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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Wow Superb update dear:-):-):-) loving it:-)

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Awesome update
Finally sharon told rey that she didn't want to be with him.Still he have a hope I second sowmya Hope he hook up with kria soon..:p.
Misunderstanding lol I think they can't live without it.
Waiting for next part

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Oh thank God she said no to Rey... 😃
I really loved this update Mihika...
Looking forward to,how Sharon convinces Swayam... 😊
hugs...

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Awesome update 😊

hoping that Sharon would confess to Swayam

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

The first expression after reading the part sharon told no to rey was 🥳Srry yaar I dont like sharon and rey, sharon is only for swayama😃

Dear as ususal one of the best update ever, I have told you before that this is close to my heart and always will be cos it has captured the swaron essense. Your writings mashallah, it is awesome. Swayam's indifferent attitude and sharon 's dilema is so well described. Poor swayam🥺, he heard the wrong thing,..well i hope sharon will bring back his smile and happiness waise, he has a very tough life at his aunts place, I love swayam but in this story I love him all the more. Poor chap,what a lousy aunt. The last part where sharon wanted to talk to him beforehand made just awww, Superb is just a samll word deaar, it is awesomeee and sooo realistic. Loved it so much.

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

it was awesome update
swayam already love her but finally sharon came to know she love swayam
but i think ur doing them mountain of mus
sometime swayam misunderstand her nd sometime she
pls relieved them
sharey convo is nice nd clear bt in d end one more mu
but by d way amazing update

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

I loved this part Mihika...😊

Starting when sharon was feeling uncomfortable in rey's presence...and she bursted out telling him a "No" directly...it was so like sharon, the diva...
the best part i liked here was sharon confused about her feelings towards swayam...she asking herself various questions figuring out her state of mind...ahh its so common when u just start feeling for someone and u just put into words brilliantly...
also not to forget the way u presented swayam's pain as well...all in all it was awesome...
eagerly waiting for the next part...😳

ps; HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!