Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13 - Page 4

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Hope u all liked the last part and will enjoy this one also. Give me suggestions about the next tracks. Have u seen the photos and songs added in last update through hyperlink? I donot know about how we can add photos in updated please anyone tell me. And tell me that is this length enough for u guys? I will send pms to all my buddy and if u want pm add me in your buddy list. Now enjoy reading.

PART 3

They all reached home. Maanvi and Jeevika were still chatting with each other about random things. Viren and Viraat were behind them. Meanwhile in the living room of the Vadhera mansion Kadambari chachi and Vanshika ma were sitting together and Kadambari was showing her new saree which Inder brought her to maa. They saw the four of them entering the house. Jeevika and Maanvi took blessings from Vanshika.

'Beta kaisa raha tum logoon ka din? Shopping hogai sari?' Vanshika asked them.

'Ji maa aaj hum ne jam ke shopping ki bahut maza aaya' Jeevika answered her

'Haaye hi tum phir toh bara maza aaya ho ga kash hi main bhi chalti tum logoon ke sath' Kadambari chachi said.

'Toh chachi aap bhi chalti na aap bhi shopping kar leti' Viren said.

'Main toh chalne ko tiyar thi magar kya hai na aaj sholku ke school mein meeting thi mujhe wahan jana para magar agli baar main zaroor chalo gi'

'Waise main nahi aai toh tum log mere liay kuch lai bhi nahi ho kya'

'Chachi aisa ho sakta hai keh hum aap ke liay kuch na lai' Viraat said.

'Haaye ni matlab mere liay kuch lai ho mein sahih hi kehti hu tusi iss ghar ki hope ho tope ho'

'Magar chachi apne hope tope se poch toh lejiye keh woh aap ke liay kia laya hai laya hoga apni pasand ke mutabiq apne jaisi fazool aur second hand cheez' Maanvi said making annoying face to Viraat.

'Chup karo tum toh chachi pata hai mein aap ke liay kia laya ho'

'Bata na'

'Shahrukh khan ka ghar' Viraat said smiling at her. Kadambari made a sad face.

'Chup kar Viraat kyun chachi ko pareshan kar raha hai' Viren said to Viraat

'Arey bhai mein kahan chachi ki pareeshan kar raha hoon mein ne sahi mein Shahrukh ka ghar kharid lia hai'

'Phir chalo us ghar mein chalte hai'Maanvi said .

'Chalne ki kya zarooorat hai mein ghar yahi le aata hu aik minute' Viraat took his phone out of the pocket.

'Ghar ko phone kyun kar rahay hai' Maanvi said in confusion.

'Yeh dekho' Viraat showed her a house.

'Yeh kis ka ghar hai'

'Yeh ghar jo hai na who aik khan ka tha jo rukh rukh kar shahi khata tha toh in short yeh ghar shahraukh khan ka huwa na' Viraat gave explanation.

'Viraat ke bache' She started running behind Viraat they ran almost three times of whole living room.

During their conversation the rest seated as they knew that they will fight for long. Jeevika showed them their gifts which she bought for them. Then Vanshika remembered a thing and addressed to Maanvi.

'Maanvi beta who aaj kya kisi ka zaroori phone aana tha kya'

'Kyun aunty ? kia huwa?' Maanvi said confused.

'Jab tum log bahar gai the tab kisi ka phone aaya tha aur who tumse baat karna chahti thi mein ne toh bata dia keh tum bahar gai ho toh '

'Larki kise meri itni yaad arahi thi keh ghar ke phone kar dia'

'Pata nahi beta us ne apna naam nahi bataya magar us ne message dia tha jo mein tumhe de doon'

'Message? Kis kism ka message'

'Who keh rahi thi keh tum kal zaroor aana pichli baar ki tarah late mat ho jana iss ke baad milne ka time nahi mile ga' Vanshika said . Jeevika, Viren, Viraat, chachi all were confused and glaring at Maanvi.

Maanvi thought about who can she be and then she realized that she was the same whom she talked on the phone. She saw that everyone was looking at her with confused expression. Initially she became scared that she would tell them if anyone of them asked her so she decided to tell them herself.

'Di aap jaana chahti ho na mujhe kis ne apne paas bulaya hai' She was with a stiff tone which worried Jeevika more. She nodded her answer in yes.

'Theek hai di phir suno' she said in a dramatic tone. 'Di who phone…'

'Maanu bol na kis ka phone tha' Jeevika said. All were confused and anxious to know it.

' Diii who piyali ho gi mujhe kal bhi us ka phone aaya tha'

'Piyali- maanu yeh kaun hai mein ne pehle is ka naam tere mun se nahi suna'

'Di who meri college ki dost thi kal us ka phone aaya tha keh who mujhse milna chahti hai aur pata nahi use landline ka number kaise mil gaya'

'Magar who toh keh rahi thi keh pehli ki tarah dair se na aana'

'Main college mein hamesha use late milti thi shaid use wohi yaad ho ab aap mujhe batao keh mein us se milne chali jao aaj'

'Theek hai maanu phir mein bhi tere saath chalo gi mein bhi toh milu teri college ki saheli se'

Maanvi got tensed. By seeing her expressions anyone can tell that she does not want Jeevika to go with her. She helplessly saw viren who assured her he will do something.

'Jeevika tum bhool gai aaj hamein mr.sharma ke ghar jaana tha' viren said to save Maanvi.

'Are haan mein toh bilkul bhool hi gai chalo maanu theek hai tu chali jaana magar jaldi ajana'

'Theek hai di thank you I love u' Maanvi became happy. She hugged Jeevika and then silently thanked Viren. She went to her room. Jeevika went to her room with Viren and ma and chachi went to kitchen to prepare lunch. Viraat was seeing this all and he went to Maanvi's room.

In Maanvi's room she put the shopping bags on her bed and went to her side table which had a photo frame with a photo of Jeevika and Maanvi captured on Jeevika's wedding ceremony. She took it.

'Sorry di mujhe maaf kardo mein ne aaj zindagi mein pehli baar aap se jhoot bola hai. Agar mein aaj yeh jhoot na bolti toh aap mujhse sach bulwa hi leti jis se aap ko dard pahunchta. Sorry di.' She started crying silently.

Then Viraat entered her room and saw her crying.

'Main toh pehli se hi janta tha keh tum jhoot bol rahi thi.' This made Maanvi cautious and she quickly hide her tears.

'Maanvi sach sach batao tum mujhse kya chuppa rahi ho'

'Partner yaar kya baat kar rahe ho mein kya chuppa gi mere kaunse darjanoo boyfriends hain jin ke qise mein chupati milo' Maanvi laughed at this and went to her bed.

'Jhoot mat bolo maanvi' He held her arm.


'Mujhe pata hai tum mujhse kya sab se chuppa rahi hi'

'Vira a a t' Maanvi stammered.

'Maanvi chup pehli tum meri baat suno,' Viraat ordered Maanvi and Maanvi was feeling nervous and scared because of viraat's behavior.

'Mata ki chowki per tumhara behosh hona, doctor pe na jane ki zid, karwachaut per tumhari tabiyaat ka kharab hona , aaj subah tumhare sar mein dard hona aur bhabhi ko na batane ki zid. Ye sab kya hai Maanvi. Us din di ki engagement per tumhara ek dum se gayab hona aur phir bahana banana keh tum kamre mein thi jabke jab tum gayab hui thi mein sab se pehle tumhare kamre mein gaya tha aur tum wahan nahi thi. Mujhe kuch garbar lagi phir bhi mein chup raha. Aur phir aaj mall mein tumhay punters ka phone nahi aaya that um ne humse jhoot bola tha aur phir ghar pe bhi tumhari who dost kya naam tha'

'Piyali'

'Who koi piyali wiyali nahi thi balke who koi aur tha jis ki wajah se tum hum sabse jhoot bolne per majboor ho gai ho. Tum ab who Maanvi nahi rahi jo dosroon ke liay apne aap ko bhi mita sakti hai. Tum badal gai ho Maanvi. Tum selfless nahi selfish ho selfish' Viraat was making Maanvi angry so she let out her truth'

'Bus Viraat mein selfish nahi hu aur na hi mein badli hu. Aaj bhi main dosroon ke liay apne aap ko mita sakti hu aur main yeh baat prove bhi kar sakti thi magar jab meri zindagi hi mere saath itna bada khel khel rahi hai toh mein kisi ko kuch kaise prove kar sakti hu.' Maanvi replied to viraat's accusations.

'Tum kehna kya chahti ho'

'Main jo bhi kehna chahti hu usi ke liay main ja rahi hu ek akhri baar yeh jaane keh kya wohi mera sach hai' This statement of Maanvi made Viraat more suspicious.

'Maanvi job hi tumhe batana hai tum mujhe abhi batao'

'Nahi Viraat abhi mein khud sure nahi hu bus aaj mujhe pata chal jai ga aur kal mein tumhay bata doon gi'

'Theek hai Maanvi mein tumhari baat maan leta hum agar promise me tum mujhe kal zaroor batao gi'

He took his hand in front of Maanvi and Maanvi promised him. They both smiled. She went towards her bed and took her items from bags.

'Partner tum aaj ja kaha rahi ho'

'Partner yaar mein ne abhi kaha na mein tumhay kal bata doon gi'

'Okay magar tum jaldi ajana aaj dinner se pehle theek hai'

'Theek hai magar mein jaldi aao gi jab jaldi jao gi na' Maanvi quickly straighten her dupatta.

'Main chalti hu bye bye' Maanvi ran out of her room.

'Maanvi suno toh saahi chali gai mein bhi chalta hu' Viraat also went out of her room.

In drawing room Jeevika was telling tarun the menu for dinner.

'Maanu ja rahi hai'

'Haan di mein chalti hi dair ho rahi hai.'

'Theek hai toh jam agar jaldi ajana'

'Bye di'

'Bye'


CHALTE CHALTE KAISE YEH FASLE HO GAI

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
good proceeding 👏
loved the concerned Virat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Loved the update.Love the way how the story flows and loved the conversations between Virat and MAnvi.T hanks for the pm yaar and waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awww liked it but pls cont. soon this time will be wating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
good flow. really would like to see how virat reacts when he finds out.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy deaar!

Very niice update 😊
The "Shah Rukh Khan ka ghar" part was funny 😃

Waiiting to se how Virat will react after knowing Manvi's truth...

Eagerly waiting for next part 😊
Tfs for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
oh wow great update
Love the caring side of virat
Thanx 4 d pm
Update Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

good proceeding 👏
loved the concerned Virat


Glad that u liked it keep reading for more fun 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update.Love the way how the storyflowsand loved the conversations between Virat and MAnvi.T hanks for the pm yaar and waiting for the next update😊


Thanks for liking it keep reading and commenting...:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SakshiAngel

awww liked it but pls cont. soon this time will be wating...<div></div>


Thank u and now will continue more often 🥱

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