Game or Love-MG FF#6 Epilogue/pg113-Apr 02 - Page 61

@tellyme : amazing ff dear..enjoyd reading it alot..

It was nice read over all.

Of course hated Maan like anything. I wont call him wrong in the start phase of MG's journey cos he never lied was always cleared about his wants n expectations from their relationship. But the way he humilaited her in front of everyone n broke up without giving any explanation made me first time call him unfair. But later he really crossed his limits after the 3 yeara leap parts started. I literally started to hate him so much that even Geet's love for him made me hate her too.

Even in her depression she was only thinking about him n could not hate him which made it look unreal to me. I feel in real life at least no one could love one person who is so selfish n has given only pain n immense hurt. So her love for him even after everything he did to her specially in her pregnancy period made me feel she is actually obssessed with Maan. I would rather call it obssession rather than selfless love.

Also though I love reading dark stories but only when every characters gets justiced n the sinners are redeemed. Here I felt Maan wasnt redeemed at all. I was happy with the way the story was shaping until you decided to not make Maan gloomy not giving him pain of whatever he did taking the FF positively suddenly. It dint went well with me at least. Cos I do think in those 2 years when he got to know the real truth n he changed as a person n took Geet's every wrong behavior, he never realized thr depth of her pain. I was happy when Geet asked to keep their relation only physical n no emotional attachment with each other cos I then felt he will now understand her pain. Pain of being used n love only physically when you love that person emotionally too but you are asked to only have physical relation. Only then he would have really redeemed for me had he went through each n every pain he gave her n also it would been then felt real to see him trying to bring Geet out of depression. Realizing her pain n understanding it would have helped him to get back his wife n her trust of him n his love. But suddenlt you made a serious n emotional story into a fairytale which felt a lot unreal to me. People dont come out of depression this easily nor do the sins Maan committed, I felt his redeemtion ended before you even in real started. This story had a lot potential I felt. At least more 20-30 parts could have gone but you ended it abruptly n in a very fairytale manner.

It felt you dint give proper justice to Geet's character after the pain n specially the depression you made her go through. Maan's way to Geet's heart was too easy n simple with no hurdle at all whereas Geet's pain was a lot deep.

Other than that this FF really had a very well written emotions n I myself have cried few times. And every time I was having tears in my eyes, I was only cursing Maan n felt he dint deserve Geet n vice verse. Geet's character was changed completely once she met Maan but Maan was rather pretty much same till the end. Geet's character was week n spineless too which again made me have no respect for her. Bold girl turned into a week girl after falling for Maan n depression stage was really very depressing to the point that I felt I cant take anymore n should quit it but then I knew I would keep thinking about this story n to come out of it I continued reading till it finished.

I'm really sorry if my comment offended you, but even after liking this story till the end I felt a lot disappointed with Maan's character getting no redeemtion.

-Sanjana!