Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

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amazing update

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I'm so sorry for the late reply but it was an amazing update I loved it

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I'm so sorry for the late reply but it was an amazing update I loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Awesome update..
Loved it..
What will be Virat reaction if he comes to now about Manvi cancer...
The song is really good..
Update soon..
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Originally posted by: pink1
nice update there fight is nice but
when her disease get to know
there family and who is coming
to see her update soon

Her disease will be revealed a bit later...To know who is coming do read the update

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: virmanfan013
hey that's awesome part and totally loved it
starting scene when virat was forcing her to listen him was superb
and then the window part toh super duper hit
awesome song selection
hey when are you gonna reveal about manvi's cancer
thanks for the pm
take care

Thanks alot for liking it
Manvi's cancer will be revealed a lit bit later not now
But before that there would be love realization
Keep reading it and giving me ur suggestions
Take care

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Originally posted by: Jannat94
Nice one Sweety

liked it and don't worry about late 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Duggukede
amazing update
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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART 10

Its a new morning which will spread its freshness everywhere.
Maanvi: Good morning Di
Jeevika: Good morning Maanu. Kya baat hai aaj subah subah hi uth gai aur seedha kitchen main. Ab tak toh breakfast ke liye sab aai bhi nahi hai.
Maanvi: Bus Di aankh khol hai toh agai. Aapko koi problem hai toh main jaati hu
Jeevika: Nautanki. Chal yeh plates table pe rakh de.

Maanvi went to the dining table. She was arranging the plates just like everyday. As soon as she finished it, she turned only to collide with Viraat. To not to make her fall, he immediately placed his hand over her waist and her hands were now on his shoulder. Both were lost in each other or I must say each others' mesmerizing eyes. No one was ready to back off finishing the moment. Cool breeze, that probably was coming from the open wind, made the atmosphere even more lovable.
Ahem ahem
Viraat who was busy admiring the beautiful face of Maanvi and Maanvi who was busy diving in hazel eyes of Viraat didn't heard the voice or they didn't want to.
Ahem ahem
Voice was getting louder and louder and eventually Virmaan were back from Lala land.
Both quickly freed their hands but still were fully red from embarrassment.

Viren: Good Morning. I think mujhe yeh kehne ki zarurat nahi kyunki tum dono ki morning toh abhi se good lag rahi hai.
Viraat as usual caressed his hair to avoid more blushing.
Viren: Waise shukar hai sirf maintha warna koi aur hota toh tum dono ka keema bana hota abhi tak.
Maanvi: Jiju

Blushing Maanvi ran inside kitchen.
Viraat: Kya bhai aap bhi
Viren: Main kya. Jo kar rahe the tum dono kar rahe the.
And there comes the whole family for the breakfast. They all settled down while Vanshika called Jeevika for the food.

Kitchen
Maanvi came running, opened the fridge and finish one glass then two glass finally three glasses of water.
Jeevika: Aare Maau aisa kahan se bhag kar arahi hai. Aur idhar dekh tu itni laal kyun horahi hai.
Maanvi: Woh Di kuch nahi bus aise hi
Vanshika called so they both went leaving the talk in half way.
She served the food and sat down to eat herself too while Maanvi had already started her food or I must say finished half of it. She was doing it to avoid the gaze of Viraat who on the other side was also trying to do this.
Jeevika noticed how Maanvi was engrossed in eating. She was about to say something to her when Viren interrupted.
Viren: Viraat main tujhe batana hi bhul gaya. Kal party main mujhe Mr. Chopra mile
Viraat: Mr. Chopra wohi na jin se hum dono 2 saal pehle meri recording ke silsile main mile the.
Viren: Haan wohi. Kal tune gaana gaya toh woh mujhse keh rahe the teri awaz bahut achi hai aur tujhe singer banna chahe.
Viraat: Really bhai?
Inder: Toh kya galat kaha unho ne.
Viren: Galat toh kuch nahi par
Viraat: Par do saloon pehle unho ne meri awaz ko reject kar dia tha kyunke unhe laga keh meri awaz bacho jaisi hai aur mujhe abhi mature hone ki zarurat hai aur ab wo hi keh rahe hain keh mujhe singer banna chahiye. Kitne ajeeb insaan hain.
Daddaji: Viraat tameez se peash aao woh tumse bare hain.
Viraat(in low voice): Bare nahi buddhe hain
Maanvi Viren Jeevika Inder Kadambari heard him but luckily it was not heard by Vanshika,Shlok, Bua and Daddaji.
They all smiled outwardly but inside they are laughing.
Daddaji: Tumne kuch kaha
Viraat: Meri itni himmat kaha keh main aapke samne kuch kaho
This time only Maanvi laughed while Inder glared at him.
Viren: Toh main yeh keh raha tha keh unho ne tujhe aaj apne office bulaya hai audition ke liye.

All were happily shocked by this news.
Viraat: Nahi bhai main nahi jao ga. Unke pass mujhe wapis nahi jana.
Viren: Viraat yaar tujhe jana chahiye YR company se tujhe offer aai hai aur toh reject kar raha hai.
Maanvi: Jiju kya naam bataya
Viren: YR company
Maanvi: Main ne kal hi tv per dekha tha keh YR company ko ek nayi awaz ki talaash hain jisse woh superstar bana de ge. Yeh once in a lifetime opportunity hai partner tumhe zarur audition dena chahiye.
Jeevika: Main ne bhi dekha tha. Bahut bari company hai. Aur jo singing superstar ban jai ga uski toh poori life hi badal jai gi. Previous season ki winner Shweta Sharma thi ek normal ladki Agra ki. Aur ab woh Dubai main fully settled hai. Ek hi saal main uske koi 5 albums release ho chuki hain. All hit. Tum zarur part lo Viraat.
Viraat: Per abhi agar phir reject kar dia toh.
Kadambari: Agar select karlia toh. Buri bateein na socha karo ji. Tussi toh wahan sab di chutti kar do ge.
Vanshika: Beta le le na part. Tera kya ja raha hai sirf kuch ghanton ki baad hai. Haan hoga ya na.
Viraat really thought about this. It was big platform to showcase one's talent. And who knows Viraat wins it. So he decide to take part in it.
Viraat: Okay. Main lu ga part. Per aap sab khamakha umeedien mat lagana.

All were very happy as deep in the heart all knew that he may win the competition.
Viren: Chal phir tu abhi nikal ja. 9 baje tera audition hai.
Viraat: Thek hai.
Daddaji: Hamari bhi hogaya. Viren Inder chalo office main meeting hai.
Viren: Ji chalein. Viraat tu black car main chale jana hum white wali le lete hain.
Viraat: Keys?
Viren: Woh toh mere kamre main hai. Main la deta hu.
Viraat: Aap jao bhai main khud le lu ga.
Viren: Chal all the best. Yeh yaad rakhna life main twists and turns aate rehte hain per hamein apni cycle hamesha balance karke chalani hoti hai.
Viraat: Thanks bhai.

They hugged. Viren is always a guide, an instructor, a mentor in his life. Without him, he wouldn't have achieve anything nor he would have the strengths to face all the odds in life.
Inder, daddaji and Viren left for the office as they were getting quite late.

Viraat went to take up the keys from Viren's room. Before coming outside the room his eyes struck on the photo frame on the study table. It was a beautiful pic of Viren-Jeevika on their wedding.

Viraat: Bhai Bhabhi kitne khush lag rahe hain saath main. Kaash main aur maan-
He stopped in mid-way as he realized what he was about to say. Did he really wish he and his partner together forever? Or it was just another thought?
Again he chose to avoid these vague questions roaming in his mind. For this he placed the frame on its place and went to his room to fetch his all time favorite guitar.
As he came in the living room he saw that his sweet bhabhi was standing with a bowl in it. Maanvi, kadambari, vanshika and bua all stood besides her.

Viraat: Relax everyone. Main koi jang ke nahi jaraha sirf ek stupid sa audition dene jaraha hu.
Vanshika: Chup kar aise nahi bolte.
Viraat: Acha baba sorry.
Jeevika: Devar ji yeh khaiye.
Viraat: Bhabhi yeh kya hai
Jeevika: Dahi cheeni. Kissi ache kaam karne se pehle yeh kha lena chahiye.
Viraat: As u wish bhabhi. Waise main in sab baton pe believe nahi karta per aap ke liye kha leta hu.
Jeevika fed him some of it. Viraat took blessings from everyone while Maanvi wished him.
He left.

Vanshika and Bua also left for their rooms to rest, kadambari had to watch her show on tv so Jeevika Maanvi also sat besides her.

Maanvi: Chachi aapko yeh saas bahu wale drame pasand hain.
KD: Hayee ni. Yeh toh mera favorite drama hai ek episode bhi iski maine miss nahi ki.
Maanvi: Iss se acha toh ek sec.
She changed the channel.
Maanvi: Dekho abhi bhi laga hai. Kitni lambi umar hai. Kaash yeh aise hi hamesha chalta raha.
Jeevika: Kya fazool drama hai. Love stories tv per itna barha charha ke dekhate hain. Asal main aisa nahi hota.
Maanvi: Oh acha Di. Aisa nahi toh kaise hota hai. Aapko toh ab tak experience ho chuka hoga.
Jeevika: Pyaar bahut hi khobsurat ehsaas hota hai. Na jaane kab uska bulava ajai. Pyaar age, height, weight aur distance dekh ke nahi hota. Sab kehte hain love is blind per agar aisa hota toh do dil ek jaan kaise hote.

Maanvi was listening to all this very carefully. Deep down in her heart, she also wanted to feel how love is. What love is all about.
Maanvi: Aur di
Jeevika: Pyaar ki pehli sedhi hoti hai larai.
Maanvi (thought): Jaise main aur Viraat karte hain. Har waqt sirf larte hi rehte hain.

Jeevika: Dushmani ke baad wohi log dost ban jate hain. Itne ache dost keh koi unhe alag nahi kar sakta.
Maanvi( thought): Mujhe aur Viraat ko bhi koi alag nahi kar sakta. Akhir partners hain hum.

Jeevika: Larai aur dosti ke baad pyaar ek dum se bin bulai mehmaan ki tarah zindagi main aata hai aur zindagi hi badal deta hai.
Maanvi: Zindagi kaise badal jati hai
Jeevika: Life ko dekhna ka nazariya hi change hojata hai. Phool aur khile khile lagne lagte hain, unki khushboo kuch zyada hi pasand aane lagti hai, barish ke saath hawaien aur thandi lagne lagti hai, chand ki roshni pyaari lagne lagti hai, lagta hai aasmaan main kai aur sitare agai. Kissi ki buri baat bhi achi lagne lagti hai. Raatoon ki neend subah ka chain ur sa jata hai. Har jagah sirf woh hi woh dikhai deta hai. Uski awaz meethe sur ki tarah kanoon main ghul jati hai. Khawaboon ki duniya ab boring lagne lagti hai.

Maanvi: Yeh kyun
Jeevika: Issliye kyun real life khawaboon ki life se zyada khobsurat hojati hai.

Maanvi: Iss ke baad
Jeevika: Iss ke baad kya kuch nahi. Phir shaadi bache aur the end.
KD: Jeevika tune toh 3 ghante ki film 3 minute main Maanvi ko samjha di. Oye Maanvi tuje kab se yeh pyaar waar main interest hone laga.
Maanvi: Main...woh...mujhe...Mujhe koi interest nahi hai yeh DDLJ wale concept pe. Main bina love ke bhi bari mast hu.
Jeevika: Per mohabbat hi insaan ko poora karti hai.
Maanvi: Ab yeh mohabbat pyaar apne aur jiju tak hi rakho ap dono sweet lagte ho is main agar main ne aur Vir-
KD: Kya bola Vir kya
Jeevika: Vir kya Maanu
Maanvi (her brain starting working very fastly but still she was unable to find answer) Vir kya
Jeevika: Wohi toh tujhse pocha na. Bata
Maanvi: Batati hu na. Mai hi batao gi aur kon batane wala hai.
KD: Toh gol gol kyun ghuma rahi hai sedhe se jawab de na
Maanvi: Gol gol kahan aap toh wohi baith ho.

She started laughing but seeing that both were serious she stopped in between.
Maanvi: Vir matlab Veeru. Mere favorite drama ka hero. Main yeh kh rahi thi keh main aur veeru toh aisa nahi kare ge na.
KD: Lai yeh baat thi. Tussi baat karo ab main toh chali ji.
Jeevika: Maanu ab teri tabiyat kaisi hai
Maanvi: Main ek dum thek hu
Jeevika: Jab tu behosh hui tha na toh main bahut dar gai thi.
Maanvi: Di itni chinta na kya karo. Warna toh mujhe dar hai
Jeevika: Kya
Maanvi: Keh kahin aapke bache aapko chinta-Mom na bulane lage
Jeevika: Tu bhi na har waqt masti karti rehti hai
Maanvi: Yehi toh life ka funda hai di. Khud hanso aur dosro ko zyada hansaoon.
Ting tong
Jeevika: Main dekhti hu
Maanvi: Choro na di aapke ghar main itne nokar hai koi na koi toh darwaza khol de ga
Jeevika: Thek hai Maanvi ji jaisa aap kahein.
Maanvi: Khush raho beta. Hehehe
Ting tong
Jeevika: Dekh ab toh jaane de.
Maanvi: Jao di jao. Behn ki koi fikar hi nahi.
Jeevika: Aisi baat nahi hai.
Maanvi: Aare meri bholi di main mazak kar rahi thi. Jao pehle darwaza khol lo. Dekh lena kahin saiyaan ji na aai ho aapki yaad main.
Jeevika: Maanu

She went to open the door. Maanvi thought what was she feeling.

Yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai. Subah mera aur Viraat ka takrana accident tha per pata nahi kyun aisa laga keh woh pal tham jai. Uska haath cho bhi jata hai toh dharkane dorni lagti hai. Uski aankhoon main doobne ka man karta hai. Yeh sab toh wohi baatein hai jo di ne abhi boli. Main us waqt bhi Viraat ka naam lene wali thi per aisa kyun hua. Kahin mujhe bhi pyaar toh nahi. Nahi maanvi lagta hai yeh sab medicines ke side effects hain. Oh yaad aaya main ne dawai toh li hi nahi.
She opened the drawer and ate her routine medicines. As soon as she finishe her last one she heard Jeevika calling her to come in drawing room. In few seconds her room was empty.

Jeevika opened the door only to find 3 people standing in front of her. One looked the father, another mother of the guy in jeans and t-shirt. They have asked to meet Maanvi Chaudhry so she had to call her.
Maanvi came in no time.
Maanvi: Kya hua di. Kon aaya hai
Jeevika: Pata nahi maanu. Yeh keh rahe the keh tujhse milna hai. Tu jaanti hai kya inhe.

Maanvi looked all three of them from top to bottom which they find little awkward.
Maanvi: Nahi di. Kon hain aap log kon hain
Older man: You don't know me.
Women: Obviously tumhe kon pehchaane ga. Yeh roz roz zoo thori na jate hain
Man: What do you mean Annie? Sirf tumhi aisi baatein karti ho warna everyone is so nice to me.
Women: Really
Man: Really

Boy: Stop it Mom and Dad.
(Addressing to Maanvi and Jeevika) Sorry about them.
Jeevika: Per aap log hain kon
Boy: Mera naam Armaan hai aur yeh mere mom dad. Ananya and bilwander.
Ananya: But you can call me Annie
Bilwander: And call me Billy. Actually Annie ki koi stupid si kitty friend ne Armaan ke rishte ke liye Maanvi Chaudhry ka naam suggest kia tha. So here are we

Jeevika and Maanvi were shocked. Maanvi did not payed full attention to what Beeji said on phone last night because of Viraat. She even did not listened the name of the boy and then she forgot to tell this.
Jeevika: Aiye aap baithiye. Maanu chal tu mere saath.

They sat on the sofa whereas Jeevika literally dragged Maanvi to a side.
Jeevika: Yeh kya hai maanvi tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi
Maanvi: Sorry woh main bhol gai. Kal beeji ne phone pe bataya tha.
Jeevika: Itni bari baat kaise bhol gai. Main na abhi Beeji ko call karti hu. Tu ja unke saath baith.
She called Beeji while Maanvi sat with them.
Billy: Maanvi Tum yahan kyun rehti ho?
Maanvi: Hain?
Armaan: Dad ka matlab hai tum apni behn ke saath rehti ho unki shaadi ke baad Haina Dad?
Billy just nodded.
Maanvi: Meri Di ki bus ek mahina pehle shaadi hui toh main bus kuch hi dino ke liye yahan hu. College khatam hogaya na toh vacations bhi hain.
Ananya: Isske baad aur parhna hai tumhe.
Maanvi: Hame agle pal ka nahi pata toh main future ka kya bol sakti hu.
Ananya: Per tumhe kuch banne ki khwaish toh hogi na.
Maanvi: Mera har ARMAAN meri Di se hi shoru hota hai aur Di pe hi Khatam hota hai.
Armaan: Tum apni Behn se bahut pyaar karti ho na.
Maanvi: Pyaar bahut chota lafz hai, meri zindagi hai Di. Agar mujhe Di ke liye apni zindagi qurbaan bhi karni pari toh hanste hanste kar du gi.
By the way Beeji ne bola tha aap logo ka pardo ka business hai.
Billy: Pardo ka hai nahi tha. Ab main parties jata hu, ananya kitties aur Amy Hospital.
Maanvi: Amy?
Billy: Armaan.
Maanvi: Oh...Per hospital kyun, kya aapko bhi meri tarah
And there she stopped, how can her life's biggest secret come directly in her mouth. She can't tell anyone about it.
Mera matlab hai hospital kyun jate ho
Armaan: I am Dr.Armaan Malik.

Armaan Tu.
Viren came running towards him and he also did the same. In no time he hugged each other.
Viren: Armaan tu yahan kaise woh bhi 6 saal baad.
Armaan: 6 saal nahi, 6 saal 4 mahine 5 din ke baad.
Viren: Tu aaj bhi nahi badla
Armaan: Aap badlane do tab na. I am still cool dude Armaan Malik.

Everyone looked shocked at them that how much they know each other.
Jeevika: Viren ji aap isse kaise jante hain.
Viren: Iss Armaan ko main London main mila tha jab main parhne gaya tha. Bacha tha tab ab toh dekho Doctor ban gaya hai. Armaan yeh meri sweet si loving wife Jeevika bus mahine pehle hi shaadi hui hamari.
Armaan: Haan bataya mujhe Maa...Maan
Maanvi: Maanvi mera naam hai. Are kaise insaan ho tum, ek minute pehle naam bataya tha aur tum bhol gai.
Armaan: Oh hello, tum koi Miss. India nahi ho jiska naam main yaad rakho ga.
Maanvi: Bahut smart samajhte ho tum.
Armaan: Wrong, samjhta nahi. Main smart hu.
Maanvi: Argh. Jiju yeh aap ka friend kaise hosakta hai. Aap itne suljhe hue aur yeh itna
Armaan: Main itna
Maanvi: Tum itne over smart ho, itne over confident ho, smart ho nahi bus samajhte ho.

Listening to their bickering everyone Chachi, Vanshika, Bua gathered in the living area.
Viren: Tum dono chup raho ge. Maanvi tum Armaan ke saath toh aise lar rahi hu jaise Viraat ke saath larti ho.
Hearing the name Viraat, her heart started beating at super fast speed.
Armaan: Viraat aapka bhai na.
Viren: Haan, my kid brother.
Armaan: Acha toh Maanvi Ji aap har kissi se aise hi baat karti hain.
Maanvi: Nahi sirf unse aise baat karti hu jo mujhe over smart lagte hain.
Armaan: Matlab tumne mana toh keh main smart hu.
Maanvi: Main ne over bhi bola saath. Ek doctor ho phir bhi kaan kharab hai.
Viren: Chup.
He shouted making both silent.
Viren: Mujhe pehle sab ko introduce toh karwane do phir lar lena.
Armaan: Sure
He glanced at Maanvi who licked her tongue at him. He did the same.
Viren: Yeh meri Maa, yeh meri chachi aur yeh meri Bua. Aur yeh hai Armaan wohi jo London main mujhe mila tha.
He took the blessings from all.
Viren: Aur iss se toh tum mil hi chuke ho.
He pointed at Maanvi.
Armaan: Yeah. Apki wife ki sister.
Maanvi: In short Jiju ki sali.
Armaan: Yeh meri mom Ananya aur yeh mere Dad Bilwander aka Billy.
Jeevika: Aap log baith jai main kuch khaane peene ko laati hu.
All sat except Armaan and Maanvi. Maanvi had the reason because there was not much space for her to sit but Armaan had no such reason.
Armaan: Maanvi tum pair kharab hain kya
Maanvi: Nahi toh
Armaan: Phir tumhare haath main dard hai
Maanvi: Nahi Kyun
Armaan: Tumhari Di khane lene jarahi hai toh tum yahan kyun ho jao na tum bhi
Maanvi: Thanks itni care dikhane ke liye. Meri marzi jao ya na jao.
Armaan: Seedhe se bolo tumhe kuch kaam waam karna nahi aata.
Maanvi: Tumhe jaise bara aata hai na
Armaan: Haan tumse toh zyada hi aata hai.
All were enjoying their talk but their was one person who did not like it. Viraat. Who was standing on the door witnessing them.
Maanvi main ne tumhari jagah kissi ko nahi di per tumne meri jagah kissi aur ko kaise de di.