Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Syed695
Nice Update..!! Bechari Maanvi wanted to speak but Virat was in to his frnds...but then now he will get taste of his medicine...which will help is realize their feelings for each other..!

Thank you...Realization will be a bit far but yet in a good way

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: athniamanvi
nice update yaar and thanks for the pm

Thanks and Welcome😳

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: virman.lover
awesome update
liked it

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Thanks...Welcome😊

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Awesome yaar too good..
Loved it..
Pleasee continue soon...
Cant wait for the next update...
Thanks for the PM...

Thank you very much
Update coming up

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

PART 9

Viraat: maanvi
Maanvi: Viraat
She turned behind only to see him staring at her with his broad eyes. If she sees him for more than a milli-second she would fall in his hazel eyes so she turned her attention towards the phone.
Maanvi: Beeji main aapse baad main baat karo gi.
Beeji: Acha thek hai per yaad rakhna larka kal subah 2 baje aai ga toh tum tiyar rehna aur uska naam -
Maanvi quickly hanged up the phone without listening the boy's name.
Beeji: Yeh Maanvi bhi na poora waqt jaldi rehti hai. Larke ka naam bhi nahi suna.

Viraat came beside her.
Viraat: Maanvi mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.
Maanvi: Per mujhe nahi karni.
She started to move towards her room when Viraat pulled her behind a pillar.
Viraat: Main ne kaha na mujhe tumse baat karni hai woh bhi abhi.
Maanvi: Aur main ne bhi kaha na mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.
She again tried to move but Viraat first placed his left hand on the pillar then the right hand fully blocking her way out.
Maanvi: Please Viraat. Mujhe jane do.
Viraat: Har baar tumhe jane dia maine lekin ab nahi. Mujhe jab tak mere sawaloon ke jawab nahi mile ge tum kahin nahi jao gi.
Maanvi: Please Vi---
Maanvi heard Jeevika calling her so she stopped in between.
Maanvi: Viraat di arahi hain.
Viraat: Aane do
Maanvi: Woh hame aise dekh le gi.
Viraat: Dekhne do.
Maanvi: Hat jao Viraat mujhe jane do.
Jeevika: Maanu kahan hai tu.
Maanvi: Viraat di.
Viraat: Pehle tum meri baat suno gi
Jeevika: Maanu. Maanu.
Maanvi: Haan haan suno gi. Per abhi nahi. Abhi Di arahi hain. Plz choro mujhe.
Viraat: Pakka.
Maanvi: Haan baba pakka. Ab chor bhi do mujhe.
Viraat: Acha thek hai. 15 mint baad apni window khol dena main ajao ga.
Maanvi: Thek hai...Hain? Window? Kyun?
Viraat: Baat deewaro se karni hai kya. Window se ander aao ga na bewafoof.
Maanvi: Nahi yeh sahih nahi hai.
Viraat: Kya? Keh tum bewakoof ho?
Maanvi: Nahi. Yeh keh itni raat ko tum chupke se mere kamre main aao.
Viraat: Matlab tum bewakoof ho.
Maanvi: Nahi
Viraat: Lekin abhi toh tumne bola.
Maanvi: Viraat dimag kharab mat karo. Abhi toh mujhe jane do Di ne aise dekh lia na toh bahut bara masla hojai ga.
Jeevika: Maanu tu aise pillar ke piche khari kya kar rahi hai.
Maanvi and Viraat became shocked and scared. They didn't knew what to do.
Maanvi (whispered): Dekha dekh lia na Di ne ab tumhari wajah se masla bane ga.
Viraat (whispered) : Meri wajah se. Agar tum meri baat pehle sun leti toh shaid aisa na hota.
Maanvi: Chep
Jeevika: Bata na tu wahan kya kar rahi hai aur kis se baatein kar rahi hai.
Now Maanvi know what to do. Jeevika does not knew that Viraat was also there as Maanvi was standing with her back facing Jeevika.
Maanvi (whispered) : Viraat Di ko pata nai hai keh tum bhi yahan ho toh jaisa main kehti hu waisa karo.

Maanvi turned behind to see Jeevika.
Maanvi: Good morning Di
Jeevika (Suspicious about her behaviour): Maanu. Teri tabiyat toh thek hai.
Maanvi: Haan Di
Jeevika: Phir toh raat ke 12 baje good morning kyun keh rahi hai
Maanvi (looking here and there): Oh haan. Good evening... Mera matlab Good night.
Jeevika: Tu kitni ajeeb hai. Main yeh pochne aai thi keh Beeji ne tujhse kya baat ki.
Maanvi tried to make a way for Viraat to escape. She slowly moved towards the sofa.
Maanvi: Di yahan aao na sofa per baith ker baat karte hain.
Jeevika: Sofa per kyun. Mujhe nahi baithna. Tu bata na kya baat ki Beeji ne.
Maanvi: Kya baat honi hai Di. Bus unho ne kaha ke chale jao yahan se acha mauka hai.

This was her signal for Viraat to move but he did not got it and Jeevika also got confused.
Jeevika: Kya keh rahi hai tu kaun kaha chala jai aur konsa acha mauka hai.
Maanvi again gave hand signals and this time Viraat got it thankfully. He started to move when he heard Jeevika.

Jeevika: Isse chor Maanu. Mujhe tera jhoot pata chal gaya aur main tujhse bahut naraz hu.
Maanvi did not knew what to do as she thought that Jeevika came to know about her disease.
Maanvi:Di...woh...main...aap...kaise
Jeevika: Tu ne mujhe bhi nahi bola.
Maanvi: Mujhe laga keh aap
Jeevika: Kya main. Teri tabiyat kharab thi toh hum party se jaldi ajate tu ne bore hone ka natak kyun kia.
Maanvi: Kya
Viraat: Kya
Jeevika: Tum!!
Maanvi: Tum!!!
Viraat: Main!!!!

Viraat thought: Lagta hai kuch zyada hi uncha bol dia.
Jeevika: Viraat tum iss waqt yahan kya kar rahe ho...Kahin tumhe
Maanvi: Nahi Di. Viraat toh aise hi aaya hoga woh mujhse baat karne thori aaya hai.
Viraat: Ab toh gai
Jeevika: Tujhe kya hua. Pehli baat main ne Viraat se pocha hai tujhse nahi aur dosri baat keh woh tujhse baat karne kyun aai ga.
Maanvi: Hain? Viraat mujhse baat kyun kare ga?
Jeevika: Wohi toh main poch rahi hu.
Maanvi: Yeh aapko Viraat batai ga. Batao Partner.
She pleaded him to save her this time while Viraat glared at her.
Viraat: Woh bhabhi main
Jeevika: Ajeeb hai jo Viraat se pocho woh Maanvi bolti hai aur jo Maanvi se pocho woh Viraat bolta hai. Bolo.
Viraat: Main...woh...yahan...haan...paani. Main yahan paani peene aaya tha haan.
Jeevika: Acha main laati hu.
Viraat: Nahi pee lia. Ab mai chalta hu waise bhi 15 mint baad kissi se kuch pochna hai.
Jeevika: Kuch kaha tumne
Viraat: Haan. Goodnight Bhabhi.
Jeevika: Goodnight.
Maanvi: Night.
He left.
Jeevika: Chal ab tu bhi so ja.
Maanvi: Bye di.
Jeevika: Bye.

As soon as she turned behind to move she heard Maanvi saying something.
Maanvi: Shukar hai bach gai.
Jeevika: Kuch kaha tune.
Maanvi: Nahi toh.
And she ran off to her room.
Jeevika: Dono pagal hain aur mujhe bhi kar de ge.

Maanvi's room
Chalo so jati hu. Party se waise hi bahut thakkan hogai thi.

TRING
Message itni raat ko. Kaun ullu iss waqt ko jag raha hai.

Viraat
Please apni khirki kholo.

Yeh Viraat bukhala gaya hai kya. Iss waqt khirki kholo. Baarish horahi hai khol di toh khud bheg nahi jao gi.

Maanvi
Lagta hai tumhe neend arahi hai. Sojao. Good night.

Viraat
Mujhe pata the keh tumhara screw dheela hai per dimag ka screw hai hi nahi yeh nahi pata tha. Apni khirki kholo jaldi.

Achoo. Achoo. Ach...ach

Billi sneeze bhi karti hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Hosakta hai chep ne hi billi chori hogi mujhe ang karne ke liye. Per barish main billi beemar par gai toh.

Viraat
Billi ke baare main sochna choro aur window kholo main bahar khara hu.

Maanvi quickly opened the door and helped him come inside the room.

Achoo. Achoo.
Pagal ho kya tab se keh raha tha khirki kholo per tum. Main ne kaha bhi tha keh 5 mint baad window khol dena.
Main samjhi keh tum aise hi bol rahe the.
Excuse me. Viraat Singh Vadhera jo kheta hai woh karta hai. Maanvi Chaudhry jaisa nahi hai jo baatein sun kar bhi behri bani rehti hai.
Acha na sorry. Yeh lo towel apne baal sukha lo.
For your information yeh sab meri maa karti hai mujhse apne baal nahi sokhte.
Bigre Raiszaade. Main karti hu.

Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan main sabhi ke liye kissi na kissi ko hai banaya har kissi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara mano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kissi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan main sabhi ke liye kissi na kissi ko hai banaya har kissi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara mano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kissi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan main sabhi ke liye kissi na kissi ko hai banaya har kissi ke liye

Mehrbaani jaate jaate mujhpe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tera nazara mila
Roshan sitara mila
Takdeer ki kashtion ko kinara mila

Sadiyo se tarae jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sohbet main duaein hain ussi ke liye
Tera milna hai us rab ka ishara mano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kissi ke liye

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan main sabhi ke liye kissi na kissi ko hai banaya har kissi ke liye

Hogaya. Ab batao kyun aai ho yahan.
Tumhare jhoot ke baare main baat karne.
Hain? Ab konsa jhoot?
Wohi jo bhabhi baat kar rahi thi.
Uff. Main sahih main bore horahi thi meri koi tabiyat kharab nahi thi.
Main nahi manta.
Ab us mein main kya karo
Tumhari tabiyat kharab thi toh mujhe toh bata deti
Tumhe bata deti. Tumhare apni purani friend se baat karne se fursat mile tab ki baat na. Main itna bore horahi thi. Koi tha hi nahi. Tum rideema ke pass the.
Its riddhima not rideema.
Whatever.
So it means u r jealous.
No i am not
U are
No i am not
Yes yes yes
No
Maanvi chaudhry is jealous
Nahi
Haan
Shutup
Okay.
Better
So tum naraz iss wajah se thi keh party main mein ne riddhima se baat ki tumse nahi.
Haan. Aur woh 24*7 wala dialogue bhi tumne usse bola.
Partner. Hamari friendship ko beshak kuch hi din hue ho. You are my best friend aur tumhari jagah koi naji le sakta. Na hi koi riddhima na hi koi soniya na hi koi anjali.
Hmmm. By the way yeh anjali aur soniya kon hain. Kitne baare leechar ko tum Viraat. Choro gi nahi tumhe.
Maanvi ran behind him while he ran all around the room.
Chep ruko tumhe toh.
Arre partner mar kyun rahi ho.
He picked up a pillow in order to save himself from her constant hands. Accidentally he threw it on her face which started mini World war 3.
Tumne mujhe maara. Ab toh gai. Himmat kaisi hue tumhari mujhe marne ki.
Aise. He threw another pillow to her.
Pillow fight started.

Meanwhile Jeevika was passing by in the corrider . She heard some noises from Maanvi's room soshe turned towards her room.
Knock knock
Jeevika: Maanu. Tu uthi hai.

Viraat, Maanvi quickly cleared up the mess. She pushed Viraat towards the window. Unwillingly he went from there. Then Maanvi,being a good actress, pretended like she was asleep. She unlocked the door.

Ji Di. Main toh sorahi thi. Kya hua.

Nahi bus kuch awazein sunni thi.

Woh billi hogi. Aap sojao. Goodnight

Goodnight.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Writer's Note
Sorry for writing this part about a very very very long time...almost after a year.
I have exams coming up next month in the first week and will continue till mid of june so during this time it will be very difficult to write anything. But I will try my level best to upload next parts.
Hope you understand my problem.
Till then Enjoy reading this part. Comment and like.
AND MOST IMPORTANT: Those who want pm for the next upcoming parts, like this post so it is easy for me to pm.

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Awesome update..
Loved it..
What will be Virat reaction if he comes to now about Manvi cancer...
The song is really good..
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM..