bhai bhai relax itni jaldi tension kyon lay rahay ho main toh bus mazak kar raha tha waisay aap pehlay toh aisay nahi thay' 'acha ab mein samjha bhabhi ka asar hai haan'

'Chup kar Viraat' Viren smiled

'Acha bhai aap bhabhi ko lekar escalators pe charho who pehlay nahi charhi hoon gi na'

'Arey haan Viraat main toh bhool hi gaya' Viren saw behind to Jeevika and called her name.

Jji viren ji'

'Jeevika tum mere saath chalo tum is per pehlay nahi charhi ho gi na'

Jeevika saw the escalators and said. 'Haan Viren ji mein pehlay in per kabhi bhi nahi charhi'

'Toh Jeevika mera haath pakar lo mein sikha deta hoon'

'Ji viren ji' Jeevika was about to go when she said 'Viren ji Maanvi bhi pehlay in per nahi charhi toh who kaisay'

'Haan ek second'

He moved to Viraat and said 'Viraat who Maanvi pehlay in per nahi charhi aur mein Jeevika ko lekar jar aha hoon toh kia tu Maanvi ko….'

'Bhai maanvi pehlay in per charh chuki hai'

'Kab' Viren asked him.

'Jeeju jab mein shaadi se pehlay di ke liay gifts lenay aai thi aur Viraat mere saath hi tha us waqt'

The flashback of their previous visit to mall came in front of their eyes and when Maanvi fell, Viraat smiled.

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Viren held jeevika's hand instructing of how to climb these stairs while Maanvi confidently climbed them followed by Viraat.

They went inside a big store which contain dressed. Maanvi and Jeevika ran inside like child which made Viraat and Viren smile. Jeevika started to chose a dress for swamini, vanshika, beeji, pinky and kadambari chachi. But Maanvi was busy in choosing only for herself and for her di. After an hour they had decided and took her dresses to the counter. First Jeevika showed the dresses to the the cashier. She bought a yellow one for swamini, a dress of white and brown combination for vanshika, a pink dress for pinky, a white and blue combination for beeji, an orange one for kadambari. She then placed a beautiful blue dress which was chosen by Viren for her. Maanvi placed her dresses which consist of a yellow elegant dress with silver beads embedded on it and a light preach dress for her. She quickly gave the dresses. Viren payed the bill. They entered a jewelry shop where there were many beautiful necklaces, rings, bracelets and earrings. Jeevika chose a beautiful necklace chosen by Viren. Viraat was admiring their relationship. However Maanvi was reluctant to buy anything for herself as she saw the prices of them. She asked the price of one beautiful silver ring which was told of Rs.25000. Jeevika and Viren were busy in their shopping so they did not saw Maanvi but Viraat noticed it. After the jewelry shop they went to shoes store and then went to an ice cream parlor in the mall. They sat together on a round table. On the right side of Jeevika was Maanvi and on left side was Viren and Viraat was sitting next to Maanvi.

'Maanu kya kharida tu ne' Jeevika asked

Maanvi opened her bags and showed her dress and a matching sandal with it.

'Maanu tu ne koi aanghoti nahi kharidi '

'Nahi di who kya hai na idhar who rishikesh wali baat nahi hai idhar kuch pasand hi nahi aaya toh kuch lene ka kia faida'

'Magar maanu tujhay toh aisay designs pasand the na'

'Haan di pasand hai magar yahan ke daam toh dekho maine aik choti si ring ki qimat poch pachis hazar di scho pachis hazar ki itni si ring aur who bhi chandi ki itni qimat main toh rishikesh mein main pachis sonay ki aanghotiyaan le loon' She laughed

'Yahi toh madam yeh Rishikesh nahi hai yeh Chandigarh hai jahan har cheez imported milti hai purani nahi' Viraat said

Maanvi was about to reply him when Viren said 'Maanvi tum mujhay bata deti main bill pay kar deta na'

'Jeeju main di ke sasural se itni bari cheez kaisay le sakti hoon'

'Lekin Maanvi tum ne dress bhi toh lia tha na oh yeh kyun nahi'

'Jeeju who toh sirf ek hazar ka tha aur itna toh main aap se maang sakti hu itne se aapka atm khali hori na ho jai ga'

'Lekin Maanvi'

'Lekin wekin nahi yahan hum ice cream khanay aai hain na toh jaldi se mang wa lete hain is se pehlay koi aur mere hisay bhi kha jai'

Viraat called the waiter and gave the order. Vanilla for Maanvi, strawberry for Jeevika, mango for Viren and caramel for Viraat. Jeevika and Maanvi both took a dress from their bag and handed to each other saying that this is a gift at same time. The title song of ehmmbh was played in background. 'di kholo na'maanvi said o Jeevika 'tu bhi khol na'. They opened it and were shocked to see that it was the same dress which they had chosen for each other.

'Waah kya choice hai aap dono ki dono ne ek dosray ke liay same dress chose kia. I salute u' Viraat said this which made them laugh. They both hugged each other thanking for the gift.

Waiter brought the ice creams and served them. They were about to eat when Maanvi's phone rang. She saw that it was unknown number . She picked it.

'Hello kya yeh Maanvi Chaudhry ka number hai'

'Ji haan aur main Maanvi bol rahi hu. Aap kon'

Jeevika raised her eye brows asking who is it and Maanvi nodded her head tha she did not know. When the other person on the phone told her about who was it she quickly stood up and walked away from the table.

'Ji mujhay yaad hai keh mujhay aaj wahan ana hai bus is baar aap kuch cancel mat kijiye ga'

'Theek hai aaj sham aap theek char bajay yahan pohonch jai ga aur late mat aai ga warna is baar bhi cancel karna pare ga'

'Nahi iss baar aisa nahi ho ga main time pe pohuch jao gi'

'Okay thank you bye'

She put the phone without saying bye. She thought about it for one second and then walked to the table. They all were staring her but she did not notice it and started to eat the ice cream. Breaking the silence Jeevika asked her ' Maanu kis ka phone tha jis ke liay tujhay apni di se door jana para'

Maanvi thought 'Di main aapko kaisay batao ke issi ki wajah se main aapse kia main sab se bahut door janay wali hu jahan meri madad ke liay koi nahi ho ga aap bhi nahi di'

'Maanu main tujh se kuch poch rahi hoon' Jeevika once again asked her shaking her shoulders which made Maanvi come out of her thoughts.

'Di kyun tension le rahi ho who na punters ka phone aaya tha aur agar main aap ke samnay phone pick karti toh aap mujhay bahut daanti toh iss liay main uth kar chali gai'

'Chal koi baat nahi kha ab'

Jeevika seemed relieved and so is Viren but Viraat was not. He saw her wanting to ask her what was the problem but she kept eating without giving him a glance. They had finished the shopping so they went to the parking. This time Jeevika held Maanvi hand and crosses the road along with viren and Viraat. They were about to sit when a small girl came towards Maanvi and asked her o give some money. Without thinking twice she opened her purse and gave her a fifty rupees note. The girl gave her blessing that may you have a long and prosperous life with someone special. This made Jeevika smile but maanvi's smile faded as she knew that it will may never happen. She let go her thoughts and closed her purse when she saw a contact card which made her more sad. She sat in the car and they started their journey to home.

DR.MEHRA

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SANJEEVANI


TUMSE HI TUMSE HI HAR SUBAH SHAAM HOTI HAI

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
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wonderful update virman virika and jeeman.
how sweet.
Edited by sapphhire - 12 years ago
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superb update 😛
Edited by ashishi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Nice update... will be waiting for the next one 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Lovely update.Loved Virat and Manvi.Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy deaar!!
Read both of your parts nd they are awsumm !! 😊
Your story is really niice 😊
Tfs for the PM and plz continue soon !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Thank u and I m glad that u liked it
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Originally posted by: luv_virman

Heyy deaar!!

Read both of your parts nd they are awsumm !!😊
Your story is really niice😊
Tfs for the PM and plz continue soon !


Thank u for urge comment and I appreciate that u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: afreenkansal

cool update
continue soon
pm me


Will continue and also pm u when I update my next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice re now what will Virat do? and who will 1st get to know about her illness? curious update soon

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